Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more concise and correct small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting example using correct tense and phrasing. Use a linking word to connect the general statement and the example.

Ejemplo: I can sometimes remember my dreams, but not always. For example, I usually recall dreams that are very strange or emotional, such as a recent dream where I was late for work and missed an important meeting, which stayed in my mind all morning.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and separate ideas into two clear sentences: one about not sharing dreams and another about sharing plans. Use linking words to show contrast and add one specific detail about whom you talk to and why.

Ejemplo: I usually don't share my sleeping dreams because they are often strange and hard to explain. However, I do talk to close friends and family about my future plans because they give useful advice and I find other people's ambitions inspiring.

Sugerencia: Make your opinion clearer and avoid vague phrasing like "deep headed message." Use linking words to connect general belief and a specific reason or example. Correct minor grammar issues.

Ejemplo: I think dreams can sometimes reflect our current feelings or worries. For instance, when I'm stressed before exams I often dream that I'm unprepared, which suggests that dreams mirror my emotional state rather than conveying a hidden, profound message.

Sugerencia: This answer repeats previous ideas and doesn't directly address whether you want to make dreams come true (ambitions). First answer the question directly, then briefly explain with a relevant example. Fix grammar and sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do want to make some of my dreams come true, especially my career goals. For example, I hope to become a software engineer, and I work on coding projects and study regularly to turn that dream into reality.

× Well, I can sometimes remember my dreams, but not always.

✓ Well, I can sometimes remember my dreams, but not always.

No correction needed; sentence uses present tense correctly to describe habitual ability.

× Usually I remember them if they are very strange or emotional because those stay in my mind and I once remember the dream about being late for an example, for a whole morning.

✓ Usually I remember them if they are very strange or emotional because those stay in my mind, and I once remembered a dream about being late, for example, for a whole morning.

Errors: incorrect verb tense 'remember' should be past 'remembered' for a specific past event (Past tense issue, ID 5) and 'an example' used incorrectly. Also missing commas. Suggestion: Use past tense for specific past events and correct phrase 'for example' placement.

× I tend to forget normal dreams quickly when I wake up.

✓ I tend to forget ordinary dreams quickly when I wake up.

Original is acceptable, but 'normal' is better as 'ordinary' for natural English. Tense is correct (habitual present). Suggestion: Prefer 'ordinary' for style.

× Well, I usually I don't share my sleeping dreams because there are often strange and hard to explain, but I do tell close friends about my future plans.

✓ Well, I usually don't share my dreams because they are often strange and hard to explain, but I do tell close friends about my future plans.

Errors: extra 'I' after 'usually' (sentence structure error, ID 26). 'Sleeping dreams' is redundant; 'dreams' suffices. 'There are often strange' should be 'they are often strange' (pronoun agreement). Suggestion: Remove duplicate word, use correct subject pronoun and simpler noun.

× I find it helpful to talk about career goals with my family because they give advice and I also like hearing other people's ambitions for inspiration.

✓ I find it helpful to talk about career goals with my family because they give advice, and I also like hearing other people's ambitions for inspiration.

No major grammar error; added comma for clarity. 'Hearing' is correctly used as gerund after 'like'. Suggestion: Keep structure but add comma before conjunction.

× Well, I think dreams can sometimes reflect our feelings or worries.

✓ Well, I think dreams can sometimes reflect our feelings or worries.

Sentence is correct; no article error. It appropriately uses plural 'dreams'.

× When I'm stressed or excited, similar things often appear in my dreams and before exams I usually dream about being unprepared.

✓ When I'm stressed or excited, similar things often appear in my dreams, and before exams I usually dream about being unprepared.

Tenses and verbs are correct; added comma for clarity. No grammatical change necessary.

× So I believe dreams can have meaning about our current emotions, but not always a deep headed message.

✓ So I believe dreams can reflect our current emotions, but they do not always convey a deep-seated message.

Problems: awkward phrase 'have meaning about' and nonstandard 'deep headed'. Suggest using 'reflect' and 'deep-seated message' for natural phrasing. Also change 'not always' placement and add subject 'they' for clarity.

× Well, I think dreams sometimes have special meanings.

✓ Well, I think dreams sometimes have special meanings.

Sentence is correct; present tense expresses general belief appropriately.

× So I had bad dream usually means I anxious about something.

✓ So having a bad dream usually means I'm anxious about something.

Errors: 'I had bad dream' wrong tense and missing articles (Singular and plural issue ID 1 and Past tense ID 5). Also missing 'be' in 'I anxious' (Present tense/verb issue ID 6). Correction uses gerund 'having' to generalize, adds article 'a', and uses contraction 'I'm' for correct verb.

× For example when I had exams I kept dreaming about failing but it showed how nervous I was.

✓ For example, when I had exams I kept dreaming about failing, which showed how nervous I was.

Original mostly correct but needs commas and a clearer connector 'which' instead of 'but it'. Tense 'had' and 'kept dreaming' correctly past; punctuation and clause linkage improved. Suggest adding commas and using 'which' to show result.