Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and use correct verb forms. Start with a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary fillers (uh, umm). Correct grammar: 'I dreamed of becoming a teacher' and 'I don't want to be a teacher now because teaching can be tiring.'

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I dreamed of becoming a teacher. Specifically, I wanted to teach English and Chinese because I enjoyed helping others learn languages. However, now I’ve changed my mind because teaching can be exhausting since you have to speak and explain continuously.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clear sentence structure. Begin with a topic sentence like 'Yes, I used to share my dreams with others.' Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and reduce fillers. Add one specific detail and a linking word to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to share my dreams with others. For example, my teacher once asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up, and I told her I wanted to be a teacher because I liked helping classmates learn.

Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatical. Use a clear topic sentence and explain with one or two specific reasons, connected by linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often show our interests and goals. For instance, my childhood dream of teaching guided my choice to study languages and motivated me to improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Give a clear statement about your current goal, then provide specific actions you are taking, using correct tense and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'create my last job.' Be precise about recent actions and time expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make my dream come true. At the moment, I hope to work in the USA, so I study English every day and recently I quit my previous job three months ago to have more time to prepare and look for opportunities.

× When I was a child, I dreamed to become a teacher to teach students about English or Chinese.

✓ When I was a child, I dreamed of becoming a teacher to teach students English or Chinese.

Use 'dream of' + gerund (verb+ing) to talk about aspirations. 'Dreamed to become' is incorrect. Also use 'becoming' instead of infinitive and omit 'about' before languages.

× But after I grew up, I don't want to be your teacher because I feel your teacher is so tired because you need to continue to speak.

✓ But after I grew up, I didn't want to be a teacher because teachers are so tired since they need to keep speaking.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'After I grew up' sets a past perspective, so use past 'didn't want'. Use plural 'teachers' for general statements (subject-verb agreement). Use 'keep speaking' instead of 'continue to speak' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, uh, when I was a child, my teacher told, umm, asked me uh, what's about my dream, umm, if I uh, be become an adult, I, I answer the question about I want to become a teacher.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my teacher asked me about my dream: if I became an adult, I answered that I wanted to become a teacher.

Use 'ask someone about something' rather than 'told, asked me what's about'. Use correct tense sequence: 'if I became an adult' (past in reported speech) and 'I answered that I wanted' (past). Remove redundant fillers. Use 'asked me about my dream' structure.

× Yes, I believe umm the dream, umm guide me the the direction when I grow up, become being an adult and umm it's the passion that.

✓ Yes, I believe dreams guide me in the right direction as I grow up and become an adult, and they are my passion.

Use plural 'dreams' for general statements. 'Guide me in the right direction' is the correct prepositional phrase. Remove duplicated 'the'. Use simple present 'guide' for habitual/general truth. 'Become being an adult' is ungrammatical; use 'become an adult'. Clarify 'it's the passion that' to 'they are my passion'.

× Yes, for now my dream is to work in the USA so I keep starting English every day and I also create my last job in about 3 months ago so I can focus on.

✓ Yes, right now my dream is to work in the USA, so I study English every day, and I left my last job about three months ago so I can focus on this.

'Keep starting English' is incorrect; use 'study English' or 'keep studying English' (verb+ing). 'Create my last job' is wrong; likely 'left my last job'. Use 'about three months ago' with past simple 'left'. Ensure parallel structure and clarity by specifying 'this' (the goal).