Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp. Trả lời cần một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tiếp theo là 1–2 câu bổ trợ cụ thể. Sửa lỗi như “very busy” (không phù hợp) và “can replace it and my mind” (không rõ nghĩa). Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc, giữ tối đa 4-5 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often remember my dreams, but usually only the vivid ones or those I had recently. For example, when I wake up from a very strange dream, the images stay in my mind for hours. As a result, I sometimes lie awake thinking about the details.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện sự chính xác ngữ pháp nhỏ và liên kết câu mạch lạc hơn. Thay “walking up” bằng “waking up”. Có thể thêm lý do cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn, dùng liên từ như “because” và “so”. Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: I usually don't share my dreams with others because I prefer to keep them private and I often forget them within an hour of waking up. So I rarely tell anyone about them unless the dream was particularly vivid or meaningful.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (loại bỏ lỗi như “can be feel” → “can feel”), rõ ràng hóa ý và tránh câu dài lắp. Sử dụng ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn với các thì chính xác. Dùng liên từ như “for example” để liên kết ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often feel mysterious and sometimes seem to foreshadow events. For example, I once dreamed about meeting an old friend, and a week later we bumped into each other. That experience made me take dreams more seriously.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc, ngữ pháp và nội dung rõ ràng. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp như “It depends” rồi giải thích cụ thể: muốn thực hiện những ước mơ tích cực, không muốn hiện thực hóa cơn ác mộng. Tránh cụm từ vô nghĩa như “ignore ball”. Nên có 2–3 câu, dùng thì phù hợp và từ vựng chính xác.

Ejemplo: It depends on the dream. If it's a positive ambition, like becoming a teacher or traveling the world, I would definitely try to make it come true. However, I would not want to make frightening or dangerous dreams into reality.

× Yes, I can easily remember my dreams, but only when they are very busy or when I had them recently.

✓ Yes, I can easily remember my dreams, but only when they are very vivid or when I have had them recently.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present ability 'can'. Use present perfect 'have had' to indicate recent experience connected to the present; 'very busy' is inappropriate to describe dreams, 'very vivid' is the correct adjective. Suggestion: use present perfect for recent experiences and accurate adjectives.

× For example, I sometimes wake up after a strange memorable dream and can replace it and my mind for hours.

✓ For example, I sometimes wake up after a strange, memorable dream and can replay it in my mind for hours.

The original lacks the correct verb and object: 'replace it and my mind' is incorrect. Use 'replay it in my mind' to express thinking about the dream repeatedly. Also add a comma between adjectives 'strange' and 'memorable'.

× I'm not really keen on sharing my dreams with others because I prefer to keep them and I usually forget them within an hour of walking up.

✓ I'm not really keen on sharing my dreams with others because I prefer to keep them to myself and I usually forget them within an hour of waking up.

Use the correct phrase 'keep them to myself' and the correct verb form 'waking up' (gerund) instead of 'walking up'. 'Walking up' implies physical walking; 'waking up' describes awakening.

× For that reason I rarely tell anyone about them.

✓ For that reason, I rarely tell anyone about them.

Add a comma after the introductory phrase 'For that reason' for clarity. The tense and structure are otherwise correct.

× I think yes because dreams can be feel very mysterious and sometimes seem to predict the real events.

✓ I think so because dreams can feel very mysterious and sometimes seem to predict real events.

Remove the extra verb 'be' before 'feel' ('can feel' is correct). Use 'so' instead of 'yes' in this structure. Also 'the real events' should be 'real events' unless referring to specific events.

× I heard about this from other people I and once I dream about meeting an old friend and then it happens the next week.

✓ I heard about this from other people, and once I dreamed about meeting an old friend and then it happened the next week.

The original has word order errors and tense inconsistencies. Use past simple 'dreamed' and 'happened' for a specific past event. Insert a comma and 'and' to join clauses; remove the stray 'I' after 'people'.

× So I believe dreams can be meaningful.

✓ So I believe dreams can be meaningful.

This sentence is correct grammatically; keep as is. No change needed.

× It depends on the on the their on my dreams because my dreams had many difficult type dreams such as ignore ball or sometimes it's very afraid affairs and dangerous so I want.

✓ It depends on my dreams, because my dreams can be difficult or frightening and sometimes dangerous, so I would not want to pursue some of them.

Original is ungrammatical with repeated words and unclear phrases. 'Depends on the on the their on my dreams' is redundant; simplify to 'depends on my dreams'. Use 'can be difficult or frightening' and 'dangerous' to describe dreams. Use 'would not want to pursue' to express unwillingness. Ensure consistent tense and clear vocabulary.