Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and clear. Start with a concise topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct word choice (e.g. “attention” or “cheers” instead of “attachments”), and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I can remember my dreams. For example, I often dream that I become a professional soccer player and score the winning goals in a big final, which makes the crowd cheer for me. I sometimes wake up feeling inspired to practice more.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, fix grammar and natural phrasing, and provide a clear reason with a linking word. Use specific examples of when you would or would not share a dream.

Ejemplo: Honestly, I usually don't share my dreams with others because they often seem unrealistic to me. For instance, when I dream about flying, I feel embarrassed to tell friends, although I sometimes mention funny dreams to close family.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons and give a specific example of how a dream might reflect goals or worries. Avoid vague phrases and keep it concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect our goals or worries. For example, if I dream about taking an important exam, it usually shows I'm anxious about preparations and reminds me to study harder.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use correct grammar and linking words to show contrast (e.g. “however”), and provide a specific plan or reaction despite obstacles. Mention what you can still do to pursue the dream to show resilience.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because I admire several professional players and would like to play alongside them. However, because of some health issues I face, it may be difficult; therefore, I focus on training within my limits and coaching younger players to stay involved in the sport.

× Yes, I remember, I remember a dream that I became a soccer player and I got a lot of attachments on the soccer field and also can be a legend for the Cup.

✓ Yes, I remember. I had a dream that I became a soccer player, I received a lot of attention on the soccer field, and I could become a legend for the Cup.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'I remember, I remember a dream that I became' is repetitive and awkward; use past simple 'I had a dream' to describe a past dream. 'I got a lot of attachments' uses the wrong noun; 'attention' is correct. 'and also can be a legend' mixes modal and tense; use 'could become' or 'would be' to express possibility. Also punctuation was needed to separate clauses. Suggestion: avoid repetition, choose correct nouns (attention), and keep consistent tense and modal verbs.

× To be honestly, I'd not like to share a dream with other because for some time I may think the dream is unrealistic and sometimes I may think that is very funny and it is not very easy to share with other.

✓ To be honest, I do not like to share my dreams with others because sometimes I think the dream is unrealistic, and other times I think it is very silly, so it is not easy to share them with others.

Errors: 'To be honestly' should be 'To be honest' (adjective vs adverb misuse). 'I'd not like' is an unnatural contraction for refusal; use 'I do not like' or 'I would not like' depending on meaning. 'other' used as singular incorrect; use 'others'. 'for some time' is wrong context; use 'sometimes'. 'may' is a modal expressing possibility but repetitive and weak here; use 'sometimes' or 'other times' for frequency. 'that is very funny' should be 'it is very silly' or 'funny' and maintain pronoun reference. Also plural 'dreams' and 'them'. Suggestion: use appropriate modal or simple present for habits, correct pronouns and plurality, and natural collocations.

× I think dream has special meanings because dream can react something you very hard to finish or trying to do in the in your life and the dream can help you to finish the goal you want to be.

✓ I think dreams have special meanings because dreams can reflect things you work very hard to finish or are trying to do in your life, and dreams can help you achieve the goals you want.

Errors: 'I think dream has' — singular/plural and agreement issue; use 'dreams have' or 'a dream has'. 'dream can react something' uses wrong verb; 'reflect' or 'represent' is correct. 'you very hard to finish or trying to do' is ungrammatical: use 'you work very hard to finish or are trying to do'. 'the in your life' has extra article and preposition; remove 'the' and extra 'in'. 'help you to finish the goal you want to be' is awkward; use 'help you achieve the goals you want'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, choose correct verbs (reflect, achieve), and keep parallel structure.

× Yes, I want to make my dream come true. This is because there are some players I very admire and I really want to play with them. But unfortunately there are some health situation for me and it is hard to make the dream come true.

✓ Yes, I want to make my dream come true. This is because there are some players I really admire, and I really want to play with them. But unfortunately I have some health issues, and it is hard to make the dream come true.

Errors: 'I very admire' uses wrong adverb placement and intensity; 'I really admire' is natural. 'there are some health situation for me' has number and word choice errors; use plural 'health issues' and the verb 'I have'. The original used awkward 'there are' for a personal condition; use 'I have' for clarity. Suggestion: correct adverb placement ('really admire'), use appropriate noun ('health issues'), and use direct subject 'I' with 'have'.