Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct grammar (e.g. "I don't usually remember my dreams") and limit to 2–3 supporting sentences. Replace vague phrases like "kinda nonsense to some certain extent" with clearer descriptions (e.g. "they're usually weird and forgettable").

Ejemplo: I don't usually remember my dreams. When I do, they're often strange and fragmented, so I quickly forget them by the time I wake up.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer followed by a brief reason using correct structure and linking words. Avoid repeating earlier words exactly; instead, rephrase concisely. Use natural collocations ("feel the urge to share").

Ejemplo: No, I rarely share my dreams because they seem meaningless to me. Besides, I don't think anyone would find them interesting.

Sugerencia: Give a balanced, organized response: state your general view, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitations and repetition, and correct grammar ("the future," "they do not"). Use linking words like "however" to contrast your personal experience with the general idea.

Ejemplo: It depends. Some people believe dreams can reflect future events or trigger feelings like déjà vu; however, in my case my dreams are usually random and seem to have no clear meaning.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and explain briefly with a clear reason. Avoid unclear or inappropriate words ("********") and unnecessary repetition. Use a short consequence sentence to explain why making them come true would be undesirable.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't want that. My dreams are often chaotic and unrealistic, and if they actually happened it would probably cause confusion and problems in real life.

× Honestly, no, I didn't have any recollections of my dream and actually my dreams are kinda nonsense to some certain extent and so that I don't really like remember any of them.

✓ Honestly, no, I don't remember my dreams; they are usually nonsense to some extent, so I don't really remember any of them.

This sentence has multiple issues: tense inconsistency (past 'didn't have' vs general present), awkward phrasing ('so that I don't really like remember'), and redundant expressions. Change 'didn't have any recollections of my dream' to present simple 'I don't remember my dreams' because the question asks about general ability to remember dreams. Replace 'kinda' with 'usually' or 'are usually nonsense', remove 'to some certain extent' (use 'to some extent'), and simplify 'so that I don't really like remember any of them' to 'so I don't really remember any of them'. Also use a semicolon or separate clauses to avoid a run-on sentence.

× Absolutely not. As I said above, my dreams are often kind of nonsense so that I do not like feel the urge to share my dreams with others.

✓ Absolutely not. As I said above, my dreams are often nonsense, so I do not feel the urge to share them with others.

The phrase 'do not like feel' is incorrect; use 'do not feel'. 'Kind of' is informal and unnecessary. 'Share my dreams with others' can be shortened to 'share them with others'. Remove 'so that' and use 'so' to link the clauses. These changes correct verb usage and improve preposition/object reference clarity.

× I think it kind of depends, like some dreams can anticipate the upcoming events or the futures or someone can experience a symptom called deja vu.

✓ I think it kind of depends; some dreams can anticipate upcoming events or a person can experience a symptom called deja vu.

The phrase 'the futures' is incorrect; use 'future' or 'upcoming events'. 'Someone can experience' is better as 'a person can experience' for formality. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. This fixes the incorrect noun form and improves cohesion.

× But for me my dreams are kinda nonsense and they they do not really have any meanings.

✓ But for me, my dreams are nonsense and they do not really have any meaning.

Duplicate word 'they they' must be removed. 'Kinda' is informal; replace with 'are'. 'Meanings' should be uncountable here: use 'meaning'. Add a comma after introductory phrase 'But for me'. These changes fix redundancy and noun number usage.

× Absolutely not. As I said above, my dreams are really nonsense and it's kind of ******** to some certain extent, and if my dreams ever came true, it could be a total mess.

✓ Absolutely not. As I said above, my dreams are really nonsense and it's kind of chaotic to some extent, and if my dreams ever came true, it would be a total mess.

'Came true' in a conditional sentence should pair with 'would' not 'could' for a real or likely result; 'could' can be acceptable but 'would' is more direct. Use 'would be' to match the conditional form. Replace 'to some certain extent' with 'to some extent' and change '********' to an appropriate adjective like 'chaotic'. Also 'are really nonsense' should be 'are really nonsense' is awkward—better 'are nonsense' but kept close to original. These edits correct conditional verb usage and awkward phrasing.