Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn, rút ngắn và rõ ràng (1 câu chủ đề), sau đó cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết mạch lạc. Tránh sử dụng nhiều từ đệm (umm, uh) và lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như "I am able to" nên là "I can" hay "I’m able to"; dùng thì phù hợp: "when I go into deep sleep". Giữ không quá 5 câu.

Ejemplo: I usually can't remember my dreams because I forget them shortly after waking up. For example, even if a dream felt vivid, the details fade within minutes, so I rarely recall them later.

Sugerencia: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc và từ vựng chính xác; tránh dịch trực tiếp không rõ nghĩa ("Brighten" không rõ ngữ cảnh). Nên nêu rõ cách bạn chia sẻ (viết, nói) và tần suất, kèm ví dụ. Hạn chế tiếng ừ à, và sửa ngữ pháp: "books related to my dreams" và "I usually post them on my Facebook page."

Ejemplo: Yes, I often share my dreams by writing short stories or posts about them. For instance, if a dream inspires a scene, I write it down and post it on my Facebook page once or twice a month.

Sugerencia: Cần cấu trúc rõ: nêu quan điểm, giải thích và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và danh từ số nhiều: "in Vietnamese culture, dreams are seen as symbols"; hoàn thành ý cuối cùng. Tránh ngắt quãng và dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (because, so, for example).

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings. In Vietnamese culture, people often see dreams as symbolic messages from ancestors, so I try to remember them and sometimes ask elders to help interpret a particularly vivid dream.

Sugerencia: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh câu hỏi tu từ không chính xác ngữ pháp ("Who don't" → "Who wouldn't"). Sửa ngữ pháp: "I always dream of having an expensive car." Thêm chi tiết về kế hoạch hoặc lý do để phong phú câu trả lời và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to make my dreams come true. For example, I dream of owning an expensive car, and to achieve that I plan to save money and work extra hours until I can afford it.

× Well, I don't think I am able to remember the dreams I had because when I go to a deep sleep I almost cannot remember what I am dreaming. So yeah.

✓ Well, I don't think I am able to remember the dreams I have because when I go into deep sleep I almost cannot remember what I am dreaming.

The speaker mixes past ('had') and present continuous ('am dreaming') in a context about general ability to remember dreams. Use present perfect ('have') to refer to dreams experienced recently or generally; use 'go into deep sleep' instead of 'go to a deep sleep' for correct preposition and idiom. Also remove the extra article 'a' before 'deep sleep'. Suggestion: Use consistent present or present perfect tense for habitual situations: 'I don't think I can remember the dreams I have' and use 'go into deep sleep.'

× Yeah, I think so. I really love umm, translate my dreams into words like umm, Brighten, uh, some books that related to my dreams and I usually post it, uh, post them on my Facebook page.

✓ Yeah, I think so. I really love translating my dreams into words, like writing about them in books related to my dreams, and I usually post them on my Facebook page.

After 'love' we need the gerund form ('translating'), not the base verb 'translate'. 'Some books that related to my dreams' needs a relative clause with a verb: 'books related to my dreams' or 'books that are related to my dreams'. Also pronoun agreement: 'post it, post them' should consistently be 'post them'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'love' and ensure relative clauses include correct verb forms; keep pronouns consistent with plural 'dreams'.

× Yeah, I believe so, because in Vietnam culture, dreams is umm, dreams are symbolized for some message that came from our ancestor. So I usually try to remember my dreams as a way to.

✓ Yeah, I believe so, because in Vietnamese culture, dreams are symbols of messages that come from our ancestors. So I usually try to remember my dreams as a way to do that.

Subject-verb agreement: 'dreams is' should be 'dreams are'. Use correct adjectival form 'Vietnamese culture' not 'Vietnam culture'. 'Symbolized for' is incorrect; use 'are symbols of' or 'symbolize'. 'Came' should be present tense 'come' for a general belief, and 'ancestor' should be plural 'ancestors'. The sentence 'as a way to' is incomplete; add 'do that' or 'remember them'. Suggestion: Match plural subjects with plural verbs and use correct prepositions ('symbols of'); keep tense consistent for general truths.

× Yes, I think so. I mean who don't want to make the dreams come true? Like I always dreams for having a expensive car and I really really want to get it.

✓ Yes, I think so. I mean who doesn't want to make their dreams come true? For example, I always dream of having an expensive car and I really, really want to get one.

Singular/plural and agreement: 'who don't' should be 'who doesn't' (singular 'who' with third person singular). 'Make the dreams come true' is better as 'make their dreams come true' to match general subject. 'I always dreams' should be 'I always dream' (singular subject with base verb). Use 'dream of' rather than 'dreams for having'. Article: 'a expensive car' should be 'an expensive car'. Also replace 'get it' with 'get one' for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb agreement, choose proper verb-preposition combinations ('dream of'), and use 'a' vs 'an' correctly.