Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (gender pronouns, tense), avoid unnecessary phrases like “Once Upon a dream,” and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and give one specific example with concise detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often remember my dreams. For example, once I dreamed I was eating at a restaurant in Shanghai when a beautiful stranger invited me to join her; it felt very romantic and vivid.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid contradictory connectors (e.g., “but however”). Begin with a clear statement, then give a brief reason and one specific example of who you share with. Use correct vocabulary (‘people’ or ‘friends’ instead of ‘streams’).

Ejemplo: Yes, I share some dreams on social media and sometimes tell my mother; however, I usually only discuss dreams with very close friends because they understand me better.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and coherence: give one clear opinion, then explain with a specific, logically connected example. Avoid sentence fragments and repetitive phrases; use linking words like “for example” and “so” correctly.

Ejemplo: I think some dreams can have special meanings, but not all of them. For example, dreaming about failing an exam often motivates me to study harder in real life, so I treat that type of dream as a warning.

Sugerencia: Clarify what you mean by ‘dreams’ (ambitions vs. nocturnal dreams). Provide a focused topic sentence and one specific example of a real goal you want to achieve, explaining briefly how you plan to make it happen.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make some of my ambitions come true, especially academic goals. For instance, I hope to score high on real exams like I did in my dreams, so I plan to revise regularly and practice past papers.

× Yes, I often remember the dreams that I had.

✓ Yes, I often remember the dreams I had.

The phrase 'that I had' is grammatical but wordy; omitting 'that' improves naturalness. No tense change needed; keep simple past for recalled dreams.

× For example, Once Upon a dream when I went to the restaurant in Shanghai, a stranger girl who was very pretty invited me for a meal.

✓ For example, once during a dream, when I went to a restaurant in Shanghai, a strange girl who was very pretty invited me to a meal.

Use lowercase 'once' and rephrase 'Once Upon a dream' to 'once during a dream' for idiomatic usage. 'a restaurant' is correct article use. 'stranger girl' is incorrect collocation; use 'strange girl' or better 'a girl I did not know'. Use 'invited me to a meal' or 'invited me for a meal' — 'to a meal' is more natural here.

× He was quite a romantic dream.

✓ It was quite a romantic dream.

Dreams are inanimate; use the pronoun 'it' not 'he'. This corrects pronoun agreement with the noun 'dream'.

× I do share my dreams with my social media friends sometimes as well as my mother, but however I have little interest in other streams except for extremely close friends.

✓ I do share my dreams with my social media friends sometimes and with my mother, but I have little interest in other people's dreams except for extremely close friends.

Remove redundant connectors ('as well as' and 'however' together) and use 'and' for coordination. 'Other streams' is wrong collocation; intended 'other people's dreams'. Use possessive 'people's' and 'except for' is fine. Also place 'sometimes' in a natural position.

× I think that some dreams do have special meanings, but not all of them have special meanings.

✓ I think that some dreams do have special meanings, but not all of them do.

Repeating 'have special meanings' is redundant. Shorten to 'not all of them do' to avoid repetition and improve flow.

× For example. If I took the exam in my dream that mean. That I'll have to study harder.

✓ For example, if I dream that I took an exam, it means I have to study harder.

Original has fragmentary sentences and tense inconsistency. Use conditional present: 'if I dream that I took an exam' is acceptable, but better is 'if I dream that I took an exam' or 'if I dream about taking an exam'. Use 'it means' for general present-tense interpretation and 'I have to study harder' for consequence.

× Yes, I want to make some of my dreams come true, that's for sure.

✓ Yes, I want to make some of my dreams come true; that's for sure.

Grammatically okay; replace comma splice with a semicolon (or period) to join two independent clauses correctly. Tense and modal use are appropriate.

× For example, I did really well on some of my exams in my dreams regarding examination.

✓ For example, I did really well on some exams in my dreams about exams.

'In my dreams regarding examination' is awkward. Use 'in my dreams about exams' or 'in my exam-related dreams'. Keep past tense 'did' to describe dream content; simplify phrasing for clarity.