DreamsPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Candidato

No, I can't because I tend to forget my dream soon after I wake up, so if I want to remember my dream, I could not do it.

Examinador

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Candidato

Yes I do, I share my dream with my friends because they have different interruption so it make it sometimes makes me feel motivated and boost my mood.

Examinador

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Candidato

Yes, I think so. I think my dream reflects our feelings. For example, if I worry about my exam or test, I could have bad dream.

Examinador

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Candidato

It depends on the kind of dreams. For example, if I had a bad dream, I hoped that it's dream is not come true. But if I had happy dreams, I love it to come true.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Puntuación: 62.0

Sugerencia: 答えは直接的で意味は通じますが、冗長な表現や文法ミス(時制・不自然な表現)があり、流暢さと語彙の範囲を広げる余地があります。具体的には『tend to forget my dream soon after I wake up』で十分伝えられるため、繰り返しの部分("so if I want to remember my dream, I could not do it")を削り、代わりに短い理由や頻度を付け加えると良いです。また、リンク語(for example, usually, often)を使って論理的に繋げてください。練習では正しい時制(present simple)を意識し、1〜2の具体的な detail を加えて自然な5文以内にまとめましょう。

Ejemplo: I usually can’t remember my dreams because I tend to forget them shortly after waking up. Sometimes I try to recall them by staying still when I wake up, but it rarely works. As a result, I only remember dreams on rare occasions.

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: 内容は伝わりますが文法("interruption" → おそらく"interpretations"、動詞の一致、語順)の誤りと冗長さが目立ちます。理由を述べるときは明確な語彙(interpretation, opinion)を使い、リンク語(because, so, which)で文をつなぎましょう。また感情や具体例(友達の反応や具体的な夢の話)を一つ添えると説得力が増します。文は3文以内で簡潔に。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often share my dreams with friends because they give different interpretations. Their comments sometimes motivate me or cheer me up. For example, one friend once pointed out a positive meaning in a strange dream, which made me feel better.

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Puntuación: 68.0

Sugerencia: 良い構成でトピックに直接答えていますが、繰り返し("I think" を2回)と語法("my dream reflects our feelings" は主語の一致が不自然)があるため注意が必要です。一般化する場合は"dreams reflect people’s feelings"や"our dreams often reflect emotions"のように表現を整理しましょう。例も具体的で適切なので、リンク語(for example, because)と簡潔な理由を加え、5文以内に収めてください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe dreams often have meanings because they can reflect our emotions. For example, when I’m worried about an exam, I sometimes have nightmares. This suggests that stress can influence what we dream about.

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 答えは概ね明確ですが、時制や語法のミス("if I had" と仮定法の混乱、"it's dream is not come true" の誤り)があり、表現を簡潔に整える必要があります。条件を述べるときは現在の習慣や希望を示す現在形や助動詞(would, might)を適切に使い、同様の意味を短く2~3文でまとめてください。また、具体例(どんな良い夢を実現したいか)を一つ添えると良い印象を与えます。

Ejemplo: It depends on the dream. I wouldn’t want a bad or frightening dream to come true, but I’d love for positive dreams—like achieving a career goal—to happen. For instance, if I dreamed about getting a scholarship, I would work hard to make it real.

Gramática

Present tense issue

× No, I can't because I tend to forget my dream soon after I wake up, so if I want to remember my dream, I could not do it.

No, I can't because I tend to forget my dreams soon after I wake up, so if I want to remember my dreams, I cannot do it.

The sentence mixes tenses and modal forms incorrectly. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I tend to forget my dreams'. Use plural 'dreams' with 'forget' for general reference (see singular/plural but mainly present tense). 'Could not' indicates past ability; the correct present inability is 'cannot' or 'cannot do it'. Improve by keeping present tense and using 'cannot' for present inability.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yes I do, I share my dream with my friends because they have different interruption so it make it sometimes makes me feel motivated and boost my mood.

Yes, I do. I share my dreams with my friends because they have different interpretations, so it sometimes makes me feel motivated and boosts my mood.

Several word choice and agreement issues: 'interruption' is incorrect; the intended word is 'interpretations' (noun). Use plural 'dreams' for general habits. 'So it make it sometimes makes' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'so it sometimes makes me' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'it makes' and 'boosts my mood' (third-person singular 'boosts'). Also add punctuation to separate sentences.

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think so. I think my dream reflects our feelings. For example, if I worry about my exam or test, I could have bad dream.

Yes, I think so. I think my dreams reflect our feelings. For example, if I worry about an exam or test, I could have a bad dream.

Use plural 'dreams' for general statements. 'Reflects' should agree with plural 'dreams' -> 'reflect'. However because the subject 'I think my dreams' is plural, use 'reflect'. Also article use: 'a bad dream' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Keep the conditional/modal 'could have' is acceptable here for possibility.

Past tense issue

× It depends on the kind of dreams. For example, if I had a bad dream, I hoped that it's dream is not come true. But if I had happy dreams, I love it to come true.

It depends on the kind of dreams. For example, if I have a bad dream, I hope that its dream will not come true. But if I have happy dreams, I want them to come true.

Tense and pronoun errors: Use present tense 'have' to match the general question. 'Hoped' is past tense; use present 'hope'. 'It's dream is not come true' is ungrammatical: 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is' and incorrect possessive; use the possessive 'its' and the correct verb form 'will not come true'. For the second clause, use 'want them to come true' rather than 'love it to come true'. Ensure pronoun number matches ('dreams' -> 'them').

Vocabulario

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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