Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 話し方を自然で明確にし、文法と語彙の誤りを直すことが必要です。具体的には、過去の習慣や願望を述べるときは過去形・過去進行形や適切な表現（e.g. “when I was a child”, “I used to have big dreams”）を使い、不要なフィラー（uh, umm）を減らしてください。また“payment”ではなく“salary”や“income”など文脈に合う語を選び、文を2〜4文で簡潔にまとめてください。

Ejemplo: Yes, I can. When I was a child I used to have big dreams. I wanted to become a doctor because it paid well, and many people in my town wanted the same career at that time.

Sugerencia: 答えは明確ですが、理由の説明で論理のつながりをより自然に示す必要があります。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を適切に使い、文化的背景を具体例で補足すると説得力が増します。語彙は問題ないので、冗長を避けて2〜3文にまとめてください。

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't share my dreams. In my city people rarely talk about personal dreams because there is a belief that talking about them may bring disappointment if they are not fulfilled. Therefore, most people keep such things private.

Sugerencia: 意見は示せていますが、理由の提示が曖昧で語法の誤りがあります（“dream is”→“dreams are”, “helps”→“help”，“a better lives”→“a better life”）。反対意見や例を一つ簡潔に加えると説得力が増します。接続語を用いて論理を整え、2〜4文で述べてください。

Ejemplo: I don't think dreams have special meanings. Dreams are usually just products of our imagination and do not necessarily lead to a better life or personality. However, sometimes dreams can reflect our worries or hopes, so they might offer useful insight.

Sugerencia: 答えが混乱しており、語彙と構文の誤りが多いです（“bear rich people”は意味不明、“it yeah”は不適切）。まず明確なトピック文を作り、その後理由を1つ示してください。将来の意図があるなら“intend to”や“hope to”を使い、曖昧な語は避けてください。語数は2〜3文に。

Ejemplo: No, I don't have any particular dreams I want to pursue right now. At the moment I'm focused on building financial stability so that I can live comfortably in the future, but I don't have a specific career dream to chase.

× I used to harbor big dream when I was child.

✓ I used to harbor a big dream when I was a child.

The noun 'dream' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a'; 'child' also requires the article 'a' when used with 'was'. Use 'a big dream' and 'a child' to make the sentence grammatically correct. Suggestion: Add 'a' before singular countable nouns: 'a big dream', 'a child'.

× It is uh, I want to become a doctor because it is a very good payment and umm, everyone was want to be a doctor on that time.

✓ Um, I wanted to become a doctor because it pays well, and at that time everyone wanted to be a doctor.

Mixed tenses and incorrect noun usage: 'It is uh, I want' mixes present with past reference. Use past tense 'wanted' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Payment' is incorrect for 'salary' or 'pays well'. 'Everyone was want' is wrong: subject-verb agreement and tense: 'everyone wanted'. 'On that time' should be 'at that time'. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense and use correct nouns: 'wanted', 'pays well', 'at that time'.

× everyone was want to be a doctor on that time.

✓ Everyone wanted to be a doctor at that time.

'Everyone' is singular and requires a singular verb form; 'was want' is incorrect. Also 'on that time' should be 'at that time'. Suggestion: Use 'wanted' for past tense with 'everyone' and correct preposition 'at'.

× No, I don't. In my city there is no culture to share our dreams because we can't promise to achieve that dream.

✓ No, I don't. In my city there isn't a culture of sharing dreams because we can't promise to achieve them.

'There is no culture to share our dreams' is unnatural: use 'there isn't a culture of sharing dreams'. 'That dream' mismatches plural 'dreams'; use 'them'. Suggestion: Use 'there isn't a culture of + -ing' and keep pronoun number consistent: 'dreams ... them'.

× So we don't share our dreams and even we are not interested in other dreams.

✓ So we don't share our dreams and we are not even interested in other people's dreams.

'Other dreams' is ambiguous; better to say 'other people's dreams'. Word order: 'not even interested' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'other people's dreams' and place 'even' before the verb phrase.

× No, I don't think so, because dream is just their imagination, so it doesn't mean their dreams helps to create a better lives, better personality.

✓ No, I don't think so, because a dream is just imagination, so it doesn't mean dreams help to create better lives or a better personality.

Countable noun 'dream' needs article 'a' or use plural 'dreams'. 'Their imagination' is unclear; better 'imagination'. 'Their dreams helps' has subject-verb agreement error: 'dreams help'. 'a better lives' mixes article with plural; use 'better lives' or 'a better life'. Suggestion: Use consistent singular/plural and correct verb agreement: 'dreams help', 'better lives' or 'a better life'.

× So yeah, I don't think it's a special meaning.

✓ So yeah, I don't think it has any special meaning.

'I don't think it's a special meaning' incorrectly uses 'it is' with 'meaning'. Use 'it has' or 'it has any special meaning'. Suggestion: Use 'has' with 'meaning': 'it has any special meaning'.

× No, I don't because I currently don't have any dreams that I want to achieve in the future.

✓ No, I don't, because I currently don't have any dreams that I want to achieve in the future.

Mainly punctuation: add comma after 'No, I don't'. The tense 'currently don't have' is acceptable. Suggestion: Add comma for clarity: 'No, I don't, because...'.

× So I just want to bear rich people in the future.

✓ So I just want to become a rich person in the future.

'Bear rich people' is incorrect verb choice; 'bear' does not mean 'become'. Also 'people' plural doesn't match 'a rich person'. Suggestion: Use 'become' with a singular noun: 'become a rich person' or 'become rich'.

× However, I don't have any specific dreams for now, so it yeah.

✓ However, I don't have any specific dreams for now, so yeah.

'so it yeah' is ungrammatical filler. Remove 'it'. Suggestion: Use concise filler: 'so yeah' or remove altogether.