Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence. For example, say you rarely remember dreams, give a clear reason (busy mornings) and mention your husband's advice briefly.

Ejemplo: I rarely remember my dreams because I sleep deeply and wake up with many tasks on my mind. For example, I usually get up and immediately start preparing breakfast or checking my phone, so I forget the dream quickly. My husband says if I stayed still for a few minutes and tried to recall, I might remember more.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer: give a direct yes/no, then one clear reason and one specific example. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct small grammar errors (e.g., 'interested in others' dreams', 'as my children are young'). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often share my dreams and I enjoy hearing my children's dreams because I'm curious about what they think; for example, my son recently told me about a dream about school and it revealed his worries about exams.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and avoid filler words (uh). Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' and finish your thought fully.

Ejemplo: I don’t think dreams have mystical meanings; I believe they reflect our daily life and worries. For instance, if I am stressed about a deadline, I often dream about being late, which suggests the dream is connected to my real-life concerns.

Sugerencia: Good content and clear goals—improve fluency and grammar, remove fillers, and use linking words to list goals. Make sentences concise and provide a brief reason for each goal.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I am ambitious and currently focusing on two main goals: first, obtaining my registered dietitian certification to advance my career; and second, settling in Australia because I admire the lifestyle and milder climate.

× I hardly remember any dreams because I always have a very sound sleep.

✓ I hardly remember any dreams because I always sleep very soundly.

The phrase 'have a very sound sleep' is awkward; use the verb 'sleep' with the adverb 'soundly' to describe how one sleeps. This fixes word choice and adverb use to match present simple tense for habitual actions.

× Moreover, when I get up I just had lots of things to do and I forget my dream as soon as I get up.

✓ Moreover, when I get up I usually have lots of things to do and I forget my dream as soon as I get up.

The original mixes present ('get up', 'forget') with past 'had'. Use present 'have' for habitual actions. Replacing 'had' with 'have' ensures tense consistency in present simple.

× Moreover, my husband told me if I process that memories for little longer time, only then I can remember, but because.

✓ Moreover, my husband told me that if I process those memories for a little longer, only then can I remember them.

Problems: incorrect conjunction/connector usage ('if' clause needed 'that' after 'told me'), wrong plural/demonstrative ('that memories' -> 'those memories'), missing article and word order ('a little longer'), and awkward word order in 'only then can I remember them'. Also remove dangling 'but because' which is incomplete.

× Definitely I do both things, I do share my own dreams and interested to listen other dreams especially of my son because I'm very much curious as my kids are getting younger so I wanted to know the kind of things they're thinking about and moreover I it depends upon kind of dream I have.

✓ Definitely I do both: I share my own dreams and I am interested in listening to others' dreams, especially my son's, because I'm very curious as my children are getting younger, so I want to know what they are thinking about. It also depends on the kind of dream I have.

Multiple issues: missing verbs ('I am interested'), incorrect preposition ('listen to'), incorrect possessive/plural ('other dreams' -> 'others' dreams' or 'others' dreams' fixed to 'others\' dreams'), pronoun agreement ('my son' -> 'my son's'), tense consistency ('wanted' -> 'want' for present habit), and sentence fragmentation. Rewriting separates clauses and corrects pronouns and verb forms.

× I think dreams just stem out from your, uh, daily life as well as the kind of struggle you are going through.

✓ I think dreams just stem from your daily life as well as from the kinds of struggles you are going through.

Use 'stem from' rather than 'stem out from'. Make 'kinds of struggles' plural for generality and add 'from' for parallel structure. Present simple used for general truths.

× Moreover, you are subconscious about many different action in your daily life.

✓ Moreover, you are subconscious about many different actions in your daily life.

Count noun 'action' should be plural 'actions'. Also 'subconscious about' is awkward but acceptable; plural fixes noun agreement.

× Uh, so, uh, they have uh, interconnection with the daily activities. That's why the only specific kind of.

✓ So, they have an interconnection with daily activities. That's why only specific kinds of dreams may relate directly to those activities.

Original has sentence fragments and awkward phrasing. Added article 'an', corrected noun phrase 'interconnection with daily activities', and completed the fragment by explaining 'only specific kinds of dreams...'. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I'm very ambitious person and I have lots of dreams that I really want to turn into reality.

✓ I'm a very ambitious person and I have lots of dreams that I really want to turn into reality.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'very ambitious person'. Adding 'a' corrects the noun phrase.

× these days I'm just after two things. First, to get my registered dietitian certification and 2nd to settle in Australia, uh, to lead a more effective life in good weather condition as I'm impressed.

✓ These days I'm focused on two things: first, getting my registered dietitian certification, and second, settling in Australia to lead a more effective life in better weather, because I'm impressed by it.

Use gerunds ('getting', 'settling') after 'focused on' or when listing goals. Also correct article and adjective use: 'better weather' and complete the reason clause 'because I'm impressed by it'. This makes tense, form, and meaning coherent.