Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, avoid fillers (uh, about), correct grammar (use past tense and articles), and give one clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I seldom remember my dreams clearly, but I do recall having one last night. However, it wasn’t very vivid, so I can only remember a few fragments like walking through a city. Because the scenes were fuzzy, I couldn’t make out a clear story.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and verb forms, and add a linking word to explain reason. Be specific about frequency and context. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'share about' and 'we have culture that'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes share my dreams with friends. In Thailand people often interpret dreams as lottery signs, so I usually tell my close friends when I have an unusual dream to see what numbers they think it might indicate.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'interpreting dreams', 'predicting future'). Combine short sentences with linking words to avoid repetition and give one specific opinion or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings for some people. Although I am not an expert, I know that many cultures interpret dreams as signs of future events, and I find those interpretations fascinating even if I'm skeptical.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and grammar, and avoid filler words. Explain with linked reasons and provide a specific example of a positive dream you would like to realize or why you would not want a bad dream to come true.

Ejemplo: It depends. I would like to make positive dreams come true, such as achieving a successful career or traveling the world. However, I definitely would not want bad dreams—like my family being hurt—to happen in real life, and those dreams make me anxious rather than motivated.

× I dream about something, although I cannot remember the story exactly, but uh, it's not quite vivid dream.

✓ I dreamed about something, although I cannot remember the story exactly; it wasn't a very vivid dream.

The original uses present simple 'dream' while referring to a specific dream that occurred last night; past tense 'dreamed' is appropriate (Past tense issue too). Also the noun phrase needs an article ('a very vivid dream') and better clause connection. Suggest using past tense for past events and include the article before 'vivid dream'.

× I will say yes sometime I share about my dreams with others.

✓ I would say yes; sometimes I share my dreams with others.

'Will' is inappropriate for expressing a habitual tendency or tentative opinion; 'would' or 'I would say' is more natural. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). Also do not use 'share about'; use 'share my dreams' or 'talk about my dreams'.

× In Thailand we have culture that interpret the dream into lottery number, so I usually share the dream with my friends.

✓ In Thailand we have a culture of interpreting dreams into lottery numbers, so I usually share my dreams with my friends.

Missing article 'a' before 'culture' and wrong verb form 'interpret' should be 'interpreting' to fit 'culture of ...ing' structure. 'Into lottery number' should be plural 'lottery numbers' and preposition 'of' fits 'culture of'. Also 'the dream' is better as 'my dreams' for natural phrasing.

× I know that there are knowledge about inter interpreting dreams into late fortune.

✓ I know that there is knowledge about interpreting dreams into future fortune.

'There are knowledge' is ungrammatical; 'knowledge' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'there is'. 'Inter interpreting' seems a typo; use 'interpreting'. 'Late fortune' is unclear; likely 'future fortune'. Use correct collocations: 'knowledge about interpreting dreams'.

× I'm not quite familiar with that, but I know.

✓ I'm not very familiar with it, but I find it interesting.

The original 'but I know' is vague and incomplete as a contrasting clause. Better to state what 'I know' refers to or replace with an appropriate comment. Also 'quite' is acceptable but 'not very familiar' is clearer. Ensure contrast is explicit.

× Sometimes I had a bad dream about uh, my family members die from accident or I got a serious trouble so that deems.

✓ Sometimes I had a bad dream in which my family members died in an accident or I got into serious trouble, so those dreams distressed me.

Multiple errors: 'had' can be past (fine) but 'die' must be past 'died' to match. Use 'in an accident' not 'from accident'. 'I got a serious trouble' should be 'I got into serious trouble' or 'I had serious trouble'. The final word 'deems' is incorrect; likely 'these' or 'those dreams' 'distressed me'. Ensure verb tense consistency and use correct prepositions and noun forms.