Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Good direct response and a clear example. To improve, make the answer slightly shorter and more coherent by using a clear topic sentence, one linking word, and a specific detail about when or why you remember dreams. Avoid redundancy (e.g., saying "I remember most" then qualifying repeatedly).

Ejemplo: I usually remember most of my dreams, but sometimes I can't recall the details. For instance, after a vivid dream about being on holiday I once woke up feeling happy, but I couldn't remember what exactly happened in the dream.

Sugerencia: Clear answer with cultural detail, which is good. Improve by using present-tense consistency and a linking phrase to contrast sharing happy dreams and hiding nightmares. Be more concise and avoid repeating 'would'.

Ejemplo: I share happy dreams with my family and friends because as a child I was told sharing dreams makes them come true. However, I never tell anyone about nightmares, so I don't upset others.

Sugerencia: Good balanced answer showing both scientific and personal views. To improve, link the two ideas with a clear connector and give a brief specific example of a dream that might reveal feelings to make it more concrete.

Ejemplo: Although some scientists say dreams are just chemical brain activity, I personally think they can reflect our feelings. For example, dreaming about failing an exam might show I am anxious about my performance.

Sugerencia: Strong, direct answer with a clear opinion. Improve by avoiding repetition ('I believe' twice) and by adding a short specific example of actions you would take to achieve a dream to show commitment.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want my dreams to come true, but I know they require effort. For instance, if my dream is to become a teacher, I would study education, gain classroom experience, and keep improving my skills.

× I remember most of my dreams, however, there are times when I just can't seem to recall them.

✓ I remember most of my dreams; however, there are times when I just can't seem to recall them.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable in tense but has punctuation causing a run-on (comma splice). This is a sentence structure issue that affects clarity. Use a semicolon or a period before 'however' when joining two independent clauses, or add a coordinating conjunction. Suggestion: replace the comma with a semicolon or split into two sentences.

× For example, I would wake up feeling happy because I dreamt about something, but I can't recall the details of why I would feel that way.

✓ For example, I would wake up feeling happy because I had dreamt about something, but I can't recall the details of why I felt that way.

This sentence mixes conditional/modal 'would' with past narrative. Use past perfect ('had dreamt') to indicate the dream occurred before waking. Also change 'would feel' to simple past 'felt' for the specific past event. These changes clarify sequence of events and maintain consistent past reference.

× When I would dream about something happy, I would share them with my family and friends because as a child I was taught that whenever you share your dreams, they would come true.

✓ When I dreamed about something happy, I would share it with my family and friends because, as a child, I was taught that whenever you share your dreams they come true.

The plural pronoun 'them' incorrectly refers to 'something' (singular); use 'it' or make the noun plural. Also 'would' is overused; using simple past 'dreamed' with habitual 'would share' is acceptable, but keep sequence consistent. Remove comma before 'they come true' or restructure with commas for clarity. Using present tense 'come true' fits the general truth expressed.

× This is also the reason why whenever I have nightmares, I never tell anyone.

✓ This is also the reason why, whenever I have nightmares, I never tell anyone.

No major tense error, but punctuation is needed: add commas to set off the adverbial clause 'whenever I have nightmares'. This improves readability. Pronouns are correct; change is punctuation-based and categorized under pronoun/clause separation for clarity.

× I read somewhere that dreams are just the results of chemical reactions in the brain.

✓ I read somewhere that dreams are just the result of chemical reactions in the brain.

'Results' is plural but 'dreams' being a general concept fits better with 'result' as an uncountable/general noun phrase. Use singular 'result' when speaking of an overall cause. This is a noun-number choice related to tense/usage; the verb tense 'read' is past simple to report where the idea was encountered and is fine.

× However, I like to think that dreams are manifestations of our true feelings and desires.

✓ However, I like to think that dreams are manifestations of our true feelings and desires.

This sentence is correct; no grammatical change needed. It uses present simple appropriately for a general belief.

× Yes, I definitely would like all my dreams to come true, but I don't believe that it will just happen without you putting in any work.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like all my dreams to come true, but I don't believe that they will just happen without putting in any work.

We should use 'they' to refer back to 'dreams' (plural) instead of 'it'. Also 'would definitely like' vs 'definitely would like' order is stylistic; corrected to 'would definitely like'. Remove second-person 'you' to keep the statement general; use gerund phrase 'putting in any work' or 'putting in effort'. This fixes pronoun agreement and keeps perspective consistent.

× I believe that dreams will only come true if you strive and work hard for it.

✓ I believe that dreams will only come true if you strive and work hard for them.

Pronoun 'it' does not agree in number with 'dreams' (plural). Replace with 'them' to match the plural antecedent. Alternatively rephrase to 'if you strive and work hard for them' or 'if you strive and work hard to achieve them.' This fixes pronoun agreement.