Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid listing many careers without linking words and correct grammar (use past tense consistently, and correct articles).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually remember my dreams. For example, when I was younger I dreamed of becoming a teacher, then a cook or a doctor, but recently I’ve decided I want to be a nurse.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and coherence: use correct prepositions and clauses, and explain reason briefly with a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "they might even I'd my plans").

Ejemplo: Yes, I share my dreams with close friends and family, but I avoid telling strangers because I worry they might judge me or reveal my plans.

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct subject-verb agreement. Provide one clear example that links the dream to personal traits.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams can reflect personality. For instance, dreaming of becoming a nurse might indicate that you are compassionate and enjoy caring for others.

Sugerencia: Use present tense consistently and shorten sentences. Start with a direct answer, then give a brief reason and an example of actions you will take. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true. However, I know it will take time and hard work, so I am prepared to study and gain experience to achieve my goal.

× As a dreamer, yes, I do remember all of it.

✓ As a dreamer, yes, I do remember all of them.

The speaker refers to multiple dreams, so the plural pronoun 'them' is required rather than 'it.' Use plural object pronoun to match plural noun (dreams). Suggestion: say 'I remember them' when referring to multiple items.

× So before I dreamt of being a teacher, a cook, a doctor, a surgeon.

✓ So before, I dreamed of being a teacher, a cook, a doctor, and a surgeon.

Use consistent simple past form 'dreamed' (both 'dreamt' and 'dreamed' are acceptable in English, but keep style consistent) and include 'and' before the last item in a list. Also add comma after 'before' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'dreamed' or consistently use 'dreamt.'

× But now I'm choosing to be a nurse.

✓ But now I'm choosing to be a nurse.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. It expresses a present continuous decision. No change needed. (No correction required but included to acknowledge correctness.)

× Yes, I do share my dreams to other people that I'm close with, but I don't share it with the people that who don't know me because they might even I'd my plans in life.

✓ Yes, I do share my dreams with people I'm close to, but I don't share them with people who don't know me because they might even judge my plans in life.

Use 'share with' not 'share to.' 'People I'm close to' is the correct prepositional phrase. Use plural object pronoun 'them' to match 'dreams.' Remove redundant 'that' before 'who.' 'I'd' appears to be a typo for 'judge.' Suggestion: 'share with,' use 'people who' and ensure pronouns agree in number.

× Yes, I do think that dreams have special meanings because it reflects on who you are as a person.

✓ Yes, I do think that dreams have special meanings because they reflect who you are as a person.

'Dreams' is plural, so the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'reflect' are required. 'Reflect on' is acceptable but 'reflect' plus direct object is more natural here. Suggestion: ensure subject and pronoun/verb agree in number.

× For example, you wanted to be a nurse.

✓ For example, you want to be a nurse.

The context discusses general meaning of dreams and current desires, so use present tense 'want' rather than past 'wanted.' Keep tense consistent with preceding statement 'do think.' Suggestion: use present when describing a general or current state.

× A nurse is a compassionate and empathetic and that's who you are as a person.

✓ A nurse is compassionate and empathetic, and that's who you are as a person.

Do not use the indefinite article 'a' before adjectives used as a compound predicate; use 'is compassionate and empathetic.' Add a comma before 'and' connecting independent clauses. Suggestion: list adjectives without repeating 'a.'

× You are also empathetic and wants to care for other people.

✓ You are also empathetic and want to care for other people.

With the subject 'you,' the verb should be base form 'want' (no -s). Using 'wants' causes a subject-verb agreement error for second person. Suggestion: match verb form to subject: I want, you want, he/she wants.

× Yes, of course I wanted to make my dreams come true but I know that I have to go through a lot before I reach or I get what I wanted and it's a long process but I'm willing to do and give all my strength to reach that dream.

✓ Yes, of course I want to make my dreams come true, but I know that I have to go through a lot before I reach or get what I want, and it's a long process; I'm willing to do my best and give all my strength to reach that dream.

Maintain present tense 'want' when expressing current desire, not past 'wanted.' Use consistent present tense for future goals ('get what I want'). Replace awkward 'reach or I get' with 'reach or get.' 'Do and give all my strength' is awkward; use 'do my best and give all my strength.' Use punctuation to break run-on sentence. Suggestion: keep tense consistency and simplify phrasing.