Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid unclear phrases like "I can do this situation" and incorrect vocabulary. Use linking words (because/so) to connect ideas and keep it under 3–4 short sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually can't remember my dreams. However, when I take melatonin I sometimes recall very strange dreams because the supplement affects my sleep. For example, last week I dreamed about flying over my childhood neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific habit or example. Use linking words like however or but to contrast, and correct phrasing (e.g., "the feeling of the dream remains"). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Not often, because I usually can't remember my dreams. However, if a dream leaves a strong feeling or impression, I sometimes tell my family about it the next morning.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: give your opinion first, then briefly explain with a clear cultural example. Use correct grammar ("dreams have" not "dream has") and smoother phrasing when describing cultural beliefs. Avoid filler words and unclear references.

Ejemplo: I don't personally believe dreams have special meanings. However, some cultures do—for example, in Korea people sometimes interpret certain dreams as omens, such as believing that dreaming of a baby can mean someone will become pregnant.

Sugerencia: State your intention clearly, then explain how you act to achieve dreams with one concrete method. Use linking words (for example, by/so) and correct grammar ("make my dreams come true" and "I use my dreams to guide my future"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true, and I try to plan steps to achieve them. For example, I set short-term goals and study relevant skills so that my long-term career goals become realistic.

× I usually can't remember my dreams but I can do this situation that my dream is so so strange.

✓ I usually can't remember my dreams, but in this case my dream was very strange.

The student mixes present ability with a specific past dream. The second clause refers to a particular dream (past), so use past tense 'was' not present. Also 'can do this situation' is unnatural; use 'in this case' to refer to that situation. Improve clarity by separating clauses with a comma.

× I take melatonin generally these days so my dream is so old or weird.

✓ I have been taking melatonin lately, so my dreams are odd or strange.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been taking' to describe an action occurring these days. 'Generally these days' is redundant; 'lately' is better. 'My dream is so old or weird' is unclear: use plural 'dreams' and adjectives 'odd' or 'strange'.

× As I mentioned earlier, I can't remember my dream mostly mostly so I can't share my dreams with others.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I mostly can't remember my dreams, so I can't share them with others.

Place adverb 'mostly' before the verb for natural word order: 'mostly can't remember'. Use plural 'dreams' to match general meaning and replace repetition. Use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition.

× Umm but the feeling of dreams remained me so I just say.

✓ But the feeling of a dream remained with me, so I just mention it.

'Remained me' is incorrect; use 'remained with me' to show a feeling stayed. 'Say' is too vague; 'mention it' fits context. Use article 'a' before 'dream'.

× No, I don't think dream has special meaning.

✓ No, I don't think dreams have a special meaning.

Use plural 'dreams' for general statements and include indefinite article 'a' before 'special meaning' or use 'have special meanings'. Also use verb agreement 'have' with plural subject.

× However, in Korea has the culture.

✓ However, in Korea there is a culture about this.

The original lacks a subject and proper word order. Add 'there is' to introduce existence and clarify 'about this' to refer to dreams.

× Tamil it is umm someone is pregnant and then uh, pay it.

✓ In traditional belief, if someone is pregnant and then has a dream, people pay attention to it.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrase to 'if someone is pregnant and then has a dream' and use 'pay attention to it' to express the intended meaning.

× Pay your attention to dreams that means.

✓ That means people pay attention to dreams.

The imperative 'Pay your attention' is inappropriate here; rephrase into a declarative sentence. Use present tense 'pay' for habitual action and reorder words for clarity.

× Of course I want to make my dreams come true doing as many meaning, but I use the dreams means to my future.

✓ Of course I want to make my dreams come true and I try to give them meaning, because I use my dreams to guide my future.

Original is ungrammatical: 'doing as many meaning' is incorrect; replace with 'give them meaning'. 'Use the dreams means to my future' should be 'use my dreams to guide my future'. Use present simple 'want' and 'try' for general desires and habits.

× It is very important to.

✓ This is very important to me.

Sentence is incomplete; add 'to me' to indicate who finds it important. Alternatively specify what 'it' refers to. Ensure sentences are complete with subject and object.