Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep your answer clear and directly related to the question. Start with a concise topic sentence (Yes/No and reason), avoid irrelevant or incorrect vocabulary (e.g., 'Debian' is incorrect here), correct grammar (verb forms, articles), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use one linking phrase to add a detail or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember some of my dreams, although most are ordinary. For example, I often dream about walking in my neighborhood, which feels realistic. However, I usually forget the details after I wake up, so I don't think of them much.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do / No, I don't), then explain why using specific details and one or two linking words (because, so). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid fillers like 'uh' and vague phrases like 'or so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often talk about dreams with my friends and my mother because discussing them helps me understand their worries. For instance, if someone dreams about failing exams, I know they are stressed about studies, so I try to offer support or advice.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating your view, then contrast cultural belief and personal opinion using linking words (however, although). Fix grammar (verb forms, articles, contractions) and be specific in examples. Avoid repetition and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: In my culture, people often believe dreams have special meanings; for example, dreaming about a snake is said to predict meeting your soulmate. However, personally I am skeptical because I think dreams reflect personal thoughts rather than future events.

Sugerencia: Respond directly to the question with a clear yes/no and reason. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure, avoid irrelevant story details that do not answer the question, and keep it concise (2–3 sentences). If giving an example, make it short and clearly linked to your point.

Ejemplo: Not really — I don't usually try to make my dreams come true because many of them are unrealistic or frightening. For example, I once dreamed of being chased by a dinosaur, which felt emotional but not like something to pursue in real life.

× Actually I remember a lot of theme, but most of them are just regular.

✓ Actually I remember a lot of them, but most of them are just regular.

'Theme' is incorrect; the plural pronoun 'them' refers to 'dreams'. Use 'a lot of them' for plural reference. Suggestion: use 'them' to match plural 'dreams'.

× I heard that people who remember the dream are have some problem with Debian, so I prefer not remember it.

✓ I heard that people who remember their dreams have some problems with sleep, so I prefer not to remember mine.

Multiple errors: 'are have' is wrong; use 'have' for plural subject (third person plural). 'the dream' should be 'their dreams' to match plural. 'Debian' seems incorrect word choice; likely 'sleep' or 'dream' problem. Also need infinitive 'not to remember'. Suggestion: simplify to 'people who remember their dreams have problems with sleep' and use 'prefer not to remember mine'.

× Yes, I interest in my friends or my mom dreams because uh talking about this, I will know what they worry or maybe what they thinking about it or so maybe I can help reducing their concern.

✓ Yes, I am interested in my friends' or my mom's dreams because by talking about them I can know what they worry about or what they are thinking, and maybe I can help reduce their concerns.

'I interest in' is incorrect; correct is 'I am interested in' (adjective). Possessives need apostrophes: 'friends'' and 'mom's'. Use 'by talking about them' not just 'talking about this'. 'What they worry' needs 'worry about'. 'What they thinking' requires 'are thinking'. 'Help reducing' should be 'help reduce'. Suggestion: use correct participle/adjective forms and appropriate prepositions and possessives.

× In my culture yes they have uh for example if you dreaming about snake it mean that you will find the love of your life.

✓ In my culture, yes they do. For example, if you dream about a snake, it means that you will find the love of your life.

'If you dreaming' is wrong; use present simple 'if you dream' for conditional. 'It mean' should be 'it means' (third person singular). 'Snake' needs an article 'a snake'. Also separate sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use correct conditional structure and third person singular verb agreement.

× But personally I'm don't trust it it that much because I just think dreaming is just personally.

✓ But personally I don't trust it that much because I just think dreaming is a personal thing.

'I'm don't' is incorrect; use 'I don't'. Remove duplicate 'it'. 'Dreaming is just personally' is ungrammatical; use noun phrase 'a personal thing'. Suggestion: use correct negation and appropriate noun forms.

× I hope not because most of my doing much is poor imagination.

✓ I hope not because most of what I do is just poor imagination.

Original phrasing is confusing. 'Most of my doing much' is ungrammatical; use 'most of what I do'. 'Is poor imagination' better as 'is just poor imagination'. Suggestion: rephrase to clarify meaning and use correct noun clauses.

× Like I remember that once I sleep and just dream that I'm got chasing by a dinosaur and I'm very scared so my friend driving uh allowed to tell and I remember that I cry a lot in.

✓ For example, I remember once I slept and dreamed that I was being chased by a dinosaur and I was very scared, so my friend drove me somewhere and I remember that I cried a lot.

Multiple past tense errors: use past simple 'slept', 'dreamed'. 'I'm got chasing' is wrong; use past progressive or passive 'I was being chased' or 'a dinosaur was chasing me'. 'My friend driving uh allowed to tell' is unclear; likely 'my friend drove me' or 'my friend woke me' — here use 'drove me'. 'I cry' should be past 'I cried'. Suggestion: keep verbs in past tense for past events and use standard passive/progressive forms for 'chased'.