Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 语言需要更自然、句子更完整，并避免重复与填充词。注意时态和语法：使用不定式或现在时表达职业目标，减少重复（如 “become” 多次出现），用流利的连接词补充细节。发音上避免频繁的语气词（uh）。建议将回答控制在3–4句内，第一句直接回答，随后给出具体原因和例子。

Ejemplo: I want to become a psychologist because I enjoy helping people with mental health problems, especially depression and anxiety. For example, I would like to offer counseling and practical strategies to improve their daily life. Ultimately, I hope my work can help clients feel happier and more confident.

Sugerencia: 回答需更有条理并用连接词使信息连贯。避免语法错误与重复，明确分句（父母支持、朋友支持分别说明），并给出具体方式（例如：参加课程、提供建议）。保持句子简短，最多4句。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often share my career goals with my parents and friends. My parents support me by encouraging me and helping me find extra courses. My friends also give me advice and moral support when I feel stressed.

Sugerencia: 需要更清晰表达观点并提供具体原因或例子。避免含糊和重复，使用逻辑连接词（because, so, therefore）来组织观点。注意用词准确，如用 “ambitions” 或 “goals” 替代模糊的 “dreams” 重复。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams often have special meanings because they reflect a person’s ambitions and values. For example, if someone dreams of becoming a teacher, it may show they value helping others and education. Therefore, dreams can motivate people to work harder.

Sugerencia: 这部分有严重的表达与词汇错误（“drinks control” 应为误说），句子不完整且逻辑混乱。建议先用一句直接肯定回应，再解释原因并给出具体计划或例子。避免模糊词和填充音，注意句子完整性与语法。

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because achieving long-term goals brings great satisfaction. For instance, I plan to study psychology at university and gain practical experience through internships to reach my goal.

× My dream is become a psychologist because I want to help people with some emotional and mental illness, especially depression and anxiety.

✓ My dream is to become a psychologist because I want to help people with emotional and mental illnesses, especially depression and anxiety.

句子缺少不定式的 to 作表语补足（'is to become'），並且名詞複數形式需與類別一致（'illness' 應為複數 'illnesses'，因為指多種病況），還刪除多餘的 'some' 以保持正式自然。建議：在表示願望時用 'My dream is to + 動詞原形'，涉及多種疾病時用複數。

× I want to support them become more better and have a happier UH.

✓ I want to help them become better and have a happier life.

原句使用 'more better' 是冗餘且不正確（比較級不能用 'more' 加上已帶比較標記的詞），且 'support' 在此語境不如 'help' 自然；'UH' 顯然是口語填充或錯寫，應改為 'life'。建議：使用 'become better' 或 'improve'，避免 'more better' 類型錯誤。

× I share my dreams with my parents and friends.

✓ I share my dreams with my parents and friends.

此句語法正確，無需更改。保留原句。

× My parents know my dreams and always support me, become more professional and give me some extra classes to become make me become better my friends always.

✓ My parents know my dreams and always support me. They help me become more professional and give me extra classes to help me improve.

原句是一個混亂的串聯，缺少連貫的主語和正確的動詞結構（'support me, become more professional' 沒有主語，'to become make me become better my friends always' 完全語序錯亂）。需要分句並明確主語與動詞。建議：把長句拆成兩句或三句，為每個動作提供明確主語，例如 'They help me...'、'They give me...'。

× Only people have dreams, they have motivations, uh, they can become uh, more energetic to uh, achieve their dreams and hardworking to become better and the profession.

✓ When people have dreams, they have motivation; they can become more energetic to achieve their goals and work hard to improve in their profession.

原句語序混亂，重複填充詞較多，'Only people have dreams' 意思不明且可能錯誤（非只有人類有夢想），'hardworking' 被錯當動詞使用。需要改為正確連詞和動詞形式（'work hard'）。建議：使用清楚的連接詞（When/If），避免口頭語 'uh'，並使用正確動詞短語 'work hard'。

× Yeah, for sure. I share my dreams with my parents and friends. My parents know my dreams and always support me, become more professional and give me some extra classes to become make me become better my friends always.

✓ Yeah, for sure. I share my dreams with my parents and friends. My parents know my dreams and always support me. They help me become more professional and give me extra classes to help me improve. My friends do too.

合併前面句子時需要注意主語一致與語意清晰。原句最後 'my friends always' 位置錯誤，應明確說明朋友也支持。建議：分句並補上主語 'They' 或 'My friends'，避免冗長不明的短語。

× Do you want to make your dreams come true?

✓ Do you want to make your dreams come true?

此為考官問題，學生回答需改寫，下列為學生回答的修正，問題本身無語法錯誤。保留原句。

× Yeah, for sure drinks control is unbelievable and the happiest things because it's a motivation and the goals from many years. So dream control is really, uh, cheer people off and.

✓ Yeah, for sure. Making my dreams come true is unbelievable and one of the happiest things because it's the result of many years of motivation and goals. So achieving a dream really cheers people up.

原句多處詞不達意：'drinks control' 應為錯誤詞組，可能想表達 'dreams coming true' 或 'making dreams come true'；'the happiest things' 應用單數或加限定詞；'cheer people off' 用法錯誤，正確表達為 'cheer people up'。需要改正詞組、時態和固定搭配。建議：使用慣用表達 'make dreams come true'、'cheer someone up'，並保持句子完整。