Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you remember your dreams, then give one or two specific details (what the dream is and a reason why it may not happen now). Use linking words (for example, “because” or “however”) correctly and avoid fillers and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember my dreams. Most of them are about my future career because I want to become a seaman. However, at the moment I am worried about the financial costs of training, so I am saving money and looking for scholarships.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence and give a brief reason. If you’re also interested in others’ dreams, say so and give a short explanation. Use correct prepositions and avoid vague phrases like “you're correct.”

Ejemplo: I usually don't share my dreams with others because they are personal. But I am interested in other people's dreams, since hearing their goals helps me learn new ideas and stay motivated.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first (yes or no) and support it with a concise reason and one brief example. Avoid contradictory or confusing statements. Use linking words like “because” and keep to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't think dreams have special hidden meanings because most are reflections of our daily thoughts and worries. For example, if I study ships all day, I might dream about sailing, which doesn't necessarily predict the future.

Sugerencia: Give a direct and confident answer, then explain one specific step you are taking toward the dream. Correct grammar (e.g., “make my dream come true,” “hope to become”). Keep to two sentences and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dream come true. I am saving money for maritime training and applying for entry programs so I can become a successful seaman.

× I, I remember our dreams that I had is all about yeah for my future because actually I want to become a seaman in the future.

✓ I remember the dreams I had; they were all about my future because I want to become a seaman.

The sentence contains incorrect and unclear pronoun use ('our dreams' then 'I had') and a faulty subject-verb structure ('dreams ... is'). Use 'the dreams I had' to match the singular speaker and 'they were' to agree in number. Also streamline redundant phrases ('in the future') to 'my future' for clarity. Suggestion: identify the subject clearly, match pronouns to the subject, and ensure verb agrees in number.

× However, uh, if I think right now, this is very uh, yeah, you know, I can, I cannot because of the uh, financial.

✓ However, if I think about it now, I can't because of financial reasons.

The original misuses 'think right now' without the preposition 'about' and uses the adjective 'financial' as a noun. Use 'think about it' and 'financial reasons' or 'financial problems' for correct noun usage. Also replace 'I can, I cannot' with the contraction 'I can't' to convey inability.

× Actually I didn't share my dreams to others.

✓ Actually, I didn't share my dreams with others.

The verb 'share' requires the preposition 'with' not 'to' when indicating the people receiving the shared item. Use 'with others' for correct collocation. Also add a comma after 'Actually' for natural pause.

× And yeah, you're correct, I'm interested with other streams.

✓ And yes, you're correct; I'm interested in other people's dreams.

'Interested' takes the preposition 'in', not 'with'. Also 'streams' was likely a mispronunciation of 'dreams'—clarify as 'other people's dreams'. Use a semicolon or connector to separate clauses. Suggestion: choose the correct preposition for the adjective ('interested in').

× Uh, actually, and that's very great questions, but I don't think so because it's only a dreams If you if you have dreams, you know that.

✓ Actually, that's a very good question, but I don't think dreams have special meanings; they are just dreams.

The original contains multiple issues: incorrect article use ('a dreams'), awkward clause ordering, and repetition. Replace 'very great questions' with 'a very good question' and simplify the idea: 'I don't think dreams have special meanings; they are just dreams.' Ensure singular/plural agreement and concise structure.

× Yeah, it's just not true. This is yeah, this is very true. This is my future. This is my this I want. But yeah, no people can can.

✓ No, it's not true that they predict the future; these dreams express what I want for my future, but nobody can be certain about them.

The original is fragmented and contradictory. Clarify the intended meaning: distinguish between dreams as desires ('express what I want') and the idea that dreams predict the future ('nobody can be certain'). Correct pronoun references and remove repetition. Suggestion: form complete sentences and avoid repeating filler words.

× Actually yes, I want to make my dream scan true and hoping soon to to be to be part but to become successful man.

✓ Yes, I want to make my dream come true and hope to become a successful man soon.

'Scan' is a typo for 'come'. Use the infinitive 'to come true' after 'make my dream' or the phrase 'make my dream come true'. After that, use parallel verb forms: 'and hope to become' (not 'hoping' without subject). Also include the article 'a' before 'successful man'. Remove repeated words and extras. Suggestion: keep verb forms consistent and use correct infinitives and articles.