Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid overly unusual claims that may sound implausible; focus on natural language and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep the response within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I can usually remember my dreams, and sometimes I even experience lucid dreaming. For example, a week ago I realised I was dreaming and guided myself to fly over a city. Overall, I remember dreams more often when I am stressed or I nap during the day.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two concise reasons with specific detail. Reduce fillers and informal phrases (‘you know’, ‘uh’) to sound more natural and confident.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't share my dreams with others because I prefer to keep them private. For instance, when I have vivid or personal dreams I tend to write them in a private journal rather than tell friends, since they feel intimate to me.

Sugerencia: State your position clearly, then support it with a specific reason and example. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and linking words like 'however' or 'for example' to make your argument coherent.

Ejemplo: I think some dreams can have meaning, but many are simply random. For example, when I'm anxious about an exam I often dream of failing, which seems to reflect my daytime worries; however, other dreams with nonsense scenes feel meaningless.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and then give one or two concrete examples of the dreams you want to achieve. Avoid repetition and filler words and keep sentences varied and concise to improve fluency and coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true. For example, I hope to finish a university degree and start a small business to support my family, and in the long term I want to travel and live abroad for a year to broaden my experience.

× I can do lucid dreaming and I tend to astral project when I sleep.

✓ I can lucid dream and I tend to astral-project when I sleep.

Use of 'do' + noun 'lucid dreaming' is unnecessary; the verb form 'lucid dream' is correct. Also 'astral project' is a verb phrase; hyphenating as 'astral-project' (or leaving as two words) helps show it as a verb in this context. Suggestion: use the base verb form after 'can' and after 'tend to'.

× I travel the outer space and I travel the world basically when I sleep by means of astral projection.

✓ I travel outer space and the world basically when I sleep by means of astral projection.

'Outer space' is an uncountable noun and should not take 'the' in this context; the verb 'travel' is followed correctly by direct objects 'outer space' and 'the world'. Remove the extra 'the' before 'outer space'.

× When I do astral projection or just dream an ordinary dream, I don't usually share it with someone.

✓ When I astral project or simply have an ordinary dream, I don't usually share it with anyone.

Use 'anyone' instead of 'someone' in negative sentences. Also 'do astral projection' is unnatural; use the verb 'astral project' or 'have an astral projection'. 'Dream an ordinary dream' is wordy; 'have an ordinary dream' is more natural.

× I'm a very confidential person and I don't want to listen to other people's stories about their dream.

✓ I'm a very private person and I don't want to listen to other people's stories about their dreams.

'Confidential' describes information, not a person; use 'private'. 'Dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match 'people's' (possessive plural) or refer to multiple individuals' dreams.

× I sometimes do, but most of the dreams doesn't mean anything.

✓ I sometimes do, but most dreams don't mean anything.

Subject-verb agreement: 'dreams' is plural, so use 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also 'most of the dreams' is wordy; 'most dreams' is more natural here.

× I believe it's a reflection of how we feel and sometimes it's connected with the things that we are going through, especially during our day and also our feelings.

✓ I believe it's a reflection of how we feel and sometimes it's connected to the things we are going through, especially during the day and in terms of our feelings.

Use 'connected to' rather than 'connected with' for this meaning; 'during our day' is awkward—use 'during the day' or 'in daily life'. Clarify 'also our feelings' to 'in terms of our feelings' for natural phrasing.

× Umm yes definitely. I love to make all of my dreams come true and especially I consider myself as a very deep person.

✓ Umm yes, definitely. I want to make all of my dreams come true and I consider myself a very deep person.

'Love to make' is okay but 'want to make' better matches 'Do you want to make your dreams come true?' Also 'consider myself as' is incorrect in this context; use 'consider myself a' without 'as'. Add comma after interjection for clarity.

× I have a lot of dreams to fulfill not only for myself but for for my family and for the people people that I love.

✓ I have a lot of dreams to fulfill not only for myself but also for my family and for the people that I love.

Remove duplicate words ('for for', 'people people'). Use 'not only... but also...' structure. 'People that I love' is correct; avoid repetition. This fixes word-choice and quantifier structure.