Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct some grammar and repetition. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the same phrase.

Ejemplo: Yes, I can remember some dreams. For example, I occasionally wake up recalling a vivid dream about flying, which stays with me because it feels unusually realistic.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to explain why and add a specific example. Also correct collocations (e.g. "interested in hearing others' dreams").

Ejemplo: Not usually. My dreams are often too strange to tell other people, usually involving aliens or impossible events, so I prefer hearing about other people’s dreams instead.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with one or two specific reasons and correct vocabulary (e.g. "subconscious" once). Use linking words to make it coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams can have meaning because they may reflect our subconscious thoughts. For example, dreaming about being chased could indicate anxiety about a situation in real life.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, then briefly explain why with correct grammar and clearer phrasing. Avoid fragmented sentences and be specific about which dreams you mean.

Ejemplo: Not really. My dreams tend to be surreal and sometimes unpleasant, so I prefer to keep them as dreams rather than trying to make them happen in real life.

× Oh, definitely. Actually, I rarely dreamt during my sleep.

✓ Oh, definitely. Actually, I rarely dream during my sleep.

The student uses the past tense 'dreamt' which conflicts with 'rarely' describing a habitual action. Use present simple 'dream' for regular/habitual actions. Suggestion: Use present simple for habits (I rarely dream).

× So if a dream can be remembered, it would be very remarkable.

✓ So if a dream can be remembered, it would be very remarkable to me.

The original sentence is missing the beneficiary phrase 'to me' which clarifies whose judgment it is. Grammar type: conditional/modal context; keep 'would' for hypothetical result. Suggestion: add 'to me' to specify perspective.

× It would be a very remarkable dream to me.

✓ It would be a very remarkable dream for me.

Using 'to me' is acceptable in spoken English, but 'for me' is more natural when referring to something being remarkable for someone. This is a sentence structure/register choice. Suggestion: prefer 'for me' in this context.

× Umm, not really for me to share my dream with others because, uh, my dream was way too weird to share with others.

✓ Umm, not really; I don't usually share my dreams with others because my dreams are too weird to share.

The original has pronoun and verb form inconsistencies: 'for me to share' is awkward and 'my dream was' mixes singular with general meaning. Change to plural 'dreams' and present simple 'don't usually share' for habitual action. Suggestion: use consistent pronouns and tense for habits.

× It's mostly about aliens or about something that my families or a human would never do in their real lives.

✓ They're mostly about aliens or things that my family or an ordinary person would never do in real life.

Problems: 'It's' refers to 'dreams' (plural) so use 'They're'; 'families' is incorrect—use 'family' or 'family members'; 'a human' is awkward—use 'an ordinary person' or 'people'; 'their real lives' should be 'real life'. Suggestion: match number, use natural nouns and 'real life' singular. Grammar problem types: subject-verb agreement and incorrect use of pronouns/nouns.

× So I'd rather interested in hearing other streams.

✓ So I'd rather be interested in hearing other people's dreams.

'I'd rather interested' is ungrammatical; after 'I'd rather' you need the base verb (e.g. 'be') or 'I'd prefer'. Also 'streams' is a misspelling of 'dreams' and needs possessive 'other people's dreams'. Suggestion: use 'I'd rather be interested in hearing other people's dreams' or 'I'd prefer to hear other people's dreams'.

× I do actually, I've read some books talking about how dream share your subconscious subconsciousness of your inner self and whether you dream of something.

✓ I do, actually. I've read some books talking about how dreams reveal your subconscious and inner self, and why you might dream about certain things.

Multiple issues: 'I do actually' needs punctuation; 'dream' should be plural 'dreams'; 'share your subconscious subconsciousness' is redundant and awkward—use 'reveal your subconscious'; 'whether you dream of something' is unclear—use 'why you might dream about certain things'. Suggestion: simplify and use plural nouns and clear verbs.

× It Rep represents how you think and how you react to those kind of.

✓ They represent how you think and how you react to those kinds of things.

Errors: 'It Rep represents' is a typo; 'It' wrong number—'they' for 'dreams'; 'those kind of' should be 'those kinds of things' or 'that kind of thing'. Suggestion: ensure subject-number agreement and use full phrase 'kinds of things'.

× Not really. Like I said before, my dream always way too.

✓ Not really. Like I said before, my dreams are always way too surreal to believe in.

Problems: 'my dream always way too' is missing verb and adjective form; use plural 'dreams are always' and include adjective 'surreal' and 'to believe in' to complete meaning. Suggestion: use complete clause with linking verb 'are' and adjective.

× The surreal to believe in and the things happened are not very pleasant so I'd rather keep it in my mind and then making it come true.

✓ They're too surreal to believe in, and the things that happen are not very pleasant, so I'd rather keep them in my mind than try to make them come true.

Multiple issues: 'The surreal to believe in' is ungrammatical—use 'too surreal to believe in'; 'the things happened' needs relative clause 'the things that happen' or 'that happened'; pronoun consistency: 'them' rather than 'it'; 'making it come true' should be 'try to make them come true' or 'than make them come true'. Suggestion: use correct comparative structure 'too ... to', relative clauses, and consistent plural pronouns.