Sharing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep answers clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use simple, natural phrasing and correct tense. Avoid repetition and overly formal or awkward expressions (e.g., “disseminate a culture of collectivistic culture”).

Ejemplo: Yes. My parents taught me to share from a young age. For example, we always ate together at the dinner table and were expected to share toys, stationery and household items. This helped me learn cooperation and respect for others.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid overly long, confusing sentences. Give one or two specific examples and explain briefly why you share them. Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, “for instance” or “because”) to make your explanation coherent.

Ejemplo: I usually share toys and chores with my younger brother. For instance, we take turns washing dishes and split household expenses according to a schedule, which helps prevent arguments and keeps our home peaceful.

Sugerencia: Be specific and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence naming the items you wouldn’t share, then give one or two brief reasons. Avoid odd examples (e.g., sharing a girlfriend) and unclear phrasing like “abstract values.”

Ejemplo: I wouldn't share personal or valuable items, such as a mobile phone or a family heirloom. These contain private information or have sentimental value, so sharing them could cause problems.

Sugerencia: Structure your answer: start with a direct statement, then give concise details. Avoid vague or confusing phrases (e.g., “9.09 hours,” “feat of a band”). Use simpler language to describe your achievement and what you plan to share.

Ejemplo: Yes. I am preparing to give a speech to about 1,000 people about my journey learning English. I want to share the methods I used and the challenges I faced so others can learn from my experience.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the person and give one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetitive phrases and overly long sentences. Use natural collocations (e.g., “through thick and thin” is fine) but keep it concise.

Ejemplo: I would share good news with my wife first. She has supported me through difficult times and helped me achieve my goals, so she is the person I want to celebrate with.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then list specific examples with brief explanations. Avoid vague or self-centered phrasing like “elevate me in terms of social standing.” Instead, focus on the types of news and why you share them.

Ejemplo: I usually share good news with friends, such as graduation, job promotions, or awards. For example, I told my friends when I graduated and when I received a work promotion because they are happy for my achievements.

× Making the days when I was younger, my parents actually set me down at a dinner table and teach me as part of my family etiquette to share things and to make sure that I spread and sort of disseminate a culture of collectivistic culture within the family.

✓ When I was younger, my parents actually sat me down at the dinner table and taught me, as part of our family etiquette, to share things and to help spread a collectivist culture within the family.

Original sentence used 'Making the days when I was younger' which is an incorrect present participle phrase here (Grammar Problem Type ID 10). Also verbs 'set me down' and 'teach me' were incorrect in tense and form; they should be past simple to match 'When I was younger'. Use 'sat me down' (idiomatic) and 'taught me'. Remove redundant words like 'and sort of disseminate a culture of collectivistic culture' and replace with concise 'help spread a collectivist culture'. Suggestion: begin with a clear time clause ('When I was younger') and keep verbs consistent in past tense.

× So we would generally share items and toys and stationery and even saw them.

✓ So we generally shared items, toys, stationery and even clothes.

The clause contained 'even saw them' which is ungrammatical; likely intended 'share them' or another noun like 'clothes'. Also 'would generally' is acceptable but simpler past 'generally shared' matches narrative tense (Grammar Problem Type ID 10). Ensure the verb matches intended meaning and use correct object nouns.

× I will say I'm reasonably adept at I'm sharing all things and everything under the sun with my younger brother.

✓ I'd say I'm reasonably adept at sharing almost everything with my younger brother.

The sentence mixes future 'I will say' with present continuous 'I'm sharing' awkwardly (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Replace with 'I'd say' or 'I would say' and use the gerund 'sharing' after 'adept at'. Keep tense consistent and concise.

× A formal toys and to collectible action figures and even household chores and domestic cash as we come up with a schedule that each of us will be responsible for certain tasks each and every single day.

✓ For example, toys, collectible action figures, household chores and even household expenses, because we made a schedule assigning certain tasks to each of us every day.

'A formal toys' is incorrect article and noun form; 'to collectible' is ungrammatical. This is primarily incorrect adjective/noun usage and article errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 13 and 22). Also tense and structure are inconsistent; use past simple 'made a schedule' or present perfect depending on context. Here 'we made a schedule' is clearer.

× So we're not quarrel with each other and we live in harmony.

✓ So we don't quarrel with each other and we live in harmony.

'We're not quarrel' is ungrammatical; 'quarrel' needs auxiliary 'do' in present simple negative ('do not quarrel') or use 'aren't quarrelling' for present continuous. This is a verb usage and subject-verb structure error (Grammar Problem Type ID 26/27). Use 'don't quarrel' to match simple present habitual meaning.

× And I'm sharing this about sharing bad as.

✓ And I'm saying this about sharing as something good.

Original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect participle form and word order (Grammar Problem Type ID 10). Likely intention is to state opinion: 'I'm saying this because sharing is good.' Provide clearer phrasing and correct verb forms.

× I would say something that is indeed tangible and of meaningful value, or of some abstract values, such as a girlfriend, a masterpiece of a painting on a certain personal and private item like a mobile phone, or a certain electronic device that contains important information, messages and.

✓ I would say things that are tangible and valuable, or of personal importance, such as a girlfriend, a masterpiece painting, a personal item like a mobile phone, or an electronic device that contains important information and messages.

Original uses 'something' vs listing multiple items, and 'values' plural is incorrect here; quantifiers and noun forms are inconsistent (Grammar Problem Type ID 14). Also sentence trailing 'and' indicates omission. Use plural 'things' when listing multiple examples and keep noun forms consistent.

× Well, I'm about to embark on my first time standing in front of 1000 people talking about how I managed to pull off a remarkably amazing, extraordinary feat of a band. 9.09 hours in a few months.

✓ Well, I'm about to stand in front of 1,000 people for the first time to talk about how I managed to pull off an extraordinary feat: playing for 9.09 hours a few months ago.

Mixes future 'I'm about to' with past 'managed' and unclear time reference '9.09 hours in a few months.' Clarify sequence and tenses (Grammar Problem Type ID 7). If the performance already happened, use past tense 'played for 9.09 hours a few months ago.' If it is upcoming, adjust wording accordingly. Use consistent numerals and clear punctuation.

× Which is my journey to achieve mastery in the English language, and which is probably something that I'm willing to share to the whole world through not only physical encounters.

✓ This is part of my journey to achieve mastery in the English language, and it is something I'm willing to share with the whole world not only through in-person events.

Sentence begins with 'Which' as a fragment and uses incorrect preposition 'share to' instead of 'share with' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12 and 11). Also pronoun 'which' used incorrectly; change to 'This/It'. Ensure correct preposition 'with' after 'share'.

× My wife, undeniably, and I could think of none other than her, since she would always be with me through thick and thin, and so would encounter difficulties, roadblocks, and stumbling blocks with each other when I'm trying to achieve our goals without her.

✓ My wife, undeniably; I can think of no one else, since she has always been with me through thick and thin, and we would face difficulties and roadblocks without her when I try to achieve our goals.

Pronoun and conjunction misuse: 'I could think of none other than her' is awkward; use 'I can think of no one else' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Tenses should be consistent: 'has always been' (present perfect) and rephrase to remove contradiction 'we would face difficulties without her.' Remove redundant 'stumbling blocks with each other'.

× And I would never have been, and I would never have been able to do what I did and to accomplish an extraordinary feat.

✓ I would never have been able to do what I did or to accomplish that extraordinary feat without her.

Original repeats 'I would never have been' and has awkward structure. Use conditional perfect 'would never have been able' and include 'without her' to complete the conditional (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). Combine clauses to avoid repetition.

× Graduation, good remarks and external validations, Rewards, material like rewards and recognition from employees.

✓ I share news such as graduation, good grades or evaluations, awards, material rewards, and recognition from employers.

Original is a list with inconsistent capitalization and unclear nouns ('good remarks', 'external validations', 'Rewards' capitalized) and 'recognition from employees' likely incorrect; intended 'from employers' or 'from others'. This is sentence structure and word choice problems (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Produce a parallel, consistent list.

× You know, all sort of news that I can think of.

✓ You know, all sorts of news that I can think of.

Use plural 'sorts' with 'all' (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Maintain subject-verb number agreement in idiomatic expression 'all sorts of'.

× Things that elevate me in terms of social standing and my physical image, my presence perhaps, you know, good news in general.

✓ Things that elevate my social standing or public image — good news in general.

Original phrase 'my physical image, my presence perhaps' is awkward and wordy. Use more natural collocations: 'social standing' and 'public image'. This corrects adjective/noun misuse and improves clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID 13).