Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 supporting details. Use correct verbs and prepositions (e.g., “ride a bike,” “commute to school”), avoid filler and repetition, and correct unclear phrases (“a little neck” is incorrect). Add a short example or memory to make it specific.

Ejemplo: Yes. I had a bike as a child and learned to ride when I was four. I often used it to commute to school because it was faster than walking, and I remember racing my friends on weekends.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a brief comparison. Use correct tense and countable/uncountable forms (e.g., “bikes were popular,” “many people use subways or buses”). Avoid vague phrases like “not a world.” Use linking words such as “however” or “because” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I think bikes were more popular in Korea in the past; however, today fewer people use them because public transport like subways and buses are convenient and affordable. For example, most commuters prefer the subway during rush hour to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I used to take ride the bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to ride the bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'take ride' is incorrect; English uses the verb 'ride' directly with a vehicle. Use the -ing form only for continuous verbs (e.g., 'I am riding'), but after 'used to' the base verb is required. Suggestion: say 'used to ride' or 'would ride.'

× I started riding a bike when I was four years old, so I think I'm a little neck of riding bike.

✓ I started riding a bike when I was four years old, so I think I'm a bit rusty at riding a bike.

'a little neck of riding bike' is ungrammatical and likely a misuse of idiom. Use 'a bit rusty at' to express reduced skill, and include the article before 'bike.' Ensure correct preposition 'at' for skill. Suggestion: replace the phrase with a clear idiom like 'a bit rusty at riding a bike.'

× Yeah, so I I like I used to ride a bike and commute my school when I was young.

✓ Yeah, so I used to ride a bike and commute to my school when I was young.

Missing article 'to' before the destination and an extra repeated 'I'. Use 'commute to my school' for correct preposition and include only one 'I.' Also keep tense 'used to' to indicate past habit. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and add 'to.'

× In the past I think bike was popular in Korea but nowadays it was not a world it it isn't important that much because many Korean people used used subways or bus to commute.

✓ In the past I think bikes were popular in Korea, but nowadays they are not as important because many Korean people use subways or buses to commute.

Multiple problems: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally (singular/plural and subject-verb agreement), past vs present mismatch ('was' vs 'nowadays'), and repeated words. Use present tense 'are' and 'use' for current situation. Also pluralize 'bus' to 'buses.' Suggestion: say 'bikes were popular' for past generalization and 'nowadays they are not as important because many people use subways or buses.'