Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer has some relevant ideas but many grammar and coherence problems. Focus on: 1) Use correct past tense (e.g., "I had"). 2) Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. 3) Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "so"). 4) Avoid redundant or unclear phrases. In English (Thailand) — Practice saying short, correct sentences: first state the main idea, then give one clear reason or memory. Example practice steps: (a) "I had a bike when I was a child." (b) add a detail: "My parents bought it for me after I asked for it." (c) close with a short reason or memory.

Ejemplo: I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me because I asked for one, and many of my friends rode bicycles to school. I remember riding it every afternoon around my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but needs clearer organization and grammar. Start with a direct opinion sentence (Yes/No/Not really), then give two concise supporting reasons with linking words. Use better vocabulary (e.g., "popular", "commute", "public transport"). In English (Thailand) — Practice giving a short opinion followed by reasons: state opinion, then say why with specific examples (traffic, convenience).

Ejemplo: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people prefer buses, the subway or cars because they are faster and more convenient for commuting. Bikes are mainly used for exercise or short rides rather than daily work commutes.

× Yes, I have a bag when I was child and I remember my first bike is bought from my parents and it's not the initiative ticket initiative to bought it to me, it's me ask for it because many of my friends they took the bicycle to go to school and it's.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I remember my first bike was bought by my parents. They did not give it to me on their own initiative; I asked for it because many of my friends rode bicycles to go to school.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect verb forms. Use past simple for past events: 'had' for possession in the past, 'was bought' (past passive) to describe how the bike was obtained, and 'asked' for the action of requesting. Also correct pronoun and article errors ('a child' -> 'a child', 'bought by my parents' not 'bought from my parents') and remove redundant phrases. Suggestion: keep verbs in past simple when narrating past experiences and use passive voice correctly with 'be' + past participle (was bought).

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? Student: I'm not really because because my people really like to take bus or subway or just metro or car. Actually the bike bike is really used in our ordinary life because it's too slow for for like work life.

✓ I'm not really sure, because people here prefer to take buses, the subway (metro), or cars. Actually, bicycles are not used much in everyday life because they are too slow for commuting to work.

Problems: incorrect pronoun 'my people' (use 'people here' or 'people in my country'), repetition 'because because' and 'bike bike', wrong noun form 'bike' should be plural when speaking generally ('bicycles' or 'bikes'), and verb agreement 'is really used' -> 'are not used'. Use 'commuting to work' rather than 'work life' for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, choose appropriate collective noun ('people'), and ensure subject-verb agreement ('bicycles are').