Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and articles, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details connected with linking words (for example, because / so). Also keep it within 3–4 sentences. Fix common errors: “when I was a child,” “unsafe for children,” and “as an adult.”

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought cycling was unsafe for children. However, as an adult I enjoy riding a scooter for short trips, and I find it convenient for errands and quick outings.

Sugerencia: Make your response grammatically correct, concise and include specific reasons with linking words. Use plural nouns correctly (“bikes”), and improve sentence structure: state the main idea, then give 1–2 clear reasons with examples or comparisons. Avoid vague phrases like “in rather than cars.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper than cars and cost less to maintain. For example, many people use motorcycles or bicycles for daily commuting since they save money on fuel and parking.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Missing article 'a' before 'child'. The phrase 'when I was a child' requires the indefinite article. Suggestion: include 'a' in age/role expressions like 'when I was a child' or 'when I was a teenager.'

× I didn't.

✓ I didn't.

This short answer is grammatically acceptable but redundant after the full sentence. It's fine to keep or omit it. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same idea immediately; either use the full sentence or the short answer.'

× My parents thought that riding bike is unsafe in child.

✓ My parents thought that riding a bike was unsafe for children.

Multiple issues: missing article before 'bike' and wrong tense/agreement and wrong preposition/pronoun. 'Riding a bike' requires 'a'. The reporting verb 'thought' puts the clause in past tense, so use 'was' not 'is'. 'For children' is the correct phrase rather than 'in child'. Suggestion: use 'riding a bike was unsafe for children.'

× So in in adult I like to ride scooters and enjoy going short rides.

✓ So as an adult I like to ride scooters and enjoy going on short rides.

Issues: duplicated 'in', incorrect article/form 'in adult' should be 'as an adult'. 'Ride scooters' is fine but 'going short rides' requires the preposition 'on' to form 'going on short rides.' Suggestion: use 'as an adult' and include 'on' before 'short rides.'

× Yes, I think bike are popular in my country because in rather than cars.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are more popular in my country than cars.

'Bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match general statement and 'are' agrees with 'bikes'. The original word order and extra 'in' and 'rather than' usage are incorrect. Also comparative structure needs 'more popular ... than'. Suggestion: say 'bikes are more popular than cars' or 'I think bikes are more popular in my country than cars are.'

× Bike is cheaper and low in price in my country so everyone prefers bike in my country.

✓ Bikes are cheaper in my country, so everyone prefers them.

Use plural 'Bikes' and plural verb 'are' for general statements. 'Low in price' is awkward; use 'cheaper' or 'less expensive.' Repeating 'in my country' is redundant and pronoun 'them' avoids repetition. Suggestion: 'Bikes are cheaper in my country, so everyone prefers them.'