Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Сфокусируйтесь на чётком и естественном ответе: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных предложения с деталями. Избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок: используйте правильные времена и предлоги (например, "learn to ride", "my father bought one for me"). Делайте предложения короче (не более 5 предложений).

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I wanted a bicycle when I was a child, and my father bought one for me. I learned to ride it when I was seven, and I practiced every weekend in the park near our house.

Sugerencia: Дайте чёткий ответ и подкрепите его конкретными причинами с использованием связок (например, "however", "because", "for example"). Избегайте бессвязных пауз и повторов. Употребляйте простые и точные фразы для описания наблюдений: "most people prefer to walk" или "cycling is common in parks".

Ejemplo: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer to walk or use public transport because the roads are busy and there are few bike lanes. However, cycling is more common in parks and some promenades, especially among young people.

× I had a bike dream when I was a child and in additional it was my aim to learn how ride it and my father bought and touched me when I was seven years old.

✓ I had a dream about a bike when I was a child, and additionally it was my aim to learn how to ride it; my father bought one and taught me when I was seven years old.

The sentence contains several past-tense and verb-form errors. Use 'had a dream about' rather than 'had a bike dream'. 'Additionally' is the correct adverb. The phrase 'learn how to ride' requires the infinitive 'to ride'. 'Bought and touched me' is incorrect: the intended verb is 'taught' (past tense of 'teach'). Maintain past tense throughout to match the time frame. Improve sentence flow by splitting with a comma and semicolon or separate sentences. Suggestions: use 'had a dream about', 'additionally', 'learn how to ride', and 'taught me'.

× I don't, I don't think so because I cannot say that every time when I walk King in Blvd. it's one of the most popular place in Baku.

✓ I don't think so because I cannot say that every time I walk along King Boulevard it is one of the most popular places in Baku.

This sentence has tense and agreement issues and awkward phrasing. 'I don't, I don't think so' is repetitive; use a single 'I don't think so'. 'Every time when I walk' should be 'every time I walk' or 'whenever I walk'. Use the preposition 'along' with a street or 'in' may work but 'along King Boulevard' is natural. 'It's one of the most popular place' has a singular/plural mismatch: use 'places'. Maintain present simple for general truth. Suggestions: remove repetition, use 'every time I walk', 'along', and 'places'.

× I can see, uh, people with bike, umm, our, my, our nationality more preferred to buy walking by, uh, walking by foot.

✓ I can see people with bikes; people of our nationality prefer to go on foot more often.

This sentence misuses verb forms and nouns. 'People with bike' needs plural 'bikes'. 'Our, my, our nationality' is disfluent—use 'people of our nationality'. 'More preferred to buy walking by' is incorrect: 'prefer' (present simple) should be followed by infinitive or gerund with clear structure. To say walking, use 'go on foot' or 'walk'. Use 'prefer to walk' or 'prefer walking'; here 'prefer to go on foot' or 'prefer to walk' fits. Maintain consistent present tense for habitual actions. Suggestions: use 'bikes', 'people of our nationality', and 'prefer to walk' or 'go on foot'.