Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is too short and unclear. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (when you had it, who gave it to you, how you used it). Keep it natural and avoid hesitations. Use linking words like “and” or “because” to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle from when I was about seven, and my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. I used it to ride to my friends’ houses and to the park every weekend, so it became my favorite way to spend free time.

Sugerencia: The answer is confusing and unorganized. Start with a clear opinion (yes/no/partly), then support it with two specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and correct simple grammar (subject-verb agreement, clear nouns). Keep to no more than five sentences.

Ejemplo: I think bikes were more popular in the 1990s than they are now. Back then many people used bicycles for daily travel and children played outside on bikes, but nowadays more families own cars and children prefer electronic devices. For example, when I was young most of my neighbours rode bikes to school, whereas today fewer children do that.

× Do you like some bikes are on back in 90s but right now because the people are more and only the children's like generators, they used to bikes but they all have to play with people and.

✓ Some people liked bikes back in the 1990s, but now fewer people ride them; only children usually do.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: unclear subject-reference, incorrect tense and time expression ('on back in 90s'), wrong quantifier ('the people are more'), incorrect possession/number ('children's'), and incoherent clauses. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Suggestions: 1) Break the idea into clear components: past preference, present situation, and who now rides bikes. 2) Use correct time expression 'back in the 1990s'. 3) Use 'some people' or 'people' as subjects rather than 'Do you like'. 4) Use comparative phrasing 'fewer people' to show decline. 5) Keep clauses logically connected with conjunctions or punctuation. Example improved sentences: 'Some people liked bikes back in the 1990s, but now fewer people ride them; only children usually do.'