Bike— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: (1) Nối câu mạch lạc và tránh ngắt quãng — hãy nói liên tục một câu hoàn chỉnh thay vì nhiều câu rời rạc. (2) Thêm vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú câu trả lời (ví dụ: tần suất, khoảng cách, cảm xúc). (3) Giữ độ dài câu không quá 5 câu và sử dụng từ nối như “so”, “until”, “because” để liên kết ý. Ví dụ cụ thể: hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu lý do hoặc mô tả ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I rode it to school almost every day because my house was only ten minutes away by bike, so it was a convenient and fun way to get there until I went to university.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: (1) Tránh tiếng thán từ không cần thiết như “Wow” — bắt đầu trực tiếp vào ý chính. (2) Sửa ngắt quãng và lỗi từ (ví dụ “The fats paints” không rõ nghĩa). (3) Nêu rõ nguyên nhân và ví dụ cụ thể: so sánh quá khứ và hiện tại, đề cập đến phương tiện thay thế (bus, metro, xe máy) và hậu quả (ít người dùng xe đạp). (4) Dùng liên từ như “however”, “because”, “as a result” để liên kết các ý.

Ejemplo: I think bikes were more popular in the past, but nowadays public transportation and motorbikes are more common because cities have improved bus and metro systems, so fewer people use bikes for daily commuting.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I. Rode my bike to school until. I went to the university.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I rode my bike to school until I went to university.

The original contains incorrect punctuation and sentence breaks that interrupt the sentence flow. Combine fragments into one sentence and use correct capitalization. Use a comma before the conjunction 'and' connecting two clauses. Also, 'rode' is the correct simple past form and 'university' does not need 'the' here. Suggestion: remove unnecessary periods, join clauses, and use correct capitalization and articles. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Wow. I think it was popular in the past, but nowadays with the development of public transportation and. The fats paints.

✓ Wow. I think bicycles were popular in the past, but nowadays with the development of public transportation and faster trains, they are less common.

Several issues: 'it' is vague—use 'bicycles' to match the question. 'Was' should agree with plural subject 'bicycles', so 'were' is correct (subject-verb agreement). The fragment 'and. The fats paints' is garbled; likely intended 'faster trains'. Use 'they' to refer back to 'bicycles'. Also use present simple 'are less common' to describe the current situation. Suggestion: replace vague pronoun with the noun, correct verb agreement, fix the garbled phrase to 'faster trains', and use an appropriate present-tense verb for the present situation. Grammar problem type ID:27