Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words and avoid repetition. Correct grammar (e.g., “listen to happy music,” “spend my time” → “spend time”).

Ejemplo: I prefer happy music because it reduces my stress and boosts my energy. For example, upbeat pop songs help me relax after a long day and keep me motivated when I work.

Sugerencia: Be specific and avoid unclear expressions like “track my battery.” Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (e.g., “I love hearing happy music,” “turn up my speaker and listen to it”). Provide one concrete example of when it excites you.

Ejemplo: Yes. Happy music usually makes me feel more energetic because of its fast tempo and cheerful lyrics. For instance, I often turn up the volume and dance to upbeat songs when I’m exercising or cleaning the house.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatically correct response with specific details about what you learned. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words like “umm.” Explain one or two concrete skills you gained and how they helped you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I attended a music class last year. My teacher taught me how to sing properly and read lyrics, and I learned basic vocal techniques like breathing and pitch control, which made singing more enjoyable and confident.

Sugerencia: Make your answer concise and natural. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., “listen to happy music,” “while I’m walking” or “in the shower”). Give one or two specific examples and explain briefly why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other activities. For example, I listen to upbeat songs when I do housework for my mom or when I walk to campus, because it makes chores and commuting more enjoyable.

× I always spend my time to listen happy music because it helps me reduce my stress and boost my energy, so I really enjoy this music every time I do.

✓ I always spend my time listening to happy music because it helps me reduce my stress and boost my energy, so I really enjoy this music whenever I do.

Use of preposition 'to' after 'spend time' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'spend time + -ing'. Also 'listen happy music' needs the preposition 'to' ('listen to music'). 'Every time I do' is awkward; 'whenever I do' or 'whenever I have the chance' is clearer.

× Of course, when I hear happy music, I can boost my energy and track my battery, so I really love hear happy music.

✓ Of course, when I hear happy music, it boosts my energy and recharges my battery, so I really love to hear happy music.

'I can boost my energy' is grammatically okay but unnatural here; using 'it boosts my energy' places the adverbial phrase correctly. 'Track my battery' is incorrect collocation; 'recharge my battery' is appropriate. 'Love hear' is missing 'to' (verb pattern: love to hear). Adjustments improve naturalness and verb patterns.

× Every time when I have free time, I always turn up my speaker and listen.

✓ Every time I have free time, I always turn up my speaker and listen to music.

'Listen' usually requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Also 'Every time when' is redundant; choose 'Every time' or 'When'. Added 'to music' to complete the verb object.

× I have attended a music class, my teacher taught me how to singing the song and umm give me about the knowledge of the song and the lyrics were so enjoyable with me.

✓ I attended a music class; my teacher taught me how to sing the song and gave me information about it, and the lyrics were very enjoyable.

Use simple past 'attended' to match the completed action (or 'I have attended' could be kept with different punctuation). 'Taught me how to singing' is incorrect: after 'how to' use base verb 'sing'. 'Give me about the knowledge' is ungrammatical; use 'gave me information about it' or 'taught me about the song'. 'Were so enjoyable with me' is awkward; use 'were very enjoyable.' Also corrected verb tense consistency and pronoun reference.

× I always turn on my speaker and listen happy music when I do housework for my mom or I walk or I shower.

✓ I always turn on my speaker and listen to happy music when I do housework for my mom, when I walk, or when I shower.

As before, 'listen' requires 'to' before its object. Also list items should be parallel: use 'when I walk' and 'when I shower' for consistent clause structure. Added commas for clarity.

× Yes, it's a good time for listening music and take my time.

✓ Yes, it's a good time to listen to music and relax.

'A good time for listening music' is awkward; use infinitive 'to listen to music' or 'for listening to music.' 'Take my time' can mean 'don't hurry' and sounds odd here; 'relax' or 'take some time for myself' fits better. Also 'listening' needs preposition 'to'.