Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar and use clear supporting details. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a short example. Avoid hesitation sounds and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: I prefer sad music because it helps me release stress and negative emotions. For example, after a long day of studying I often listen to slow piano tracks for about 30 minutes to calm down and think more clearly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, fix grammar and use linking words for coherence. Use one or two clear reasons and an example of when you choose happy music. Avoid contradictory phrases like "climb down"; choose precise verbs or adjectives.

Ejemplo: Yes. Upbeat songs make me feel more excited because they increase my energy and motivation. For instance, when I need to study for an exam or go for a run, I play lively pop songs to boost my focus and mood.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatically correct direct answer and add a specific detail about how you learn music informally. Replace repetitions and incorrect phrases with a concise explanation.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't taken formal music classes. I'm not interested in singing or playing instruments professionally, but I learn songs informally by watching online tutorials and practising on my keyboard at home.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, use linking words and specific details. Correct grammar (e.g. "viewing the wheel outside" unclear). Mention activities and the effect music has on you concisely.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while commuting to school on the MRT or when my mum drives me. I usually sing along and look out at the scenery, which helps me relax and feel peaceful during the journey.

× Umm I prefer sad music because it's helped me to release stress and negative emotion.

✓ Umm I prefer sad music because it helps me to release stress and negative emotions.

'It's helped' uses the present perfect ('has helped') which is awkward here; simple present 'helps' fits general habit. Also 'negative emotion' should be plural 'negative emotions' to match general concept. Use 'it helps me' to state a regular effect. Grammar problem type ID:9

× Uh, for instance I usually pee back set track to after school because studying is so stress for me.

✓ For instance, I usually play sad tracks after school because studying is very stressful for me.

Original sentence has multiple errors: 'pee back set track to' is incorrect word order and word choice; 'play sad tracks' conveys listening; 'after school' is correct placement. 'Studying is so stress for me' should be 'studying is very stressful for me' — adjective 'stressful' modifies 'studying'. This fixes word choice and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes of course umm upbeat songs make me feel more excited since it gave me a sense of happy and climb down.

✓ Yes, of course. Upbeat songs make me feel more excited since they give me a sense of happiness and calm down my mood.

'It gave' is past tense and singular, but the subject 'upbeat songs' is plural and the general statement needs present tense 'give'. 'Sense of happy' is incorrect noun form; use 'sense of happiness'. 'Climb down' is wrong idiom; 'calm down my mood' or 'calm me down' is appropriate. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID:9

× So when I stress I need motivation I will listen to umm happy music songs.

✓ So when I'm stressed and need motivation, I listen to happy songs.

'When I stress' is incorrect; use 'when I'm stressed' (present participle/adjective). 'I will listen' suggests future; general habit uses simple present 'I listen'. 'Happy music songs' is redundant; use 'happy songs'. This fixes tense, participle use, and redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Not really. I'm not interesting. I'm not, I'm not interested in it.

✓ Not really. I'm not interested in taking music classes.

'I'm not interesting' wrongly describes the speaker as boring; intended meaning is 'I'm not interested' which is passive/adjectival. Clarify object 'music classes' for completeness. This corrects sentence structure and word form. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Uh yeah, instrument and also song.

✓ Uh, I mean instruments and singing.

'Instrument and also song' is ungrammatical and vague. Use plural 'instruments' and change 'song' (noun) to 'singing' (gerund) to indicate activity. This clarifies the items mentioned. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I don't like to sings, but I prefer listening to music and learn it like informally.

✓ I don't like to sing, but I prefer listening to music and learning it informally.

'Sings' is incorrect; after 'to' use the base form 'sing'. Also parallel structure requires gerunds: 'listening' and 'learning'. 'Like informally' is awkward; 'learning it informally' clarifies manner. Fixes verb form and parallelism. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Yes umm, most of the time I listen to music when I go to school, travel by MRT or sometimes my mum fetch me.

✓ Yes, most of the time I listen to music when I go to school, travel by MRT, or when my mum fetches me.

'Travel by MRT or sometimes my mum fetch me' mixes structures. Add 'when' for parallel clauses. 'My mum fetch me' needs third person singular 'fetches'. Also add commas for clarity. Corrects preposition/structure and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Umm, I will sing along it and viewing the wheel outside, yeah, give me a peaceful sense, sense of peace.

✓ I will sing along to it and look at the scenery outside; it gives me a sense of peace.

'Sing along it' requires preposition 'to': 'sing along to it'. 'Viewing the wheel outside' is awkward; 'look at the scenery outside' or 'watch the scenery' is clearer. Use 'it gives me a sense of peace' for a correct main clause with proper pronoun reference. Fixes pronoun/preposition use and sentence cohesion. Grammar problem type ID:12