Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Use correct singular/plural forms and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 short sentences) and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "happy music" not "happy musics").

Ejemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood. For instance, upbeat pop songs with catchy rhythms and bright instrumentals make me feel more energetic. I often listen to pop when I need a quick mood boost.

Sugerencia: Give a direct yes/no answer then explain clearly. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases (e.g., "eventually may instance my boot" is unclear). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and provide a short specific example of how it affects you.

Ejemplo: Yes, happy music definitely makes me more excited because it has a fast tempo and energetic vocals. For example, when I listen to Ariana Grande or Taylor Swift, I feel more motivated to move and sing along.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give concise supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g., "bought myself an acoustic guitar", "learned basic chords") and avoid unclear acronyms or words ("UMM"). Mention methods or resources used and link ideas with words like "however" or "so".

Ejemplo: No, I haven't taken formal music classes, but I recently bought an acoustic guitar and learned basic chords by watching YouTube tutorials and using music apps. This informal practice has helped me play simple songs.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, structured response: state the general rule, then give brief examples. Fix grammar and incomplete sentence endings (e.g., "do it without music"). Use linking words like "however" and be specific about activities.

Ejemplo: It depends. If a task doesn't require much concentration, I listen to music—for example, when cleaning or commuting I play upbeat songs. However, I study without music so I can focus better.

× I prefer happy musics.

✓ I prefer happy music.

'Music' is an uncountable noun and should not take a plural form. Use the singular form 'music' when referring to the general concept. Suggestion: treat uncountable nouns (music, information, advice) as singular and do not add 's'.

× Happy musics will make me happy because they instantly boost my moods because of the catchy rhythm, beats and instrumentals.

✓ Happy music makes me happy because it instantly boosts my mood due to catchy rhythms, beats, and instrumentals.

Multiple issues: 'music' is uncountable (use singular 'music'); when speaking generally use present simple 'makes' and 'boosts'; 'mood' is usually singular in this context; parallel items should be plural or matched ('rhythms' with 'beats and instrumentals'). Suggestion: use singular for uncountable nouns, match verb number to singular subject, and maintain parallel structure in lists.

× Sometimes when I'm doing a task that does not require me to focus or concentrate heavily, I will open my music apps and listen to some catchy musics.

✓ Sometimes when I'm doing a task that does not require me to focus or concentrate heavily, I will open my music apps and listen to some catchy songs.

'Music' is uncountable and should not be pluralized; in this context 'songs' or 'tracks' is appropriate for countable items. Suggestion: use 'songs' or 'tracks' when you mean individual pieces, or 'music' when referring to the activity in general.

× Happy musics will make me happy because they instantly boost my moods because of the catchy rhythm, beats and instrumentals.

✓ Happy music makes me happy because it instantly boosts my mood due to catchy rhythms, beats, and instrumentals.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'music' (or uncountable noun treated as singular). Use 'makes' and 'boosts' for third person singular. Also 'mood' should be singular. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement: singular subjects take verbs with -s in present simple.

× For example, I really love listening to happy music such as songs in the pop genre.

✓ For example, I really love listening to happy music, such as pop songs.

Original sentence is mostly correct but word order can be improved: 'pop songs' is the natural collocation and a comma before 'such as' clarifies the example. Suggestion: prefer natural adjective-noun order ('pop songs') and use commas to set off examples.

× Absolutely happy music such as pop songs from Ariana Grande, Taylor Swift and Lady Gaga eventually may instance my boot.

✓ Absolutely. Happy music, such as pop songs from Ariana Grande, Taylor Swift, and Lady Gaga, can really boost me.

The original sentence has several structural and word-choice errors: missing punctuation after 'Absolutely'; 'eventually may instance my boot' is ungrammatical and contains wrong words ('instance' and 'boot'). Likely intended meaning is that such music 'can boost my mood' or 'energize me'. Suggestion: split into two sentences, use correct verbs ('can boost' or 'make me excited') and the noun 'mood'.

× I have never taken any official music classes, but so far I have recently bought myself a an acoustic guitar and I learnt playing the basic UMM only by watching through YouTube videos and installing music applications.

✓ I have never taken any official music classes, but recently I bought myself an acoustic guitar and I learned to play the basics only by watching YouTube videos and using music apps.

Several tense and form issues: 'have recently bought' and 'so far' together is awkward; simple past 'bought' fits with 'recently'; 'learnt' is acceptable but 'learned' is more common in some varieties; 'learned to play the basics' is the correct verb pattern (learn + to-infinitive) rather than 'learnt playing'; 'through YouTube' is unnecessary—use 'by watching YouTube videos'; 'installing music applications' should be 'using music apps'. Suggestion: use consistent tense, correct verb patterns (learn to do), and natural prepositions ('by watching', 'using').

× I learnt playing the basic UMM only by watching through YouTube videos and installing music applications.

✓ I learned to play the basics only by watching YouTube videos and using music apps.

After 'learn' the usual pattern is 'learn to do something' rather than 'learn doing something'. Also 'watching through' is incorrect; use 'watching YouTube videos'. 'Installing' an app refers to downloading it, but here the intended meaning is 'using' apps to practice. Suggestion: use 'learned to play' and 'by watching'/'by using'.

× I have never taken any official music classes, but so far I have recently bought myself a an acoustic guitar...

✓ I have never taken any official music classes, but recently I bought myself an acoustic guitar...

There is an extra article 'a an' which is incorrect. Use a single article 'an' before words beginning with a vowel sound (an acoustic). Also remove redundant adverbs 'so far' and 'recently' used together. Suggestion: use one appropriate article and avoid duplicate words.

× But if I'm studying or doing something that needs concentration then I will do it with my.

✓ But if I'm studying or doing something that needs concentration, then I will do it without music.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends with 'with my' which is unclear. Likely intended contrast is 'with music' vs 'without music' or 'without it'. Suggestion: complete the clause with the correct object ('music' or 'it') and include a comma before 'then' for clarity.

× I learnt playing the basic UMM only by watching through YouTube videos and installing music applications.

✓ I learned to play the basics only by watching YouTube videos and using music apps.

The preposition 'through' is unnecessary after 'watching' in this context; use 'by watching YouTube videos'. Also 'installing' is not the intended action; use 'using' as the correct preposition-less verb. Suggestion: use 'by' + gerund to indicate method and correct verb choice.

× But if I'm studying or doing something that needs concentration then I will do it with my.

✓ But if I'm studying or doing something that needs concentration, then I will do it without music.

The pronoun or possessive 'my' is incomplete and incorrect here. The speaker likely meant 'without music' or 'without it'. Suggestion: use a complete noun or pronoun ('it', 'music') rather than a lone possessive 'my'.

× they instantly boost my moods because of the catchy rhythm, beats and instrumentals.

✓ it instantly boosts my mood due to catchy rhythms, beats, and instrumentals.

Referring back to singular uncountable 'music' requires third person singular verbs 'makes/boosts' and singular noun 'mood'. Also ensure pronoun 'it' matches singular subject. Suggestion: maintain consistent subject reference and verb agreement.