Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: state your preference clearly in one topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Also correct tense/use (use present simple) and reduce redundancy (energetic repeated).

Ejemplo: I prefer happy music because it energises me. For example, when I go to the gym I listen to upbeat, loud tracks which help me keep a high pace and stay motivated throughout my workout.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same points. Use present simple and one linking phrase to add a clear example. Remove hesitation sounds and finish the sentence fully.

Ejemplo: Yes. Happy music makes me feel more energetic and motivated; for example, I always play upbeat tracks during exercise because they increase my pace and keep me focused on my routine.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct response first, then briefly explain why and provide a short future plan. Use correct grammar (I didn't have time; I'm fond of; in the future). Keep it to two sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't taken any music classes because I was busy studying medicine and didn't have time. However, I'm fond of music and in the future I will probably enroll in some music lessons to learn basic theory and singing.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then contrast with a brief explanation using linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing (divided my attention; remained). Be specific about activities where you do or don't listen to music.

Ejemplo: Generally no, because music divides my attention and I prefer to focus on one task at a time. However, I do listen to music when I'm relaxing or doing light chores, since gentle melodies help me unwind and reduce stress.

× Personally, I cherished happy music because it makes me energetic and whenever you do uh, workout or gym, I really prefer happy loud music that keeps me active and energetic.

✓ Personally, I prefer happy music because it makes me feel energetic, and when I work out I really prefer loud, happy music that keeps me active and energetic.

Errors: Past tense 'cherished' conflicts with present preference and should be present simple 'prefer' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'Whenever you do uh, workout or gym' is ungrammatical and uses wrong pronoun and noun forms; change to 'when I work out' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns). Word order and article use improved: 'happy loud music' -> 'loud, happy music' (ID 18: Incorrect order of adjectives). Suggestions: Use consistent present tense for current preferences, use first person consistently, remove filler words, place adjectives in natural order, and use 'work out' as a verb phrase.

× And in my case, I personally prefer happy music because I feel more energetic, motivated and excited, uh, whenever I listened the music.

✓ In my case, I personally prefer happy music because it makes me feel more energetic, motivated, and excited whenever I listen to music.

Errors: 'whenever I listened the music' uses past tense 'listened' incorrectly; should be present simple 'listen' to match habitual action (ID 6: Present tense issue). Also incorrect verb + preposition: 'listened the music' should be 'listen to music' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). 'I feel' and 'prefer' should be consistent with present tense. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual or general truths and include the correct preposition 'to' after 'listen'.

× And for example, I do workout with listening to a happy music and that make me feel.

✓ For example, I work out while listening to happy music, and that makes me feel energized.

Errors: 'I do workout' is incorrect verb phrase; use 'I work out' (ID 6: Present tense issue). 'with listening to a happy music' is incorrect structure and article use; use 'while listening to happy music' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and ID 22: Article errors). 'that make me feel' lacks an object and has subject-verb disagreement; should be 'that makes me feel energized' (ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors and ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: Use 'while' + gerund for simultaneous actions, omit unnecessary articles before uncountable 'music', ensure subject and verb agree, and complete the idea with an adjective like 'energized'.

× And no, in my case I was a medical student and had never time to take music classes, but I fond of taking a music class in In future I will probably go for music lectures.

✓ No. I was a medical student and never had time to take music classes, but I am fond of the idea of taking a music class. In the future I will probably attend music lectures.

Errors: 'had never time' uses incorrect word order; it should be 'never had time' (ID 5: Past tense issue and ID 26: Sentence structure errors). 'but I fond of taking a music class' omits the verb 'am' (ID 23: Sentence without a verb) and misuses article 'a' before 'music class' (ID 22: Article errors). 'in In future' is duplicated and should be 'In the future' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions/article). 'go for music lectures' is unnatural; use 'attend music lectures' or 'take music classes' (ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / word choice). Suggestions: Keep past tense for past states, include auxiliary verbs where needed ('am fond'), fix word order, use 'In the future' and prefer 'attend' for lectures.

× Uh, in my case, it divided my attention, so I prefer to do one thing at a time so that I remained focused.

✓ In my case, it divides my attention, so I prefer to do one thing at a time so that I remain focused.

Errors: 'it divided my attention' mixes past tense with present preference; use present simple 'divides' to describe a current tendency (ID 6: Present tense issue). 'so that I remained focused' uses past tense 'remained' incorrectly; should be present 'remain' to match 'prefer' (ID 6). Suggestion: Maintain consistent present tense when describing general habits or preferences.

× However, I listen to music when I feel relaxed and comfortable and it gives me a soothing effect to my brain.

✓ However, I listen to music when I feel relaxed and comfortable, and it has a soothing effect on my brain.

Errors: 'gives me a soothing effect to my brain' is awkward and uses incorrect preposition; use 'has a soothing effect on my brain' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and ID 8: Verb + -ing form issue in phrasing). 'gives me' can be replaced with 'has' for natural collocation. Suggestion: Use common collocations 'have/has a soothing effect on' and the preposition 'on' with 'brain'.