Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on clear grammar, concise structure and coherence. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and linking words (for example, 'because' or 'however'). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article use (e.g., 'it depends', 'I listen to').

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood: when I feel sad, I prefer emotional music because it helps me process my feelings. However, when I need energy or to relax on a trip, I listen to happy music because it refreshes my mind and makes me feel cheerful.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one clear, specific example. Use grammatical sentences with correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'it makes me imagine' or 'it reminds me of'). Avoid vague phrases like 'my things' or 'relics of happy music'. Use linking words such as 'for example' to introduce the example.

Ejemplo: Yes, happy music does make me more excited because it often puts me in a positive mood. For example, upbeat songs remind me of special moments with my partner and hearing the lyrics helps me relive those memories.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and clearer explanation. Begin with a short direct answer (Yes/No), then add a concise reason or brief detail. Correct mistakes like 'I taken' -> 'I took' and 'my teacher requested' and avoid unclear phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences and mention one specific memory or feeling from the class.

Ejemplo: Yes, I took music classes as a child. My teacher encouraged me to join, but I wasn’t very interested because I felt my voice was not good and I found it hard to sing in tune.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer and one or two specific examples of activities while listening to music. Correct unclear phrases (e.g., 'I connect my airport' -> 'I connect my earphones' or 'I turn on music'). Use linking words ('for example', 'so') and correct grammar (e.g., 'sometimes', 'when I iron'). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing chores. For example, on weekends I put on music while I clean the house or iron clothes because it makes the tasks feel faster and more enjoyable.

× Actually it depend on my mood that which type of music I want to listen.

✓ Actually it depends on my mood which type of music I want to listen to.

Subject-verb agreement and present tense: 'it' requires the verb 'depends' with an -s for third person singular. Also preposition 'to' is needed after 'listen'. Suggestion: use 'it depends' and 'listen to'.

× For example when I was sad so I listen emotional music whenever, whenever I was going for trip and some other reason for entertainment.

✓ For example, when I was sad I listened to emotional music, whenever I was going on a trip or for other reasons of entertainment.

Tense consistency and prepositions: the time clause 'when I was sad' is past tense, so the main verb should be past ('listened'). 'Listen to' requires 'to'. Use 'going on a trip' and 'other reasons' for clarity. Remove unnecessary 'so' and duplicate 'whenever'.

× So I listen happy music because if refresh my mind and moreover it feel me cheerful.

✓ So I listen to happy music because it refreshes my mind and makes me feel cheerful.

Subject-verb agreement and verb choice: 'listen to' requires 'to'. Use simple present 'refreshes' for third person singular 'it'. 'Feel me cheerful' is incorrect word order; use 'makes me feel cheerful'. Suggestion: 'it refreshes my mind and makes me feel cheerful.'

× Yes, happy music make me feel more excited because when I listen to happy music I imagine my things like for instance, I imagine my love story and more were like the things which I really like in happy music, the relics of happy music like I understand the lyrics of.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited because when I listen to it I imagine things, for instance my love story and other memories I like; I also understand the lyrics of happy songs.

Subject-verb agreement: 'happy music' requires 'makes' (third person singular). Pronoun use: repeat 'it' or 'happy music' consistently. Awkward phrases ('imagine my things', 'more were like') were clarified to 'other memories'. 'Relics of happy music' is incorrect; replace with 'happy songs' and 'I understand the lyrics.' Maintain present tense.

× Yeah, I taken music class in my childhood.

✓ Yeah, I took music classes in my childhood.

Past tense and plural: the correct past tense of 'take' is 'took'. 'Music class' is better plural 'music classes' if more than one; if only one, 'a music class'. Use 'in my childhood' or 'when I was a child.'

× When I was in school, my teacher request me to take a music class and I'm not interested at all because my voice is not pretty and when I take music class so I feel that how singer can sing **** centre actually it's really.

✓ When I was in school, my teacher asked me to take a music class but I wasn't interested because my voice wasn't good, and when I took the class I wondered how singers can sing in tune; it was really difficult.

Verb forms and pronouns: 'request me' should be 'asked me'. Maintain past tense 'wasn't interested' and 'took'. 'My voice is not pretty' is better as 'my voice wasn't good'. Clarify 'sing **** centre' to 'sing in tune' and finish the thought 'it was really difficult.' Pronouns and tense must be consistent.

× There's no minutes time I listen to music when I do other thing because sometime on weekend when I do cleaning of my home.

✓ There are no minutes when I don't listen to music while doing other things, because sometimes on weekends when I clean my home I play music.

Article and plural issues: the original is confusing. Use 'There are no minutes when I don't listen' to express constant listening. 'Other thing' should be 'other things'. Use 'sometimes on weekends' and 'clean my home'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and plural forms.

× So I connected my airport and I listened to music and moreover when I do iron because it feel like everything is doing hurry up play and I enjoy the things and also work.

✓ So I connect my earphones and listen to music; moreover, when I iron it feels like everything speeds up and I enjoy my work.

Incorrect word choice and prepositions: 'connected my airport' is wrong—likely 'connected my earphones' or 'turned on the music'. Use present simple for habitual action 'I connect... and listen'. 'Do iron' should be 'iron'. 'It feel like everything is doing hurry up play' corrected to 'it feels like everything speeds up.' Use 'enjoy my work' for clarity and correct verb agreement.