Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect pronouns. For example, say you prefer happy music and explain how it affects you with one concrete detail.

Ejemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood. For example, upbeat songs help me feel energetic and more motivated to start my day.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points linked logically. Correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and give a brief example.

Ejemplo: Yes. Happy music makes me feel excited because the fast tempo and lively lyrics boost my energy; for instance, I often feel more focused and ready to exercise after listening to an upbeat playlist.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, use correct tense and avoid fillers. Start with a clear statement about classes, then explain how you learn with a specific method and an example of what you learned.

Ejemplo: I haven't taken formal music classes; instead, I learn on my own using YouTube tutorials and Spotify playlists. For example, I followed a YouTube series to learn basic guitar chords and practiced them daily.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise topic sentence and one clear reason with a specific example. Correct grammar (use gerunds 'doing work' or 'doing assignments') and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas coherently.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing assignments because it helps me concentrate and boosts creativity. For example, I play instrumental playlists when writing essays to maintain focus without distracting lyrics.

× Of course I prefer happy music because they will give my happy, my happy days and also my my mood become more happy and not sad.

✓ Of course I prefer happy music because it makes me happy, brightens my days, and improves my mood.

The sentence uses the plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'happy music' (uncountable or singular concept) and incorrect possessive 'my happy'. Use 'it' or treat 'music' as uncountable. Verb forms were incorrect ('will give my happy' and 'become more happy'). Use present simple 'makes' for general preference and correct collocations: 'makes me happy', 'brightens my days', 'improves my mood'. Suggestions: replace 'they' with 'it' or rephrase to 'happy music makes me...'; use natural verbs 'makes', 'brightens', 'improves'.

× Yes, of course, happy music make me more excited, because my mood will become more cheerful and more more better mood and my mood, my positive mood will higher than before.

✓ Yes, of course, happy music makes me more excited, because my mood becomes more cheerful and my positive mood is higher than before.

Subject 'happy music' requires third-person singular verb 'makes' not 'make'. 'Will become' is unnecessary for general statements; use present simple 'becomes'. 'More more better' is ungrammatical; use 'more' or 'better'. Also use 'is higher' to compare state. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with singular subject and avoid redundant comparative words; use present simple for habitual/general effects.

× So far I'm not taking any music classes but I'm learn music by myself through YouTube, uh, Spotify and so on.

✓ So far I have not taken any music classes, but I am learning music by myself through YouTube, Spotify, and so on.

The phrase 'So far' indicates an action up to now, so present perfect 'have not taken' is appropriate rather than 'I'm not taking'. 'I'm learn' mixes present continuous with base verb; use 'I am learning' for ongoing action. Suggestions: use present perfect for experiences up to now and present continuous for ongoing activities.

× So it will make umm more easier to understand the music and so on.

✓ So it will make it easier to understand the music.

After 'make', the structure is make + object + base verb or 'make it + adjective'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' already comparative, so 'more' is redundant. Also include 'it' as the object for clarity: 'make it easier'. Suggestions: use 'make it easier' and avoid double comparatives like 'more easier'.

× Usually I'm listening to music when I'm doing my my work and also my assignment because the music can make me and give me more idea toward that excitement.

✓ Usually I listen to music when I do my work and my assignments because music gives me more ideas and makes me feel more excited.

Habitual actions use simple present ('I listen', 'I do'), not present continuous. 'My assignment' should be plural 'my assignments' or 'an assignment'. Phrase 'make me and give me more idea toward that excitement' is awkward: use 'gives me more ideas' and 'makes me feel more excited'. Suggestions: use simple present for routines, use plural for repeated tasks, and choose clear verbs 'gives' and 'makes me feel'.

× So usually I use music for my assignment, my assignment listing.

✓ So usually I use music while working on my assignments.

Repeating 'my assignment' is redundant and 'assignment listing' is unclear. Use 'while working on my assignments' or 'to help me with my assignments'. Also 'use music for' can be followed by a gerund phrase for clarity. Suggestions: avoid repetition and use natural collocations like 'work on my assignments' or 'help me study'.