Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and use natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid pluralizing “music,” and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Also correct relative clauses and article use.

Ejemplo: I prefer happy music because it usually makes me feel relaxed and cheerful. For example, upbeat songs lift my mood after a stressful day, so I tend to choose them over sad songs.

Sugerencia: Use clear grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid unclear words or phrases. Give one specific illustration of how happy music affects you, using linking words like “so” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: Yes, happy music makes me feel excited, so I often start tapping my feet or dancing. For example, when I listen to fast pop songs, I feel energized and more motivated to exercise.

Sugerencia: State your experience clearly and give specific details about what you learned. Use correct tense and natural collocations (e.g., “vocal lessons,” “breath control,” “technique”). Keep it to two or three concise sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I took vocal lessons for a year because I enjoy singing and wanted to improve. In class I learned breath control and pitch techniques, which helped me sing more steadily.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and make your reason clear. Begin with a direct answer, then provide one specific reason and an example. Avoid vague statements like “think others things.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually listen to music when I exercise because it helps me stay focused and motivated. For instance, I play upbeat playlists while running to keep a steady pace and distract myself from fatigue.

× I prefer happy musics because the main reasons that people listen music, which is to be happy and relaxed.

✓ I prefer happy music because the main reason people listen to music is to be happy and relaxed.

'Musics' is incorrect; 'music' is an uncountable noun so use singular form. 'Main reasons' should be 'main reason' to agree with singular structure. Also need the preposition 'to' after 'listen'. Rearranged clause for clarity: 'the main reason people listen to music is to be...'. Suggestion: treat 'music' as uncountable and use 'listen to'.

× So I think happy music is more useful than sad music.

✓ So I think happy music is more enjoyable than sad music.

'Useful' is not the best collocation here; comparing emotional effect, 'more enjoyable' or 'more uplifting' fits better. This is a word choice/quantifier/context issue. Suggestion: use adjectives that match the intended meaning (enjoyable, uplifting).

× Yes, happy music make me feel more excited, so I usually move my body with the MALDI and random music is become high, I will become more excited.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited, so I usually move my body to the melody and when the rhythm becomes faster, I become more excited.

Subject-verb agreement: 'music' is singular so verb needs 'makes'. Original contains unclear phrases: 'MALDI' likely 'melody' and 'random music is become high' should be 'when the rhythm becomes faster'. Also avoid switching tenses; keep present tense. Suggestion: use 'makes' for third person singular and clearer vocabulary: 'melody', 'rhythm becomes faster'.

× Yes, I learned singing before because I really enjoy singing and I want to improve my ability in singing so I learned some skills about how to sing more perfect such as the break control and.

✓ Yes, I learned singing before because I really enjoy singing and I wanted to improve my singing ability, so I learned some skills on how to sing better, such as breath control.

Tense consistency: 'I want' should match context of learning in the past: 'I wanted'. 'Ability in singing' is awkward; use 'singing ability'. 'More perfect' is incorrect; use 'better'. 'Break control' is likely 'breath control'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct collocations: 'learned skills on how to sing better' and 'breath control'.

× Yes, I always listening music when I'm doing sports because I like to running so I think listening music can help me more focus on doing sports.

✓ Yes, I am always listening to music when I'm doing sports because I like running, so I think listening to music helps me focus more on exercising.

'Always listening' needs auxiliary 'am' for present continuous. Use 'listening to music' with preposition 'to'. 'I like to running' should be 'I like running' (verb form). 'Can help me more focus' is incorrect; use 'helps me focus more'. Suggestion: use correct progressive form 'I am always listening to music', include 'to' after 'listening', and use base verb or gerund correctly after 'like'.

× So I want to think others things so it will not disturb me.

✓ So I want to think about other things so that they will not disturb me.

Incorrect verb and pronoun use: 'want to think others things' should be 'want to think about other things'. 'So it will not disturb me' is vague; 'so that they will not disturb me' refers to 'other things'. Suggestion: use 'think about' and ensure pronoun agrees with plural 'things' ('they').