Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, use present tense, avoid repetition and clarify your reasons with linking words. Keep answers within 3–4 clear sentences. For example, start with a topic sentence saying which you prefer, then give two concise reasons with linking words (because/so) and a short personal example.

Ejemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me relax. For example, after a long day of studying, listening to cheerful songs reduces my stress and makes me feel more energetic. Therefore I usually choose upbeat playlists when I want to feel better.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and reduce hesitations. Use clearer linking words (for example/such as/so) and give a specific situation and result. Limit filler words and correct grammar (it helps me, not it help me).

Ejemplo: Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited because it reduces stress after a busy day. For instance, when I finish an assignment, I play upbeat songs and I immediately feel more energetic and motivated to keep working.

Sugerencia: Respond briefly and organize your answer: say whether you have attended, give a clear reason, then express your opinion or future intention. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'music classes are expensive', 'I have never attended'). Avoid confusing phrases.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken music classes because they are quite expensive. However, I would like to join one in the future since music is a hobby of mine and I want to learn to play an instrument.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence, a logical reason and a concise example. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'it helps me work faster' not 'advertise me'). Avoid unclear or repeated fragments. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other tasks because it helps me concentrate and work faster. For example, when I cook or tidy my room, upbeat music keeps my pace and makes boring chores more enjoyable.

× I preferred happy music because happy music would help me to feel good.

✓ I prefer happy music because happy music helps me feel good.

The student used 'preferred' (past) and 'would help' which do not match the general present preference question. Use simple present 'prefer' for habits/preferences and 'helps' for third-person singular subject. Suggestion: use present tense for general preferences and ensure subject-verb agreement (music helps).

× Yes and also happy music is good music because it make you to be relaxed, it make you to not be stressing again.

✓ Also, happy music is good because it makes you relaxed and helps you stop feeling stressed.

Pronoun and verb forms are incorrect: 'it make' should be 'it makes' for third-person singular; 'make you to be relaxed' and 'to not be stressing' are unidiomatic. Use 'makes you relaxed' and 'helps you stop feeling stressed'. Remove unnecessary 'to' before adjectives or gerunds.

× Why sad music would make me to feel love?

✓ Why would sad music make me feel love?

Word order and unnecessary 'to' are incorrect for a question. Use auxiliary 'would' before subject for a question ('Why would sad music...') and omit 'to' before the bare infinitive 'make'.

× I can say happy music help me to feel more excited because after a busy day or after umm after doing my assignment or whatever when I'm stressed it help me to to reduce my stress and to feel more excited when understanding.

✓ I can say happy music helps me feel more excited because after a busy day or after doing my assignments when I'm stressed, it helps reduce my stress and makes me feel better.

Use simple present for habitual effects: 'helps' not 'help', and 'helps... reduce' rather than 'help me to to reduce'. Remove filler 'umm' and correct noun plural 'assignments'. 'Feel more excited when understanding' is unclear; replaced with 'makes me feel better' for natural expression.

× Not really because for you to take a music classes you have to pay and the amount was very height.

✓ Not really, because to take music classes you have to pay and the amount was very high.

Incorrect article 'a' before plural 'classes' and wrong adjective 'height' instead of 'high'. Also simplify structure: 'for you to take a music classes' -> 'to take music classes'.

× Next for your never attend a music classes.

✓ Also, I never attended music classes.

Pronoun 'your' is incorrect; should be first person 'I'. Tense should be past 'attended' if referring to past experience, and no article before plural 'music classes'.

× Why? I really wanted to attend the music classes because music is one of my hobbies.

✓ I really want to attend music classes because music is one of my hobbies.

Mixed tenses: student uses past 'wanted' though speaking about a current desire; use present 'want' if desire continues. Also remove 'the' before 'music classes' unless specific classes are meant.

× Yes, I like understanding music.

✓ Yes, I like learning about music.

'Understanding music' is unusual; 'learning about music' or 'understanding music' with a different structure is more natural. Use 'learning about' to express interest in studying music.

× Yes, I listen to music when doing other things because it advertise me also be it make me work faster.

✓ Yes, I listen to music when doing other things because it motivates me and makes me work faster.

'Advertise me' is incorrect; likely meant 'motivates me'. Replace with 'motivates me and makes me work faster'. Ensure verb 'makes' agrees with singular 'it'.

× For example, if I am sling to my if I am trying to if I am sling tomato, uh one listen music, you make me to work faster to be fast in on my work on whatever I am doing.

✓ For example, if I am doing chores like slicing tomatoes and listening to music, it helps me work faster on whatever I am doing.

Original sentence is disfluent and ungrammatical: unclear verbs ('sling', repeated fragments) and pronoun confusion. Simplify to a clear conditional with correct verbs: 'doing chores like slicing tomatoes' and 'listening to music' with 'it helps me work faster'. Remove filler words and unnecessary 'to'.

× That's why I can say working with music is advanced.

✓ That's why I can say working with music is more efficient.

'Advanced' is incorrect in this context; the student likely means 'more efficient' or 'faster'. Use an adjective that describes improved performance (efficient, faster, more productive).