Music— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unnecessary phrases (e.g. “first of all,” “worthy to mention”) and minor grammar errors (subject-verb agreement: "depends" → "depend" with plural subject or adjust structure). Use linking words (e.g. "however", "so") only when needed and keep total length under five sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer different kinds of music depending on my mood. If I'm feeling upbeat, I usually choose energetic, fast-paced songs to stay motivated; however, when I feel down, I listen to slow, mellow tracks to reflect and calm myself.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and filler words. Give a single clear answer, then one concise reason and a specific example. Fix small grammar mistakes ("It keep" → "It keeps") and reduce hesitations ("uh"). Aim for two to three sentences with a linking word (e.g. "because").

Ejemplo: Yes, happy music does make me more excited because upbeat rhythms and lively melodies boost my energy. For example, when I play upbeat pop or dance songs in the morning, I feel more motivated and focused throughout the day.

× I prefer listening to music rather than to watch a movie or even to read a book.

✓ I prefer listening to music rather than watching a movie or even reading a book.

When using 'prefer' followed by a gerund, the parallel structure requires gerunds in both parts: 'listening... rather than watching...' Using 'to watch' breaks parallelism. Use the -ing form for both verbs for correct and natural structure.

× Now, my preferences on music actually depends on my mood on a certain day.

✓ Now, my preferences in music actually depend on my mood on a certain day.

The subject 'my preferences' is plural, so the verb should be 'depend' (plural form). Also, the common preposition is 'in music' rather than 'on music'. Correct subject-verb agreement and preposition choice improve grammaticality.

× If I'm feeling positive, then I would like to listen to upbeat music.

✓ If I'm feeling positive, then I like to listen to upbeat music.

The conditional 'if' clause describes a general habitual situation; use present tense in the main clause ('I like') rather than 'would like' which implies a hypothetical or polite request. Use present simple for habitual preferences.

× On the other hand, if I'm feeling a bit sad, then I would listen to slow music.

✓ On the other hand, if I'm feeling a bit sad, then I listen to slow music.

For habitual actions in conditional 'if' sentences, use present simple in the result clause ('I listen') instead of 'would listen', which implies a hypothetical. This matches the general preference being described.

× It keep, it keeps my energy up for that day.

✓ It keeps my energy up for that day.

The correct singular verb for the subject 'it' is 'keeps'. The repeated fragment 'It keep, it keeps' appears as self-correction in speech; the written correction should use only the correct form. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'it keeps'.

× I think it's worthy to mention that I am a music person.

✓ I think it's worth mentioning that I am a musical person.

The phrase 'worthy to mention' is non-idiomatic. Use 'worth mentioning'. Also, 'a music person' is awkward; 'a musical person' or 'someone who likes music' is natural. 'Worth' is followed by a gerund ('mentioning').