Teachers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add a specific reason or an example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes. My favourite teacher at primary school taught Hindi. She was patient and always explained difficult words with simple stories, which helped me improve quickly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense and fewer hesitations. Give a brief reason and one supporting detail with a linking word (because, although, however).

Ejemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I prefer working in technology. However, I do have qualities such as patience and a willingness to help others.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetition, use linking words and give a specific example of how she supported students to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember my high-school Hindi teacher. She was very supportive and often gave extra tutoring after class for students who were struggling, which helped many improve their grades.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Structure the answer: state yes, then two specific ways you keep in touch, linked with connecting words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I keep in touch with my primary-school teachers. For example, I contact them for career advice, and I also invite them to family events like my wedding and birthdays.

Sugerencia: Use past tense when describing past help and make ideas clear and concise. Give two specific examples and link them (for example, additionally). Avoid unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: She shaped my future by giving clear career advice and encouraging my interests. Additionally, she taught me social values and simple breathing techniques to manage exam stress.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Give one clear reason using linking words (because, therefore) and avoid repetition. Provide a short example to support your reason.

Ejemplo: No, I prefer my high-school teachers because I was more mature then and could understand their explanations better. For example, in high school I could follow lessons and choose subjects that matched my interests.

× Yes, in my childhood I have a favorite teacher in in my school.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I had a favorite teacher at my school.

The sentence refers to a past time ('in my childhood'), so the present tense 'have' is incorrect. Use past tense 'had'. Also use preposition 'at' for school and remove duplicate 'in'.

× She was taught me Hindi and she was very helpful in nature and respectful toward our needs.

✓ She taught me Hindi and she was very helpful and respectful toward our needs.

The passive construction 'was taught me' is incorrect; the correct active verb is 'taught'. 'Helpful in nature' is awkward; use 'helpful'.

× She was very kind and respectful.

✓ She was very kind and respectful.

Sentence is correct but repeats similar praise; no grammatical change needed. (Kept for clarity.)

× No, in my childhood, I don't want to be a teacher and as an adult I don't think I am.

✓ No, when I was a child I did not want to be a teacher, and as an adult I still do not think I am suited to be one.

Talking about past desire requires past tense 'did not want'. The second clause needs clearer present-tense phrasing; 'I don't think I am' is incomplete—add 'suited to be one'.

× Uh, I have that qualities that uh, required in a teacher as a patience and, uh, volunteer qualities.

✓ I do not have the qualities required in a teacher, such as patience and a willingness to volunteer.

'That qualities' should be 'the qualities' and verb agreement requires 'required'. The sentence also needs articles and clearer nouns: 'patience' is a noun, and 'volunteer qualities' is unclear—use 'a willingness to volunteer'.

× Yes, I still remember the teacher I have in my high school and the teacher taught me Hindi.

✓ Yes, I still remember the teacher I had in high school who taught me Hindi.

Use past tense 'had' for a past relationship and combine clauses with 'who taught' for clarity. 'My high school' can be 'high school'.

× She was very kind and respectful and very supportive for uh, the learners.

✓ She was very kind, respectful, and very supportive of the learners.

Use 'supportive of' rather than 'supportive for'. Add commas for list clarity.

× Uh, she was very helpful for the students who were weak at subjects on.

✓ She was very helpful for the students who were weak in subjects.

Use 'weak in subjects' not 'weak at subjects on'. Remove extra preposition 'on'.

× Yes, I am still in touch with my, with my teachers from primary school.

✓ Yes, I am still in touch with my teachers from primary school.

Original has repetition 'with my, with my'. Remove duplicate. Tense 'am' is correct for current state.

× Uh, I contact with, I contacted with them whenever I need their assistant for my career and future.

✓ I contact them, or I have contacted them, whenever I need their assistance with my career and future.

Do not use 'contact with'; use 'contact' directly with object. 'Assistant' is incorrect; use 'assistance'. For repeated past/present action, 'contact' or 'have contacted' works; keep consistency.

× On the other hand, I also invited them in my social events like marriage, birthday parties and functions and she also called me.

✓ I also invite them to my social events like weddings, birthday parties, and functions, and they sometimes call me.

Use present tense 'invite' for habitual actions; preposition 'to' is correct for events. 'Marriage' should be 'weddings'. The singular 'she also called me' is unclear; use 'they sometimes call me' if referring to multiple teachers.

× She helps me to shape my future.

✓ She helped me to shape my future.

Refers to past teacher whose help occurred in the past; use past tense 'helped'.

× She gives me career advice when I help it help the most.

✓ She gave me career advice when I needed it most.

Original is unclear and ungrammatical. Use past tense 'gave' and the correct phrase 'when I needed it most.'

× On the other hand other hand, she helps me to learn social values and deep breathing techniques to elevate the stressful conditions.

✓ She also helped me learn social values and deep-breathing techniques to cope with stressful situations.

Fix redundant phrase 'On the other hand other hand'. Use past tense 'helped'. 'Elevate the stressful conditions' is incorrect; use 'cope with stressful situations'. Hyphenate 'deep-breathing'.

× No, I like my high school teachers more than my primary school teachers.

✓ No, I prefer my high school teachers to my primary school teachers.

'Like ... more than' is acceptable but 'prefer ... to' is clearer. Keep meaning but adjust phrasing.

× And in my opinion I think I am way more mature in my high school than my primary school and teachers.

✓ In my opinion, I was much more mature in high school than in primary school.

Comparing maturity at different past stages requires past tense 'was' and correct comparison structure 'in high school than in primary school'. Remove extraneous 'and teachers'.

× I can understand teachers idea more clearly in high school and I'm able to understand my I'm able to understand and choose.

✓ I could understand teachers' ideas more clearly in high school, and I was better able to understand and make choices.

Original repeats phrases and lacks possessive; use 'teachers' ideas' and past tense 'could'/'was better able'. Clarify 'understand and choose' to 'understand and make choices'.