Teachers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise, correct grammar (use singular/plural, articles, pronouns), avoid filler words, and add one specific example of what the teacher did. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to clarify. For instance, say who the teacher is, why you like them, and give one specific example of a helpful action.

Ejemplo: Yes. My favorite teacher is my mother-tongue teacher because he is well educated and very supportive. For example, he always uses clear, real-life examples to explain difficult grammar, which helped me improve quickly. As a result, I enjoy studying that subject more.

Sugerencia: State your intention clearly, reduce repetition and fillers, give specific reasons and one brief personal detail. Use linking words (because, also) to connect ideas and finish the thought. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping others learn new skills and ideas. Also, teaching is a highly respected profession in my country, and several family members are teachers, which inspires me to follow the same path.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar (use 'her name is', 'a very respected teacher'), avoid unclear phrases like 'it's a school' and explain the link between her teaching and your achievement. Use one or two concrete examples of her methods and a linking word to show cause and effect.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still remember my English teacher, her name is Shoyra. She was a very respected teacher because she gave clear lessons and strict but fair discipline; for example, she made us practice speaking every day, which greatly improved my exam scores.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct repetition and tense. Provide a clear reason and, if possible, mention one attempt to reconnect or a feeling about it. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ejemplo: Unfortunately, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved to the city after graduation and several of them have retired or relocated. I would like to contact them someday, but I haven’t had the opportunity yet.

Sugerencia: Clarify names and fix grammar. State one or two specific ways the teacher helped (methods, examples, encouragement) and use linking words to show cause and effect. Avoid contradictions like 'he can't' followed by positive outcomes.

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher helped me especially in math by explaining problems step by step and giving many real examples. Because I struggled with concepts like fractions, his clear explanations and extra practice problems greatly improved my confidence and grades.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, avoid vague or contradictory adjectives (e.g., 'funny' vs 'stressful'), and give specific comparisons (teaching style, support). Use linking phrases like 'because' and 'for example' and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because their lessons were more engaging and supportive. For example, my primary teacher used games and stories to explain concepts, which made learning enjoyable and less stressful than my high school classes.

× He's one of the very, uh, well educated person and he, he always give me really good examples to learning new skills and he's one of the very good person for.

✓ He's one of the most well-educated people, and he always gives me really good examples for learning new skills; he's a very good person.

Original has adjective/adverb errors and word form issues: 'well educated' should be hyphenated as 'well-educated' and used to modify 'people' (plural) not 'person' when saying 'one of the...'. 'Very' with 'one of the' should be replaced by 'most' to form correct superlative phrase. Subject-verb agreement also applies for 'gives' (see other types) but primary error here is adjective use and noun number. Suggestion: use 'well-educated people' and 'gives' and simplify phrasing.

× he, he always give me really good examples to learning new skills

✓ he always gives me really good examples for learning new skills

Verb for third person singular requires -s: 'give' should be 'gives'. Also 'to learning' is incorrect preposition/verb form; use 'for learning' or 'to help me learn'. Suggestion: attach -s for third person and use 'for learning' or 'to help me learn'.

× This is because, uh, I, I would like to teach others to learn new, new things and it's uh, this job is very respectful job in our country and also, uh, one of the members of my family who are teacher and I want to.

✓ This is because I would like to teach others new things, and this job is very respected in our country; also, one of the members of my family is a teacher and I want to follow them.

'Very respectful job' is incorrect collocation; use 'respected' to describe a job. 'One of the members of my family who are teacher' has quantifier and number issues: 'members...who are teacher' should be 'a member of my family is a teacher' or 'one of my family members is a teacher'. Suggestion: use 'respected' and correct singular/plural agreement for family member.

× She's name is Shoyra.

✓ Her name is Shoyra.

Use the possessive pronoun 'her' before a noun; 'she's' is a contraction of 'she is', which is incorrect here. Suggestion: replace 'She's' with 'Her'.

× She was one of the very respectful teacher and it's, it's a school.

✓ She was a very respected teacher at my school.

'Very respectful teacher' is wrong because 'respectful' describes someone who shows respect; use 'respected' to mean admired. 'One of the... teacher' again incorrect article/number; simpler: 'a very respected teacher at my school.' Suggestion: use 'respected' and specify 'my school'.

× So after, uh, her result, I achieved this score.

✓ As a result of her teaching, I achieved this score.

'After her result' is unclear and wrong tense/phrase. Use 'as a result of her teaching' or 'because of her help' to indicate cause; 'achieved' is correct past tense but the cause phrase needs correction. Suggestion: use clear causal phrase 'as a result of her teaching'.

× Unfortunately, I am not really in touch with my primary school teacher.

✓ Unfortunately, I am not really in touch with my primary school teachers.

Context later mentions multiple teachers; if referring to all primary teachers, plural 'teachers' fits. If singular, keep 'teacher' but following sentence lists 'my primary school teachers may be retired', so plural is intended. Suggestion: keep number consistent.

× This is because after I graduated the school I moved to city center and and I and also my primary school teachers may be retired or moved to other cities.

✓ This is because after I graduated from the school, I moved to the city center, and my primary school teachers may have retired or moved to other cities.

Missing preposition 'from' after 'graduated'. Use 'moved to the city center' with article 'the'. 'May be retired' should be 'may have retired' to indicate past possibility. Remove extra 'and' repetitions. Suggestion: include 'from', use articles, and use perfect modal 'may have' for past events.

× Uh my favorite teacher helped me a lot especially SH.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me a lot, especially Mr. SH.

Add appropriate title or clarify name; also remove filler 'Uh'. Pronoun issue minimal but clarity improves with title and punctuation. Suggestion: use full name or title for formality.

× He gave me very good uh education for subjects I suffer a lot especially in math.

✓ He gave me very good instruction for subjects I struggled with a lot, especially math.

'Education for subjects I suffer' is ungrammatical; use 'instruction' or 'education in subjects I struggled with'. 'Suffer' is wrong verb; 'struggled' (past tense) fits. Suggestion: use 'struggled with' and 'instruction' or 'help'.

× This is because I suffer struggle with math and he can't He was able to give me very good examples for.

✓ This is because I struggled with math, and he was able to give me very good examples.

Original is ungrammatical: 'I suffer struggle' mixes tenses and nouns; 'can't He was able' is fragmented. Use past tense 'struggled' to match 'helped' and a single coherent clause: 'he was able to give me very good examples.' Suggestion: simplify to clear past tense clauses.

× Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

✓ Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically acceptable as a question comparing two groups. No error from the provided list.

× Absolutely yes, because my primary school still uh school teacher was able to give us very good education and he, he was very well educated person.

✓ Absolutely yes, because my primary school teacher was able to give us very good education, and he was a very well-educated person.

Remove redundant words 'still uh school'. Use 'teacher' singular and include article 'a' before 'very well-educated person'. Hyphenate 'well-educated.' Suggestion: remove fillers and ensure articles are present.

× He uh holds class very funny and very endless stressful.

✓ He made classes very enjoyable and not very stressful.

'Holds class very funny' is incorrect collocation; use 'made classes very enjoyable' or 'conducted classes in a fun way'. 'Very endless stressful' is ungrammatical; 'not very stressful' or 'less stressful' conveys intended meaning. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives ('enjoyable', 'stressful') and correct modifiers.