Teachers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more concise, correct grammar and give one specific example of how she helped. Use a clear topic sentence, one supporting detail, and a linking word. Avoid repetition and tense errors.

Ejemplo: Yes. My English teacher is my favorite because she always encouraged me and corrected my mistakes kindly. For example, she stayed after class to explain grammar points I struggled with, which helped me improve my writing quickly.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer (yes/no), explain briefly why with one or two reasons, using correct tense and linking words. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: I used to want to be a teacher when I was a child, but now I don’t plan to become one. Although I enjoyed studying with good teachers, I prefer to pursue a career in technology because it matches my skills and interests.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and tell a clear short story with accurate grammar, linking words and specific result. State who, what happened, and the outcome in two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes. I remember one English teacher who scolded me publicly for low marks, which motivated me to work harder. As a result, in the next exam I improved to about 70–75% and she praised my progress.

Sugerencia: Use a natural phrase like “in touch with” and expand slightly with a reason. Keep it concise and grammatical, with a linking word if giving a reason.

Ejemplo: No, I’m not in touch with my primary or secondary school teachers because I moved cities after finishing school and lost contact with them.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two concrete examples of help, using linking words to connect ideas and correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: She helped me in several ways. For instance, she encouraged regular practice by assigning extra exercises and she gave constructive feedback, which improved my confidence and grammar.

Sugerencia: Give a clear comparative answer and a brief specific reason. Use correct time references and avoid repeating numbers or words.

Ejemplo: No, I prefer my high school teachers because I have clearer memories of them. I can recall their lessons and the help they gave, whereas my primary school teachers taught me many years ago so I remember less detail.

× She taught me, she taught me so well and always appreciate me when whenever I am a go, when I am wrong in any in any field.

✓ She taught me so well and always appreciated me when I did well, and encouraged me when I was wrong in any field.

The student mixed past and present forms. 'Taught' is past, so verbs referring to teacher's actions should be past: 'appreciate' -> 'appreciated'. 'Whenever I am a go' is ungrammatical and unclear; replaced with 'when I did well'. Use past tense 'was wrong' to match time frame. Also removed repetition and redundant words for clarity.

× Yes, when I am when I am a child, I always think I am I am being a teacher in future.

✓ When I was a child, I always thought I would be a teacher in the future.

Refers to past habitual thought, so use past tense 'was' and 'thought' rather than present. 'I am being a teacher' is incorrect for this meaning; use 'would be a teacher' or 'would become a teacher' to express future-in-past.

× But now I am a now I am a 25 years old.

✓ But now I am 25 years old.

Redundant words and incorrect article use. Use 'I am 25 years old' (no 'a' before age with 'years old'). Remove repeated 'now'.

× But right now I I don't be a teacher. I don't be be a teacher because this this.

✓ But right now I am not a teacher because of this.

'Don't be' is incorrect in present simple; use 'am not' for present state. Remove duplicated words and clarify 'because of this' to indicate a reason.

× Yes I always remember my English teacher once a time he ** *** shouted on me so bad in front of all class for a former Marks and next time when I am examined I I got 7075% so she appreciate and.

✓ Yes, I always remember my English teacher. One time he shouted at me very loudly in front of the whole class because of my poor marks, and the next time I was examined I got 70–75%, so she appreciated me.

Multiple problems: 'once a time' -> 'one time'; 'shouted on me' -> 'shouted at me'; 'so bad' -> 'very loudly' or 'harshly'; 'all class' -> 'the whole class'; 'for a former Marks' unclear, interpreted as 'because of my poor marks'; tense consistency: 'when I am examined' -> 'when I was examined'; 'I I got 7075%' formatted to '70–75%'; 'she appreciate' -> 'she appreciated' to match past. Also corrected pronoun inconsistency between 'he' and 'she'—kept 'he' for the shouting and 'she' for appreciating as per original but clarified sentence separation for coherence.

× No, I am not touching my primary school teachers and also not secondary school teachers.

✓ No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers, nor with my secondary school teachers.

'Touching' is wrong; use the idiom 'in touch with' to mean 'in contact with'. Also add 'nor with' for parallel negative structure and include articles as needed.

× She helped me in many ways. She always ask me to learn everything, repeat and repeat and always encourage me to do this.

✓ She helped me in many ways. She always asked me to learn everything, to repeat things, and encouraged me to do so.

Past narrative requires past forms: 'ask' -> 'asked', 'encourage' -> 'encouraged'. Add 'to' for infinitive 'to repeat' and 'do so' for clarity. Remove repetitive phrasing 'repeat and repeat'.

× No, I like my high school teachers more than primary school teachers because primary school teachers I I was not remember that teachers because it's a 25 years 23 or 4 years ago.

✓ No, I prefer my high school teachers to my primary school teachers because I do not remember my primary teachers; that was 23 or 24 years ago.

Use 'prefer ... to' for comparisons. 'I I was not remember' is incorrect — use 'I do not remember' or 'I did not remember'. Clarify time expression to '23 or 24 years ago'. Ensure tense consistency and remove duplicated words.

× I study at a primary school teacher so I don't remember about her.

✓ I attended primary school, so I don't remember her.

'I study at a primary school teacher' is ungrammatical. Use 'I attended primary school' for past education. Remove unnecessary 'about' after 'remember' and correct pronoun reference 'her' for the teacher.