Part 1
Examinador
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Candidato
Yes, uh, when I was in the sixth standard, uh, data time, Mr. Sunita, uh, she is one of my favorite teacher. She teach me uh, English grammar and he is very in nice behaviour.
Examinador
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidato
Yes, of course in future if I have a chance I will definitely make a teacher because I think teacher job is very responsible and and very honest for student. If I have chance I definitely.
Examinador
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Candidato
Yes, I remember, uh, when I had in fifth standard, uh, that that day, teacher teacher day, uh, that it. And uh, that time I mimicry over Sunita, Madam, she, she is my English teacher.
Examinador
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Candidato
Yes, of course, I definitely touch my primary school teacher on uh Instagram, uh, and Facebook also and see always, uh, see always recall media today, uh, that time I uh, did a many mistakes and he.
Examinador
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Candidato
I remember when I was in college, uh, I do I did BSc nursing degree that time I confused on making a project. Uh, my uh, college teachers help me how to make a project and how it.
Examinador
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Candidato
Usually I uh, I like both primary and secondary school teacher, but I did not clearly remember primary school teacher because that time I was little little child and I clearly remind my secondary school teacher.
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the teacher and their role, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitation sounds (uh) and grammar mistakes (subject-verb agreement, correct gender/title). Use linking words like because to connect reason.
Ejemplo: Yes. My favorite teacher was Mrs. Sunita, who taught me English in sixth grade because she explained grammar clearly and was very kind and patient with students.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then explain briefly why with specific reasons and one example. Use correct verb forms (become a teacher), avoid repetition, and use linking words like because or therefore.
Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to become a teacher in the future because I enjoy helping students learn and I believe it is a very responsible and rewarding job. For example, I want to support students who struggle with grammar so they gain confidence.
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid unclear storytelling. State who you remember and why, giving one clear specific memory. Remove filler words and use past tense properly. Use linking phrase such as I remember because or One memorable time was when...
Ejemplo: Yes. I still remember my fifth-grade English teacher, Mrs. Sunita. One memorable moment was when I performed a mimicry of her on Teacher's Day, which made the class laugh and brought us closer.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Give a clear yes/no then specify how you keep in touch and what you feel when you see them. Use correct verbs (keep in touch, follow on Instagram/Facebook) and avoid confusing phrases. Provide one specific example of interaction.
Ejemplo: Yes. I keep in touch with some primary school teachers on Instagram and Facebook, and I often look at old photos they post. Seeing those pictures reminds me of the funny mistakes I made as a child.
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: Answer directly by describing a specific way the teacher helped you. Use correct tense and complete sentences. Include a brief explanation of the method or result, linked with because or so, to show impact.
Ejemplo: My favorite teacher helped me with my BSc nursing project by teaching me how to structure a research proposal and collect data. Because of her guidance, I completed the project on time and learned research skills.
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Puntuación: 53.0Sugerencia: Give a clear comparative response: state preference (if any) and give specific reason(s). Use linking words such as although or but, and avoid repetition. Keep it to two or three sentences.
Ejemplo: I like both, but I remember my high school teachers more because I was older and had more meaningful academic experiences with them. Although primary teachers were kind, my high school teachers influenced my study choices more.
× Yes, uh, when I was in the sixth standard, uh, data time, Mr. Sunita, uh, she is one of my favorite teacher.
✓ Yes, when I was in the sixth standard, Ms. Sunita was one of my favorite teachers.
Pronoun and title: 'Mr.' is incorrect for a female name 'Sunita' so use 'Ms.'; tense and agreement: student refers to past time so use past tense 'was' not 'is'; singular/plural agreement: 'one of my favorite teacher' should be 'one of my favorite teachers'. Use clearer phrasing and avoid filler words like 'uh'.
× She teach me uh, English grammar and he is very in nice behaviour.
✓ She taught me English grammar and she had very nice behaviour.
Verb tense and form: for past events use past tense 'taught' not 'teach'. Pronoun consistency: 'he' is incorrect for the teacher (female), use 'she'. Word order: 'very in nice behaviour' is incorrect; use 'had very nice behaviour' or better 'was very well-behaved'.
× Yes, of course in future if I have a chance I will definitely make a teacher because I think teacher job is very responsible and and very honest for student.
✓ Yes, of course. In the future, if I have a chance I will definitely become a teacher because I think the teaching job is very responsible and very important for students.
Wrong verb choice: 'make a teacher' is incorrect; use 'become a teacher'. Article and noun forms: 'teacher job' should be 'the teaching job' or 'a teaching job'; 'student' plural 'students'. Word choice: 'honest' is not appropriate for job quality; 'important' or 'responsible' fits better. Add commas and articles for clarity.
× If I have chance I definitely.
✓ If I have the chance, I definitely will.
Incomplete sentence: original lacks object and main verb. Add article 'the' and complete the clause 'I definitely will' or 'I definitely will become a teacher.' Ensure full clause.
× Yes, I remember, uh, when I had in fifth standard, uh, that that day, teacher teacher day, uh, that it.
✓ Yes, I remember. When I was in fifth standard, it was Teacher's Day.
Verb choice and tense: 'had in fifth standard' is incorrect; use 'was in fifth standard'. Sentence structure and clarity: condense to 'it was Teacher's Day' to convey meaning. Use possessive 'Teacher's Day'.
× And uh, that time I mimicry over Sunita, Madam, she, she is my English teacher.
✓ At that time I did a mimicry of Sunita Madam; she was my English teacher.
Verb tense and form: use past 'did a mimicry' not present. Preposition: 'over' is incorrect; use 'of'. Pronoun and tense: 'she is my English teacher' should be 'she was my English teacher' for past time.
× Yes, of course, I definitely touch my primary school teacher on uh Instagram, uh, and Facebook also and see always, uh, see always recall media today, uh, that time I uh, did a many mistakes and he.
✓ Yes, of course. I keep in touch with my primary school teacher on Instagram and Facebook, and I often look back at old posts; at that time I made many mistakes.
Verb choice: 'touch' is wrong; use 'keep in touch' or 'contact'. Tense and aspect: 'see always' should be 'I often look back' or 'I always recall'. Article and quantifier: 'a many mistakes' should be 'many mistakes'. Pronoun 'he' is unclear/incorrect; remove or replace with 'I' or specify person. Clean up filler words.
× I remember when I was in college, uh, I do I did BSc nursing degree that time I confused on making a project.
✓ I remember when I was in college; I was doing a BSc in Nursing and at that time I was confused about how to make a project.
Tense consistency: use past continuous 'was doing' for ongoing study. Article and preposition: 'do I did BSc nursing degree' is incorrect; use 'doing a BSc in Nursing'. Preposition: 'confused on making a project' should be 'confused about how to make a project'.
× Uh, my uh, college teachers help me how to make a project and how it.
✓ My college teachers helped me with how to make a project and how to present it.
Tense and verb form: 'help me' should be past 'helped me' to match past context. Preposition and structure: 'help me how to' is better as 'helped me with how to' or 'taught me how to'. Incomplete phrase 'and how it' needs completion, e.g., 'and how to present it'.
× Usually I uh, I like both primary and secondary school teacher, but I did not clearly remember primary school teacher because that time I was little little child and I clearly remind my secondary school teacher.
✓ Usually I like both my primary and secondary school teachers, but I do not clearly remember my primary school teachers because at that time I was a small child; I clearly remember my secondary school teachers.
Plural and possession: 'school teacher' should be plural 'school teachers' and include possessive 'my'. Tense and verb: 'did not clearly remember' should be present 'do not clearly remember' if speaking now; 'remind' is wrong—use 'remember'. Redundant words: remove repeated 'little'. Ensure consistency and clarity.