Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more natural: start with a concise topic sentence, fix grammar and word choice, and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "spa organizing"). Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I feel more comfortable and less stressed when my home is tidy, so I clean my apartment every weekend. For example, I use storage boxes to organize books and cables, which makes it quicker to find things.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, grammatical answer and provide a clear reason with a specific example. Correct past habit phrasing and clarify unclear phrases (e.g., "bath back wounds" is unintelligible). Use a linking word to connect idea and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. My mother usually cleaned my room when I was small, so I didn’t learn to tidy up consistently. As a result, she often told me to put toys and clothes away after playing.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and describe a clear routine with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and be specific about the method and its benefit. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I follow a simple rule my mother taught me: when I finish studying, I put pens and notebooks back in their designated places. This habit keeps my desk clear and helps me start studying quickly the next time.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific, correctly worded reasons and an example. Fix word choices (e.g., "touch me" -> "taught me", "cutters" -> "clutter") and use linking words for coherence. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because it reduces clutter and saves time. For instance, by always putting my backpack and notebooks in the same place, I can find them quickly before leaving for class.

× Yes, I like to keep things tidy because I feel more comfortable and less stressed when my spa organizing.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy because I feel more comfortable and less stressed when my space is organized.

The original uses 'spa organizing' which is incorrect word choice and structure. 'Space' is the correct noun and 'is organized' uses the passive form to describe the state of the space. Use present simple 'is' + past participle 'organized' to describe a general condition. Suggestion: Say 'when my space is organized' to express the resulting state.

× I usually tidy my apartment every weekend and use the storage box to keep everything neat.

✓ I usually tidy my apartment every weekend and use storage boxes to keep everything neat.

The sentence is mostly correct but 'the storage box' suggests a specific box; using plural 'storage boxes' is more natural for general practice. The verbs 'tidy' and 'use' correctly use present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when speaking generally about tools or items you regularly use.

× I would say maybe no because in my memories my mum usually clean up my bath back wounds and told me to clean up my things.

✓ I would say probably not because in my memories my mum usually cleaned up my bath and back wounds and told me to clean up my things.

Multiple issues: 'maybe no' is informal and awkward; 'probably not' is better. 'in my memories' is nonnative but acceptable; 'usually clean up' should be past 'usually cleaned up' because the context is childhood (past habitual). 'bath back wounds' is unclear—separated into 'bath and back wounds' or likely 'bath and clean my wounds' depending on meaning. Here corrected to 'cleaned up my bath and back wounds' while keeping intended words. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual actions in the past: 'usually cleaned up'.

× I would say maybe no because in my memories my mum usually clean up my bath back wounds and told me to clean up my things.

✓ I would say probably not because in my memories my mum usually cleaned me after baths and cleaned my back wounds, and she told me to clean up my things.

Prepositions and verb constructions were incorrect: 'clean up my bath' is not natural; 'cleaned me after baths' and 'cleaned my back wounds' clarify meaning. Also add 'she' for the subject of 'told'. Suggestion: Be explicit with actions and use natural prepositional phrases like 'after baths'.

× I have a tips which my mum teach me and she told me when I was I was I finished my study. I need to put my pen or notebook into original location then.

✓ I have some tips that my mum taught me when I finished my studies: I need to put my pen or notebook back in their original places.

Multiple structure errors: 'a tips' should be 'some tips'; 'which' better as 'that'; 'teach' should be past 'taught' for a past event; 'when I was I was I finished my study' is garbled — simplified to 'when I finished my studies'. 'put my pen or notebook into original location' should be 'put my pen or notebook back in their original places' and match plural possessive 'their' for multiple items. Suggestion: Use correct article and number agreement ('some tips'), past tense for past events ('taught'), and natural phrasing 'back in their original places'.

× My mum touch me as simple rules when I finish studying. Always put my pants and notebook bag in their original place during this everyday. Keeps my desk organized, reducing cutters and helps me find things quickly when I need them.

✓ My mum taught me some simple rules when I was studying: always put my pants and notebook bag in their original places every day. Keep my desk organized to reduce clutter and help me find things quickly when I need them.

Many errors: 'touch me as simple rules' is incorrect — should be 'taught me some simple rules'. Tense: 'when I finish studying' changed to past progressive 'when I was studying' for the time of learning. 'during this everyday' is wrong — use 'every day'. 'Keeps my desk organized' should be imperative or present simple with subject: 'Keep my desk organized' (imperative) or 'It keeps my desk organized' (declarative). 'reducing cutters' is wrong word 'clutter'. Also ensure parallel structure: 'to reduce clutter and help me'. Suggestion: Use correct verbs ('taught'), correct time expressions ('every day'), correct nouns ('clutter'), and maintain parallel verb forms.