Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and gives reasons, but contains some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Improve grammatical accuracy (e.g., subject-verb agreement, article use, verb forms), tighten phrasing to avoid repetition, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one concise supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like to keep things tidy. When items are organized, I can find what I need quickly, and a tidy room feels more comfortable and relaxing to live in.

Sugerencia: The answer addresses the question and gives an example, but tense and grammar are inconsistent. Use past tense for childhood habits and correct verb forms. Remove duplication and keep it concise. Add a linking word for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My parents always taught me to keep my room tidy because they believed it was a good habit; for example, I would always put my toys back in their place after playing.

Sugerencia: Good practical methods are described, but phrasing is slightly informal and repetitive. Use simple present tense for routines, avoid calling it “my smart way,” and combine points concisely with linking words.

Ejemplo: I usually put items back where they belong after using them, and I also do a thorough tidy-up once a month to keep my study space clean.

Sugerencia: The answer gives an opinion but is unclear and has multiple grammar and word-choice issues. State your position clearly, use correct pronouns and plural forms, and give one clear reason or contrast with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like “original lifestyle.”

Ejemplo: I think it depends on the person. Some people need a tidy room to feel comfortable, while others work fine in a mess, so it comes down to personal preference.

× I do like to keep things tidy because I believe that when things are well organized, it's easy for me to spot all the things that I need immediately.

✓ I do like to keep things tidy because I believe that when things are well organized, it is easy for me to spot everything I need immediately.

Minor stylistic and redundancy issues: 'it's' is acceptable but 'it is' matches formal spoken registers; 'all the things that I need' is wordy and can be simplified to 'everything I need'. No major grammar rule from the list is violated, so keep tense and meaning; suggestion: prefer concise noun phrases to avoid unnecessary articles and relative clauses.

× Besides, I prefer living in a room that is tidy, which makes it looks more comfortable and flexible to live in.

✓ Besides, I prefer living in a room that is tidy, which makes it look more comfortable and more pleasant to live in.

Subject-verb agreement: the relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'living in a tidy room' (or the room), so the verb should be 'look' not 'looks'. Also 'flexible' is not the best adjective for describing a room; 'pleasant' or 'comfortable' works better. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects and choose appropriate adjectives.

× Yes I do. My parents has always teach me to keep my room tidy as it's a really good behavior to to have this habit.

✓ Yes I did. My parents have always taught me to keep my room tidy because it is really good to have this habit.

Tense and agreement errors: the question asks about past habit so use past tense 'did' rather than 'do'. 'Parents' is plural so use 'have' not 'has'. The verb 'teach' should be in past participle 'taught' with 'have' (present perfect) or simple past 'taught'. Also remove duplicate 'to' and replace 'behavior' with 'habit' or rephrase; 'because it is really good to have this habit' is clearer. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.

× For example, I usually put the toys that I've played back to the original place after I've finished using them.

✓ For example, I usually put the toys that I've played with back in their original places after I've finished using them.

Missing preposition after 'played': the correct phrase is 'played with'. Also use 'back in their original places' rather than 'back to the original place' for plurality and natural collocation. The participle 'I've played' is fine when combined with 'with'. Suggestion: remember common verb+preposition combinations and match number (places) to toys (plural).

× My smart way is to put everything that I've used back into its original place.

✓ My usual method is to put everything I have used back in its original place.

Stylistic and form issues: 'My smart way' is unnatural; 'My usual method' or 'I usually put everything I have used back in its original place' is better. Also 'I've used' is fine but 'that' can be omitted: 'everything I have used'. Suggestion: prefer natural collocations and omit unnecessary relative pronouns.

× At the same time, I will tidy my room once a month in order to keep it clean and tidy.

✓ At the same time, I tidy my room once a month to keep it clean and tidy.

When describing habitual actions, use the present simple ('I tidy') rather than 'will'. 'Will' suggests a future intention rather than a routine. Suggestion: use present simple for regular habits.

× I don't think it's necessary, but it depends on one's own decision.

✓ I don't think it's necessary, but it depends on each person's decision.

Awkward phrase 'one's own decision'; 'each person's decision' is clearer. Grammar is acceptable otherwise. Suggestion: prefer natural possessive expressions.

× Someone feels that a tidy room makes it more comfortable to live in, while some things that a messy room is still OK as they will not affect their own their original lifestyle.

✓ Some people feel that a tidy room makes it more comfortable to live in, while others think that a messy room is still OK because it does not affect their original lifestyle.

Multiple errors: 'Someone' should be 'Some people' for generalization; 'some things that a messy room' is ungrammatical—use 'others think that a messy room...' Pronoun repetition 'their own their' is incorrect. Replace 'their original lifestyle' with 'their usual lifestyle' or 'original lifestyle'. Suggestion: use consistent plural forms for general statements and avoid duplicated words; ensure clauses are parallel and coherent.

× So just go for the most comfortable way.

✓ So just choose the option that is most comfortable for you.

Stylistic/clarity: 'go for the most comfortable way' is understandable but awkward. 'Choose the option that is most comfortable for you' is clearer and addresses the listener. Suggestion: be specific and use natural collocations.