Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng ban đầu (topic sentence), tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai; rút gọn câu cho tự nhiên (không quá 5 câu) và dùng từ vựng phù hợp, cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ sửa lỗi như “It's tidy” không rõ chủ ngữ, “dirty thing type” sai cấu trúc, “look it in my closet” cần là “find it in my closet”. Thêm liên từ khi đưa ví dụ (for example, for instance) để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I like keeping things tidy because it makes it much easier to find items when I need them. For example, if I put dirty items straight into the trash or laundry basket, I save time searching later. Also, an organized closet means I can quickly find my uniform.

Sugerencia: Cần chú ý ngữ pháp (used to + verb), từ vựng chính xác (dream → room), động từ chia đúng (make → made), và tránh liệt kê quá dài không cần thiết. Giữ tối đa 3 câu: khẳng định quá khứ, mô tả vài hành động cụ thể, và kết luận ngắn. Dùng linking words như “for example” hoặc “often” để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child. I often made my bed, swept the floor, and wiped the windows. For example, I would organize my toys into boxes so everything had its place.

Sugerencia: Cần tránh trả lời lộn xộn, loại bỏ tiếng ấp úng (“umm”) và mô tả phương pháp sạch sẽ, hợp lý. Trả lời trực tiếp với cấu trúc rõ ràng: topic sentence + 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (cloth, disinfect, wipe, surface). Nếu dùng đồ lau phải là đồ sạch, nêu tần suất hoặc bước cụ thể.

Ejemplo: I keep my study space tidy by regularly wiping surfaces with a clean cloth and disinfectant. First I remove any rubbish, then I dust the desk and wipe it with soapy water or a disinfectant spray, and finally I organize my books and stationery in trays.

Sugerencia: Tránh lặp từ và cấu trúc vụng về; sửa ngữ pháp (it help → it helps), dùng danh sách ngắn gọn với liên từ để rõ ràng (for example, because). Nên đưa 2–3 lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn để minh họa.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe being tidy is important because it makes it easier to find things and reduces stress. It also promotes good hygiene and can help prevent illnesses; for example, regularly cleaning surfaces lowers the risk of infections.

× It's tidy. I like to keep things tidy because I can search things very easily and I love cleaning.

✓ It's tidy. I like to keep things tidy because I can find things very easily and I love cleaning.

'Search things' is unnatural and incorrect collocation in English; the correct verb is 'find' when referring to locating items. Keep 'very easily' after the verb for natural adverb placement.

× For example, if I see dirty thing type put it in the trash can or if I search for my uniform I can just look it in my closet.

✓ For example, if I see dirty things I put them in the trash can, or if I am looking for my uniform I can just look in my closet.

Multiple issues: 'dirty thing type' is incorrect; use plural 'dirty things'. Pronoun reference: use 'them' to refer to 'things'. 'Search for' is okay but 'look for' or 'look' in this context should be 'look in my closet'. Use progressive 'am looking' for a current action. Also remove redundant 'just' placement after 'can'.

× I used to keep my dream tidy as a child.

✓ I used to keep my room tidy as a child.

This is a word choice error: 'dream' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'room'. This is not a tense error; use the original past construction 'used to' to describe habitual past actions.

× I often make the beds, clean the room, clean the closets, clean the floor, wipe the window, etcetera.

✓ I often made the bed, cleaned the room, cleaned the closets, cleaned the floor, wiped the windows, etcetera.

The question asked about childhood habits ('Did you use to...'), so the actions should be in the past habitual form. Use past simple verbs to match 'used to' and ensure number agreement: 'make the bed' (singular) or 'made the beds' if multiple beds; 'wipe the windows' (plural) if multiple windows.

× I do many things to make my room as tidy as sport.

✓ I did many things to keep my room tidy when I was a child.

The original phrase 'as tidy as sport' is nonsensical. Replace with a clear past-tense clause 'did many things' and 'keep my room tidy' to match the intended meaning and tense.

× Umm I use umm dirty clothes to wipe the table and chairs and then wash them with soap and then umm wipe them again.

✓ I use old clothes to wipe the table and chairs, then wash them with soap and wipe them again.

'Dirty clothes' used for wiping is understandable but 'old clothes' or 'rags' is more natural. Pronoun 'them' correctly refers to the clothes, but simplify the clause order for fluency. Keep present tense if describing routine.

× Yes, it is. I think it help us search things better, remember things, it helps us with cleanliness, hygiene etcetera and not touching with diseases for example like infections et cetera.

✓ Yes, it is. I think it helps us find things more easily and remember them; it also helps with cleanliness and hygiene and prevents diseases such as infections.

'I think it help' has a subject-verb agreement error: with subject 'it' the verb must be 'helps'. 'Search things' should be 'find things' and 'more easily' is the natural adverb phrase. 'Remember things' should be 'remember them' to avoid repetition. 'Not touching with diseases' is incorrect; use 'prevents diseases' and give 'such as infections' as an example.