Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct grammar and a clear topic sentence. Start with a direct answer, then give one or two specific reasons. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “I’m really into keeping things tidy,” “my parents always told me,” “it makes me feel a sense of control”). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m really into keeping things tidy because my parents taught me to be organized when I was young. For example, a clean room helps me find things quickly, and it makes me feel calm and in control.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific supporting details. Remove fillers (uh, I) and fix tense and phrase errors: “I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child,” “I would make my bed after waking up,” “put toys and clothes away.” Use linking words like “so” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child because my parents encouraged me to be organized. For example, I would make my bed every morning and always put my toys and clothes away so the room stayed neat.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement about your routine, use correct verb forms and specific actions. Remove hesitations and be coherent: “I usually put away items not related to my work, wipe the desk, and water my plants.” Use linking words such as “also” or “for example” to connect actions and explain why they help concentration.

Ejemplo: I usually keep my study space tidy by putting away anything not related to studying. I also wipe the desk regularly and water my plants; these habits help me concentrate and keep the area pleasant.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion sentence and one or two concise reasons with examples. Fix grammar: “I think being tidy is necessary because a neat space helps me focus.” Complete the sentence about the sense you get (e.g., “sense of calm or control”). Avoid repetition and trailing off.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because a neat space helps me focus on my tasks. For instance, when my desk is organized I feel calm and more productive.

× Yes I'm really into keep things tidy because it's my parents always told me that since I was a child and also I find that to keep things tidy can always makes me feel the sense of controlling that will really.

✓ Yes, I'm really into keeping things tidy because my parents always told me that since I was a child, and I find that keeping things tidy always makes me feel a sense of control.

Use gerund after 'into' and after verbs like 'find' when followed by an action (keeping). Remove unnecessary 'it's' and correct 'makes' subject to 'keeping things tidy' (singular activity) so 'makes' is correct; change 'the sense of controlling' to 'a sense of control' for natural phrasing. Also combine clauses with commas and remove extra words. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× Yes, I, I used to keep my room tidy as when I was a kid because, uh, my parents always encouraged me to be organized and so I keep a habit like make my bed after I waking and also put away my.

✓ Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a kid because my parents always encouraged me to be organized, so I developed the habit of making my bed after I woke up and putting my things away.

Use 'used to' plus base verb to describe past habit (kept/used to keep). 'Keep a habit' is incorrect; use 'developed the habit of' plus gerund 'making'. 'After I waking' is wrong tense and form; use past 'woke up'. Finish the sentence by specifying 'putting my things away'. This corrects past tense and gerund usage. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Uh, in my study space, I often doing something like put away, uh, the items not doing with studying to make me more concentrate. And on my workspace, I often wipe the desks and watering my plants and that told.

✓ In my study space, I often do things like put away items not related to studying to help me concentrate. On my workspace, I often wipe the desk and water my plants.

Use base verb 'do' with 'often' (I often do), not 'I often doing'. Use 'items not related to studying' instead of 'items not doing with studying'. 'To make me more concentrate' should be 'to help me concentrate'. Use base verbs 'wipe' and 'water' in simple present for habitual actions. Remove unclear fragment 'and that told'. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× Yes, for me I think keep tidy is really necessary because a neat space will always make me focus on what I'm really doing and also when I'm when I can keep things tidy I often get a sense of.

✓ Yes, for me I think keeping things tidy is really necessary because a neat space always helps me focus on what I'm doing, and when I can keep things tidy I often get a sense of satisfaction.

Use gerund 'keeping things tidy' after 'think'. 'Will always make me focus' is awkward; use 'helps me focus' for present habitual effect. Remove duplicated 'when I'm when I'. Complete the sentence with a noun like 'satisfaction' or 'control' to convey the sense. This addresses incorrect verb form and sentence incompleteness. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)