Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar, and give one specific reason or brief example. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use linking words for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I like to keep my surroundings tidy because it helps me feel calm and focused. For example, I clean my desk every evening so I can start work the next day without distractions.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear, grammatical topic sentence and one specific memory or example. Remove hesitations and redundant phrases. Use a linking word to connect the memory to the reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mother always encouraged me to tidy my room every day, so I learned discipline early on; for example, I used to put my toys in labeled boxes before bedtime to avoid clutter and stay focused on homework.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer with a topic sentence followed by 1–2 specific methods. Eliminate repetition and filler words; use linking words (first, then, finally) to structure steps.

Ejemplo: I keep my study space tidy by removing unnecessary items first. Then I dust and wipe the surface and put stationery in a pen holder so everything is easy to find.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct opinion with one or two concise reasons and avoid repetition and fillers. Use linking words (because, moreover) and a specific consequence or example to support your view.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe it is necessary because being tidy improves efficiency and creates a good impression. For instance, a tidy appearance and workspace often makes others see you as more professional and reliable.

× I believe that keep things tidy always uh, present a person's nature.

✓ I believe that keeping things tidy always presents a person's nature.

The sentence has a verb form and subject-verb agreement issue. 'Keep' should be in the -ing form after 'believe that' when expressing a general action as a noun phrase ('keeping things tidy'). Also the subject 'keeping things tidy' is singular, so the verb must be 'presents' not 'present'. Suggestion: use a gerund for actions after 'believe that' and ensure the verb agrees with the singular subject.

× Yes, I vividly remember my mother, uh, right from my childhood, uh, told me about to make things keeps, keep things tidy, uh, because uh, uh, it, it will uh, help us to uh, be disciplined and uh, uh, avoid distractions that are caused by the, uh, mess that is around us.

✓ Yes, I vividly remember my mother from my childhood telling me to keep things tidy because it would help us be disciplined and avoid distractions caused by the mess around us.

Multiple issues: 'told me about to make things' is incorrect—use 'telling me to keep things tidy' or 'told me to keep things tidy'. 'Keeps' is wrong form; use base form 'keep' after 'to'. 'It will help us' in a recalled past context is better as 'it would help us' to match the past narration, though 'will' is acceptable if stating general truth; here 'would' aligns with 'remember'. Remove redundant fillers and fix word order. Suggestion: use 'telling me to keep' or 'told me to keep' and match tense consistently.

× Well I I just removed the extra things that are that lie on my study table along with it I tried to dust or wipe off the mess or dust that is that accumulate on the table just to make the make it tidy and look clean.

✓ Well, I usually remove the extra things that lie on my study table; I also try to dust or wipe off the dust that accumulates on the table to make it tidy and look clean.

The original mixes past and habitual actions inconsistently ('just removed' vs habitual meaning). For a description of typical behavior use present simple: 'I usually remove' or 'I remove'. Remove duplicated words and fix verb agreement: 'that accumulate' should be 'that accumulates' if referring to 'dust' (singular), or rephrase to 'the dust that accumulates'. Suggestion: choose present simple for routine actions and ensure subject-verb agreement and concise wording.

× Yes, definitely. This is something that one Defi UH-1 should not avoid Uh, to be tidy uh, is, uh, is a, is a kind of thing that enhances the person's personality in a very uh, better way.

✓ Yes, definitely. Being tidy is something one should not avoid; it is a quality that enhances a person's personality.

Problems include awkward structure and unnecessary fillers. 'To be tidy is a kind of thing' is ungrammatical—use the gerund 'Being tidy' as the subject. 'The person's personality' should be 'a person's personality' for general statements (article error). 'In a very better way' is incorrect: use 'in a better way' or simply 'enhances a person's personality'. Suggestion: use gerunds to form subjects and use 'a' for general nouns; avoid redundant comparative words.

× Other than that, uh, uh, being, uh, keeping things, uh, keep keeping things tidy, always present ourselves.

✓ Other than that, keeping things tidy always presents us well.

This sentence has redundant and incorrect verb forms ('being, keeping things, keep keeping') and incorrect verb choice 'present ourselves' in context. Use 'keeping things tidy' (gerund phrase) and a correct verb-object structure: 'presents us well' or 'gives a good impression'. Also avoid unnecessary fillers. Suggestion: simplify to 'keeping things tidy always presents us well' or 'helps us make a good impression'.