Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "at a car" → "at a garage" or "in a car workshop"). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like to keep things tidy. For example, at the garage where I work, I ask colleagues to return tools after use so we can find them quickly when it gets busy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with correct past tense and a clear contrast between past and present. Use linking words (e.g., "but", "however", "since") and provide one specific reason or example. Fix grammar: "when I was a child", "I didn't always keep my room tidy", "when I grew up".

Ejemplo: No, I didn't always keep my room tidy when I was a child. However, when I grew up I started keeping things organized because it made it much easier to find my belongings.

× Yes, I do like to keep things like tidy because especially when I work, I would like everyone to take something and put something back all the time because it's make easy for us to do the thing when it's busy because I work at a car.

✓ Yes, I do like to keep things tidy because, especially when I work, I would like everyone to take things and put them back all the time, because it makes it easier for us to do our work when it is busy; I work at a car repair shop.

The original sentence uses incorrect and unclear pronouns and noun phrases (e.g., 'things like tidy', 'take something and put something back', 'it's make easy', 'do the thing', 'I work at a car'). Replace vague 'something' with 'things' and use consistent pronouns ('them') to refer back to plural objects. Correct 'it's make easy' to 'it makes it easier' and specify the workplace with a natural phrase 'car repair shop'. Also adjust punctuation and word order for clarity.

× Yes, I do like to keep things like tidy because especially when I work, I would like everyone to take something and put something back all the time because it's make easy for us to do the thing when it's busy because I work at a car.

✓ Yes, I do like to keep things tidy because, especially when I am working, I would like everyone to take things and put them back all the time, because it makes it easier for us to do our work when it is busy; I work at a car repair shop.

Use the progressive form 'I am working' to describe typical ongoing situations at work. 'Do the thing' is unnatural; replace with 'do our work'. Progressive form clarifies the time frame and improves grammaticality.

× Yes, I do like to keep things like tidy because especially when I work, I would like everyone to take something and put something back all the time because it's make easy for us to do the thing when it's busy because I work at a car.

✓ Yes, I do like to keep things tidy because, especially when I work, I would like everyone to take things and put them back all the time, because it makes it easier for us to do our work when it is busy; I work at a car repair shop.

The verb 'make' must agree with the third-person singular subject 'it'. Change 'it's make easy' to 'it makes it easier'. Also add 'it' before 'easier' for correct grammar.

× No I did not when I was child I not always keep the room tidy but when I grow up I would like to keep everything tidy because make me easy to find things when it's.

✓ No, I did not. When I was a child I did not always keep my room tidy, but when I grew up I wanted to keep everything tidy because it made it easier for me to find things.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood: 'I was a child' should be 'I was a child' or 'When I was a child'; 'I not always keep' should be 'I did not always keep'; 'when I grow up' should be 'when I grew up'; 'would like' becomes 'wanted' for past preference; 'make me easy' must be 'made it easier for me'. These changes correct tense and phrasing.

× No I did not when I was child I not always keep the room tidy but when I grow up I would like to keep everything tidy because make me easy to find things when it's.

✓ No, I did not. When I was a child I did not always keep my room tidy, but when I grew up I wanted to keep everything tidy because it made it easier for me to find things.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. Use 'a child'. Also use 'my room' instead of 'the room' for natural possession. These article changes improve grammaticality and naturalness.

× No I did not when I was child I not always keep the room tidy but when I grow up I would like to keep everything tidy because make me easy to find things when it's.

✓ No, I did not. When I was a child I did not always keep my room tidy, but when I grew up I wanted to keep everything tidy because it made it easier for me to find things.

The original run-on sentence lacks necessary punctuation and has poor clause boundaries. Split into two or more sentences and reorder phrases for clarity: 'No, I did not.' then 'When I was a child, I did not always keep my room tidy.' then 'But when I grew up, I wanted...'. Proper punctuation and clause separation make the meaning clear.