Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and clear but has some grammar errors and could be more natural and concise. Use present-tense consistency, correct subject-verb agreement, and a linking word to connect idea and example. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., “find them” instead of “find it”). Keep it to two or three sentences for naturalness.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Being organized improves my efficiency, so I always put my clothes in specific places; that way I can find them immediately when I need them.

Sugerencia: Good content and personal detail, but grammar and tense consistency need improvement. Use past tense for childhood habits and correct verb forms. Make sentences shorter and add a linking word to show cause and effect. Be specific about frequency or examples to enrich the answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mother always told me to keep my room tidy so I could concentrate on my studies, and over time I developed the habit of cleaning my room regularly, usually once a week.

× Yes, because being organized helped me improve my efficiency.

✓ Yes, because being organized helps me improve my efficiency.

The original sentence uses 'helped' (past simple) while the context is a general statement about a current effect of being organized. This is a tense error that fits under past participle / past-tense related problems. Change to 'helps' (present simple) to match the general present-tense meaning: use present tense for habitual or general truths. Suggestion: Use present simple for general facts (being organized helps me).

× For example, I always put my clothes in certain places so that I can find it immediately when I need it.

✓ For example, I always put my clothes in certain places so that I can find them immediately when I need them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'clothes' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'them' to agree with the plural antecedent. Also change the second 'it' to 'them' for consistency. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents: clothes -> them.

× Yes, because my mom always tell me to keep my room tidy so that I can focus on my study and as time goes by I build up a hobby of cleaning out my room regularly since I was a child.

✓ Yes, because my mom always told me to keep my room tidy so that I could focus on my studies, and over time I developed a habit of cleaning my room regularly since I was a child.

There are multiple problems: 'tell' should be past tense 'told' to match 'since I was a child' (sequence of time), which also addresses third person singular 'tell' incorrectly used with 'my mom'. 'Can' becomes 'could' for past reference. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to academic work. 'Build up a hobby' is unnatural; use 'developed a habit'. 'Cleaning out my room regularly' is acceptable but 'cleaning my room regularly' is more natural. Ensure tense consistency: past references require past verbs. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent when describing past habits (use past simple) and use natural collocations: 'developed a habit' and 'my studies'.