Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using simple linking words. Correct tense and plural forms (e.g. "liked", "kids", "life") and avoid redundancy (don’t repeat the same word). Keep it under 4–5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I often went to the local park with my parents because it had a playground and lots of space to run. Also, I enjoyed the sunshine and meeting other children, which made those visits fun and memorable.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence and then one clear reason with specific detail. Remove filler sounds ("umm") and fix grammar ("my dog needs fresh air", "I enjoy going with my dog"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep it concise and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but now I usually go with my dog because he needs exercise and fresh air. I like watching him play and meeting other dog owners, which makes the visits more social and enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give one or two specific reasons using clear linking phrases (e.g. "because", "for example"). Correct grammar and word choice ("Singapore is known as a green city", "parks help people relax and reduce work stress"). Avoid hesitations and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. Parks are important because they provide green spaces where people can relax and reduce stress from work. For example, in Singapore many parks help residents exercise, enjoy nature, and feel calmer in the city.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer followed by a specific reason or detail about the park you want to visit. Avoid unrelated jokes unless you connect them clearly to your point. Use correct phrasing ("I've heard that in Central Park you might see wealthy people, which illustrates how popular it is"). Keep it natural and informative.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York because I’ve heard it is huge and very diverse, with many events and scenic spots. People often say you can meet interesting people there, which makes it sound vibrant and worth visiting.

× I think every kid like to share this live lifetime with their parents in park.

✓ I think every kid likes to share this life with their parents in the park.

Subject 'every kid' is singular and requires singular verb 'likes' (subject-verb agreement). 'Live lifetime' is redundant/incorrect; use 'life'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'park' for a specific place. Suggestion: use 'every kid likes' and simplify 'live lifetime' to 'life' and add 'the park'.

× There is sunshine there, sunshine and other kids and many facilities can play.

✓ There is sunshine, other children, and many facilities to play on.

List coordination and quantifier usage are incorrect. 'Other kids' is fine but better as 'other children' to match register. 'Many facilities can play' is ungrammatical; facilities are for people to use, so use an infinitive phrase 'facilities to play on' or 'play with'. Also remove redundant 'there' after 'There is sunshine' or combine items with commas.

× So I think everyone like it, including me.

✓ So I think everyone likes it, including me.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'likes'. Use 'likes' for subject-verb agreement.

× Umm, it's different feelings.

✓ Umm, it feels different.

'Different feelings' is awkward for expressing current perception. Use a present-tense verb 'feels' with 'it' to describe how something seems now. This corrects tense and collocation.

× Umm, I still love, love to go to park, but now I love to go to park with my dog.

✓ Umm, I still love to go to the park, but now I like to go to the park with my dog.

Use the definite article 'the' before 'park'. Repetition 'love, love to go' is conversational filler; simplify. Also maintain consistent present tense: 'love to go' is acceptable but 'like to go' is also natural; ensure article usage.

× My dog need to breathe, need to have some have some sunshine and also you need to smell with other peoples, uh, people's dogs.

✓ My dog needs fresh air and some sunshine, and he also needs to sniff other people's dogs.

Subject 'my dog' is third person singular and requires 'needs'. 'Breathe' should be 'fresh air' as a noun phrase; 'have some have some sunshine' is repetitive. 'You need to smell with other peoples' is incorrect pronoun and verb choice; use 'sniff other people's dogs'. Use singular possessive 'people's' and avoid double words.

× So I love go outside with.

✓ So I love going outside with him.

Sentence is missing a verb form and an object. Use the gerund 'going' after 'love' and supply the object 'him' (referring to the dog) to complete the sentence.

× Yeah, I think so. Like, you know, Singapore ha has a green city as a very well known worldwide.

✓ Yeah, I think so. Singapore is known worldwide as a very green city.

Word order and verb usage are incorrect: 'ha has' is a mistake; use 'is'. 'A green city as a very well known worldwide' is awkward; use 'known worldwide as a very green city'. This fixes adjective order and passive construction.

× I think park is very important for a country.

✓ I think parks are very important for a country.

Use plural 'parks' for a general statement, and add plural verb agreement 'are'. Also include article if singular: 'The park is very important' or better general 'Parks are very important'.

× If we see a lot of leaves, we can make us more relaxed, avoid some pressure from work.

✓ If we see a lot of trees or greenery, we can feel more relaxed and avoid some pressure from work.

'A lot of leaves' is unnatural to refer to parks; use 'trees' or 'greenery'. 'We can make us more relaxed' is incorrect reflexive structure; use 'we can feel more relaxed'. Add conjunction 'and' to connect clauses and smooth the sentence.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?

Original question is fine, but more polite and natural in context is 'would like to go to'. This adjusts modal usage for future intention.

× I heard a lot about Central Park in New York.

✓ I have heard a lot about Central Park in New York.

Simple past 'I heard' is acceptable, but present perfect 'I have heard' better indicates unspecified time and recent or general knowledge. Article use is correct.

× I heard a joke like this. You drag there every 5 seconds, you will meet a millionaire.

✓ I heard a joke: If you walk there every five seconds, you'll meet a millionaire.

Original uses 'drag' incorrectly; probably means 'walk' or 'go'. Conditional structure needs 'if' and proper tense: 'If you walk there every five seconds, you'll meet a millionaire.' Use contraction 'you'll' or 'you will' for future. Also write numbers as words in speech transcripts: 'five'.