Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Correct grammar (use past simple correctly) and avoid sentence fragments. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to make it coherent (e.g., because, so, instead).

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have many chances to go to parks when I was a child because there wasn’t a park in my village. The nearest park was in town, so we had to take a tricycle for about 20 minutes. Instead, I usually played with the children in my neighborhood.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and natural expressions for feelings, avoid awkward phrases like “it really has a good five.” Give one clear reason and an example. Use linking words (because, when, so) and correct verb forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax. When I walk around the park, I feel refreshed and less stressed, so I often go there to clear my mind.

Sugerencia: Use correct collocations (e.g., “one of my hobbies”), and give specific reasons why more parks would help (recreation, environment). Keep answers concise and coherent with linking words like because or so.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. It is one of my hobbies to explore the city’s parks, so more parks would give me and others more places to enjoy the view and fresh air.

Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatically correct and slightly more specific by naming a park or city. Use linking words (for example, especially) and correct verb forms (e.g., “I want to visit”).

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many parks I want to visit in the future, especially in South Korea. For example, I’d love to see Nami Island because parks shown in K-dramas look very beautiful, and I’m excited to experience that scenery in person.

× No, I didn't had a chance to go to the park because there wasn't one in my village. I lived in.

✓ No, I didn't have a chance to go to the park because there wasn't one in the village where I lived.

When using did/didn't for past tense, the main verb must be in base form. 'Didn’t had' is incorrect; use 'didn’t have'. Also combined two sentence fragments into one clear clause: 'the village where I lived' improves cohesion and avoids a sentence fragment.

× A small barangay in the nearest park was in town, so we had to take a tricycle for about 20 minutes to get there.

✓ The nearest park was in town about 20 minutes away by tricycle.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and an extra noun 'barangay' placed awkwardly. The corrected sentence fixes structure and expresses distance and transport clearly. Keep vocabulary consistent with context (omit unnecessary 'barangay' if referring to village).

× Instead, I usually played with my neighbors in the neighborhood.

✓ Instead, I usually played with my neighbors in the neighborhood when I was a child.

The adverb 'usually' can be used with past habit but needs time reference; adding 'when I was a child' clarifies timeframe and aligns tense. Alternatively use 'I usually play' for present habits.

× Yes, absolutely. I like going to parks now.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I like going to parks now.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed; included here to show it matches present tense usage for current preference.

× I am so feeling relaxed.

✓ I feel very relaxed.

'So feeling' is unidiomatic. Use the stative verb 'feel' with an adverb: 'feel very relaxed' or 'feel so relaxed'. Avoid continuous 'am feeling' with 'so' in this structure unless saying 'I am feeling relaxed'.

× Whenever I walked around the park I felt so refreshed and it really has a good five.

✓ Whenever I walk around the park I feel refreshed and it really has a good vibe.

Tense should match habitual present if describing current experience: use present simple 'walk' and 'feel'. The phrase 'good five' is incorrect; likely intended 'good vibe'. Also remove 'so' before 'refreshed' for formality or keep 'so' if desired.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

'I like to see' implies general enjoyment; to express desire or preference for future development, use 'would like' or 'want'. 'Would like' is more polite and appropriate for this context.

× It's actually one of my hobby to learn about the city and visit the parks.

✓ It's actually one of my hobbies to learn about the city and visit parks.

Use plural 'hobbies' after 'one of' and remove article before 'parks' when speaking generally. Also 'visit parks' is more natural than 'visit the parks' unless specific parks are meant.

× I am so really interested about parks and the view of the city.

✓ I am really interested in parks and the city's view.

Use preposition 'interested in', not 'interested about'. 'So really' is redundant; 'really' alone suffices. 'The view of the city' can be made concise as 'the city's view' or 'the views of the city'.

× Yes, there are a lot of parks I want to go in the future, especially outside the country.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of parks I want to visit in the future, especially abroad.

Use verb 'visit' rather than 'go' with 'parks'. 'In the future' follows 'visit' or can be placed at end; 'abroad' is a succinct alternative to 'outside the country'.

× Those parks as seen in K dramas, Korean movies, they were really beautiful and I'm so excited to visit one of them.

✓ The parks I have seen in K-dramas and Korean movies are really beautiful, and I'm excited to visit one of them.

Use present perfect 'have seen' to refer to experiences up to now; reorder sentence to avoid awkward 'as seen' placement. 'So excited' can be 'excited' or kept for emphasis; 'K-dramas' is standard punctuation.