Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and repeated phrases. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. The parks in my town had colourful playgrounds and many different trees and flowers, so my friends and I often spent afternoons playing on the swings and exploring the gardens.

Sugerencia: Give a clear main idea then support with two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, relative pronouns) and avoid repetition. Use varied vocabulary for 'relax' and 'exercise'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because their greenery helps me relax and clear my mind. Also, I can exercise there—I usually jog or do stretching—which leaves me feeling physically refreshed and mentally calmer.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give two concrete benefits with linking words. Fix word choice and avoid vague phrases. Use concise expressions like 'green spaces' and 'community hub'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and make neighbourhoods more pleasant. They also act as community hubs where people can walk, exercise, and socialise.

Sugerencia: Be specific about which park and why. Use correct future expressions and prepositions (abroad, in London). Give one or two clear reasons and avoid vague phrasing like 'first in future'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I'd like to visit some famous parks abroad, such as Hyde Park in London, to see how they are organised and what facilities they offer. I'm also curious to observe how local people use the parks for leisure and exercise.

× Yes, I like to, to go to park as a child because in our country the parks are full of playground, various type of trees and flowers.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because in our country the parks are full of playgrounds and various types of trees and flowers.

The context refers to a past habit, so the past tense 'liked' is required instead of present 'like'. Also plural nouns are needed: 'parks' (general) and 'playgrounds' and 'types' should be plural to match 'various'. Use 'going to parks' or 'going to the park' consistently. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits (liked, went) and pluralize countable nouns.

× And when I go, I, uh, went to the park.

✓ And when I went, I went to the park.

Sentence mixes present 'go' with past 'went'. Maintain past tense for past events: use 'went'. Also avoid repetition: better 'When I was a child, I went to the park.' Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and simplify structure.

× I went with my, uh, friends and used to.

✓ I went with my friends and we used to go together.

Original phrase 'used to' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb form. Also extra comma disrupts flow. Correct structure is 'we used to go' to indicate habitual past action. Ensure subject and verb agree and the phrase is complete.

× Yes, I still like going to the park because the park is full of greenery and it can relax our mind and refresh our mind also and we I can exercise there there and my body is feel relaxed mind become also relax.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because it is full of greenery and it can relax and refresh the mind; I can exercise there and my body and mind feel relaxed.

Sentence contains tense and grammatical errors. Replace redundant 'the park is full of greenery' with 'it is full of greenery'. Use infinitives or simple verbs 'relax and refresh the mind'. Remove duplicated words and correct 'my body is feel' to 'my body feel' (or better 'my body and mind feel relaxed'). Keep present tense for habitual present actions.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because parks make the cities full of greenery and it it became a heart of a city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks make cities full of greenery and they become the heart of a city.

Use plural or general nouns consistently: 'parks make cities' (general statement) and use plural subject 'they' to refer to parks. 'Became' is past; use 'become' for general present. Also use definite article 'the heart of a city' to indicate a specific role.

× People can go there and do their exercise like brick bricks exercise or walking and feel.

✓ People can go there to exercise, for example by doing brisk walking or other activities, and feel good.

Original 'do their exercise like brick bricks exercise' is incorrect. Use 'go there to exercise' and 'brisk walking' (adjective 'brisk' describes walking). Prepositions: 'do exercise' or 'go there to exercise'. Add result 'and feel good' to complete idea.

× Yes, I want to go first in future with situated in the abroad because I want to know other facilities available in the parks we situated in abroad like parks in the UK, London.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to go abroad first because I want to learn about the facilities available in parks abroad, such as parks in London, UK.

Use proper future time phrase 'in the future' and correct preposition 'abroad' without 'the'. Word order 'go abroad first' is clearer. 'Situated in the abroad' is incorrect — use 'parks abroad' or 'parks in London'. Maintain infinitive 'want to go' for future intentions.

× And so look, I want to know the about people who go there.

✓ I also want to learn about the people who go there.

Remove filler 'look' and incorrect article 'the about'. Use 'learn about' or 'know about' plus 'the people who go there'. Pronoun and article use must be corrected for clarity.