Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct article use and tense, and add one short supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to visit the local park every weekend because it had a playground and lots of open space. As a result, I learned to ride a bike there and spent time with my friends.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and repetitive phrases. Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with 1–2 specific activities and a linking word to connect ideas. Use varied vocabulary (e.g. picnic, unwind) instead of repeating 'family' and 'relax'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. When I visit them now, I usually have a picnic with my family and play games with my children, so it’s a great way to unwind outdoors.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and fix incorrect phrases. Provide a direct response about wanting more parks, then give a clear reason and plan using linking words. Avoid unclear words like 'call' here and correct grammar (e.g. 'haven’t been to any parks yet').

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide recreational space for families. Currently I haven’t visited any parks in this new country, but once I can drive easily I plan to visit nearby parks at weekends.

Sugerencia: Make a coherent statement: answer directly and give a specific example or reason. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. If you don't know names, say you want to explore local parks and explain why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to explore a few parks in the area even though I don’t know their names yet. For example, I’d like to visit the largest city park to see its botanical garden and walking trails when I get the chance.

× Yes, I used to go to park often in the weekend.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the park often on weekends.

The noun 'park' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place type in general conversation: 'go to the park'. 'Weekend' should be plural 'weekends' to express a habitual action, and the preposition 'on' is correct with days and 'weekends'. Suggestion: use 'go to the park' and 'on weekends' for habitual past actions.

× Uh, yes, uh, when we go to the park, I prefer uh, to rest and eat something with my family and play with my family and just relax.

✓ Uh, yes. When we go to the park, I prefer to rest, eat something, play with my family, and just relax.

Sentence needs punctuation and parallel structure. 'Prefer to rest and eat something with my family and play with my family' repeats 'with my family' unnecessarily. Maintain parallel verb forms after 'prefer' (infinitive phrases): 'to rest, eat..., play...'. Also add commas to separate items. Suggestion: use parallel infinitives and remove repetition for clarity.

× Yes, in my new, uh, my new country, I haven't uh, gone to park until now, but when I can drive, I will call. I will go to park in the weekend.

✓ Yes, in my new country I haven't gone to the park yet, but when I can drive I will go. I will go to the park on the weekend.

Several issues: 'gone to park' requires 'the park' (article) and 'yet' is the correct adverb with present perfect to indicate up to now. 'When I can drive, I will call' is unclear; likely intended 'I will go' rather than 'call'. Keep future tense simple 'I will go'. Use 'on the weekend' or 'at the weekend' depending on dialect; 'on the weekend' is acceptable. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'yet' and include definite article 'the park', and simplify future clause to 'I will go'.

× Yes, when when it parks I went to go, but I don't know the name of the parks, so I will go someday.

✓ Yes, there is a park I want to go to, but I don't know the park's name, so I will go someday.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'When when it parks I went to go' is incorrect structure. Clarify intention: if student means 'there is a park I want to visit', use 'there is a park I want to go to'. Use singular 'park's name' or 'the park's name' rather than 'the parks' if referring to one. Suggestion: restate clearly with 'there is a park I want to go to' and 'I don't know the name of the park'.